Annonymous

[oggbashan]

PCs from Anon have been good to my Halloween entries.

OK, one didn't like the 50-word format but that's fair comment.

Og

 

[Aurora Black]

On Bitter Harvest:

Oh my god!!!
10/07/06 By: Anonymous in USA

This is one of the BEST stories i have read on Lit thus far...it made me laugh, it made me yearn for a love so great that you would move heaven and earth to have it, and it is the only story to make me cry!!! Aurora...your characters came alive and the whole thing just flowed so good from beginning to end...excellent work!!!

*reaches for more tissues*

Thank you. You're very kind.

 

[SweetWitch]

On The Riverside

Beautiful Twist of Truth
10/07/06 by Anonymous in Maryland
You have expressed one of my realities. After 13 years she still loves me in my dream world. Thank you!

Aw, shucks. Thanks.

 

[SweetWitch]

On The Troll Hunter

How True
10/08/06 By: Anonymous in USA
I think the trolls need to be stuffed in a cave and gassed. Total spineless and weak souls who have too much free time on their hands.

Very well spoken...

 

[Boxlicker101]

Here is a nice, intellectual comment I received last month:

Sticking cock in ass---Stinks
09/17/06 By: Anonymous
Especially if she shits when she comes

I'm not sure just how I would respond to this, even if the writer weren't Anon.

 

[SweetWitch]

Here is a nice, intellectual comment I received last month:

Sticking cock in ass---Stinks
09/17/06 By: Anonymous
Especially if she shits when she comes

I'm not sure just how I would respond to this, even if the writer weren't Anon.

Yuck.

 

[SweetWitch]

On The Troll Hunter

Conversely - You Amplify Our Feelings When
10/08/06 By: Anonymous in USA
the slack but talented wordmeister is brought to bear responsibility for her careless words of selfish demeanment of humans far and near for her own private self important churlish needs.

Now at last there is indication that she seems to understand the why and how some feel when some of talent choose to abuse people and their rights to read even that which is carelessly spewed in indignant and harmful intention to offend any and all who have humanity but not a soulless vindictiveness towards any reality without consequence.

You cry about the very right you take to fault for those who care to voice concern or objection to the purposeful intended assault on the semi-normal senses most have but some lack.

No voiced objection is quiet approval as you evidence in your rant so well describing that which you feel is yours alone but trying to suppress the very free speech rights you employ to try to embarrass and squelch in the other hand those who have the audacity to object to.

How openly unintelligent and superciliously stupid to fault what serves you.

Get a life and some reality little selfish one.

What makes you think I'm little? Dude, lighten up.

Also, I found a lovely Essay by Dirtyjoe which might help you with your lack of understanding. It's called Leaving Comments and is very informative, well-thought out and well-written.

 

[Darkniciad]

What makes you think I'm little? Dude, lighten up.

I suppose that comment was supposed to look "intellectual", but quite frankly you need a roadmap to follow that rambling orratory.

I was going to try and translate it into something readable, but it made my head hurt. I get the distinct impression they were using a thesaurus to poke some big words in there and used a few that make no sense because they have no idea what the words actually mean. They just had lots of letters and syllables, and looked good to Anon.

Trolls should stick to "ur teh SuX0rz OMG!!!!111 LOL!" It's far more comprehensible than when they try to speak English.

 

[Aurora Black]

I suppose that comment was supposed to look "intellectual", but quite frankly you need a roadmap to follow that rambling orratory.

I was going to try and translate it into something readable, but it made my head hurt. I get the distinct impression they were using a thesaurus to poke some big words in there and used a few that make no sense because they have no idea what the words actually mean. They just had lots of letters and syllables, and looked good to Anon.

Trolls should stick to "ur teh SuX0rz OMG!!!!111 LOL!" It's far more comprehensible than when they try to speak English.

Bwahahaha

 

[SweetWitch]

I suppose that comment was supposed to look "intellectual", but quite frankly you need a roadmap to follow that rambling orratory.

I was going to try and translate it into something readable, but it made my head hurt. I get the distinct impression they were using a thesaurus to poke some big words in there and used a few that make no sense because they have no idea what the words actually mean. They just had lots of letters and syllables, and looked good to Anon.

Trolls should stick to "ur teh SuX0rz OMG!!!!111 LOL!" It's far more comprehensible than when they try to speak English.

LMAO. I just had to post it for that reason alone. Yes, it made my head hurt to read it. That's why I chose the last line as the part to respond to. It's a real head-scratcher, that's for sure.

I think that a great many people have lost their sense of humor. I wrote the story as a farce--an outlandish comedy to entertain those who have been personally attacked by the species. I, for one, like to see readers telling me where a given story needs improvement; but I can live without the requests that I take my own life or the insults on my mother's virtue.

I'm thinking this person needs to put away the thesarus and tend to his/her own emotional issues. Of course that's just my opinion...I could be wrong.

 

[SweetWitch]

Bwahahaha

*snicker* *snort*

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

He got his widow feewings hurt... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Keep it up, SW

 

[SweetWitch]

He got his widow feewings hurt... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Keep it up, SW

I'm thinking that he might actually be the nasty Mordacious that I bagged...LOL

 

[SweetWitch]

On The Troll Hunter

Go SW Gooooooooooo!!!!
10/08/06 By: Anonymous
Love this lively tale!!!!
Keep up the great work Lit authors!!! You are the reason we readers keep coming back

We do it all for you, baby.

 

[SweetWitch]

On Spell, 1

damn good stuff
10/08/06 By: Anonymous in norcal
this is some of the best writing i have seen on this site. i can't wait to continue the story.

Thank you, from the bottom of my wicked heart.

I need a name!

 

[SweetWitch]

On The Troll Hunter

Dearest D/kitten & Other Writers
10/08/06 By: Anonymous in USA
It will be ongoing this protection of your child against those who just don't know what you do. And that is healthy for you or you wouldn't be where you are talentwise or having the courage to publish that which you labored over so diligently.

So when I am, or were I you, I likewise would sometimes be offended by those who linger on my subject matter as much I would prefer they wouldn't.

But, in the real world of book writing & selling, which this site and others can be preparation for, certain subjects or viewpoints most definitely affect book sales.

In that scenario, publishers carefully choose what they feel will help them continue their business - stay in the black if you will. Even then, there are critics who take the time to point out their take on an effort both skillwise and subject matter. Of course, the movies are also subject to both the marketplace and critics as they should.

So how is this so different and why should it be from your viewpoint? It is difficult to justify a reasonable reason for difference from most positions including yours. It is human but not defensible in the real world.

If you will think about it without partiality, that aint bad and it is part of the checks and balances of a real world.

If you went through life thinking 2+3=6 and couldn't understand why no one would buy your product, wouldn't that be a shame and loss for you and possibly others. Not that there wouldn't be a few who would agree that the world is flat but isn't that an empty vessel.

You have the right to stay your course but don't deny yourself the right to grow - to be flexible - to see other viewpoints - to understand the why of difference from another angle.

This site more than any other is kind of like Peoria, where in showbiz, if it flys there it will fly anywhere, but only because here the worldwide cross sampling of readers is strong, intelligent and mostly well meaning.

The atta boys and girls here are your only currency but still must be earned in talent, subject and viewpoint which is the way of the world.

Perhaps the most difficult criticism for some writers like yourself and the writer of this work can experience is the expressed higher expectation from some of us from those who could.

By that I mean, sometimes myself and others feel the subject or viewpoint expressed by a talented writer is puzzling below them. Not that they can't but it is disappointing when they do, as they as so looked forward to for what they can and have done. It may sell a few books but long term it is a low in their normal portfolio.

Lastly, it is with difficulty of acceptance that anyone here really could legitimately feel that you or anyone has a viable identity any greater than mine or other anon.. Silly pseudonyms don't entitle credibility anymore than counterfeit currency does. Only our words and stated intentions can denote understanding, respect and drive credibility which no silly name can.

I lied on the last lastly - a no vote - a no score - a no comment means no one cares and you should be more concerned about that than someone who takes the time to comment.

Respectfully Anon.

P.S. - Writer I too favor Parker's, but for legitimate game. Also, as is normally the case, this effort of yours was extremely well written but the subject is beneath you.

Trolls are legitimate game, in my book.
Where did you learn to write English?
And, the subject matter is not beneath me if I feel a need to write about it. It's a choice I make, with my creativity and my intelligence. Sorry, Mordacious. I'm not buying your sad attempt to gain understanding. Your words do not pass as those of someone who is fit to judge myself or any other writer. But, I'm glad you decided not to consult your thesaurus quite so often this time. Thank you for that much.

Oh, and by the way, sometimes I write something lighthearted just for the fun of it. It's unhealthy to take life too seriously. Hmmm, a lesson you missed?

 

[Darkniciad]

Can I be the first to call "Bullshit" on that long-winded rambling oratory of barely comprehensible English?

Troll boy got offended because you nailed him, plain and simple. Then he kicked himself in the Jimmy-Johnson with that last chimpanzees-on-a-keyboard comment and only made his/her/itself look even more idiotic. This new reply may as well have been titled "Shields up, take evasive action Mr. Sulu!"

Maybe we should organize a twelve step program for the trolls. They might, one day after years of therapy, once again be able to rejoin the world outside their damp, musty, sticky-paged Playboy littered lairs.

After all, every village needs an idiot.

 

[SweetWitch]

Can I be the first to call "Bullshit" on that long-winded rambling oratory of barely comprehensible English?

Troll boy got offended because you nailed him, plain and simple. Then he kicked himself in the Jimmy-Johnson with that last chimpanzees-on-a-keyboard comment and only made his/her/itself look even more idiotic. This new reply may as well have been titled "Shields up, take evasive action Mr. Sulu!"

Maybe we should organize a twelve step program for the trolls. They might, one day after years of therapy, once again be able to rejoin the world outside their damp, musty, sticky-paged Playboy littered lairs.

After all, every village needs an idiot.

Don't you just love it when they give us fodder for our mirth?

 

[Guest]

Hope you don't mind if I take just a moment to say, "Bite Me!" to whoever just voted the "1" on my new story. Idiot.

Okay, sorry, you may now resume your replies to anonymous.

I feel much better.

 

[rachlou]

Hotter and hotter
10/09/06 By: Anonymous in USA
Just like the author, this story keeps getting hotter and hotter. Now, if only I could bump into Daisy myself...Hummmmmm

Thanks Anon!

Hope you don't mind if I take just a moment to say, "Bite Me!" to whoever just voted the "1" on my new story. Idiot.

Don't worry about it, I got some 1-votes a few days ago - they all got wiped today and several of my storys have had a nice rise!! Until they get trolled again ...

 

[smy3th]

Don't worry about it, I got some 1-votes a few days ago - they all got wiped today and several of my storys have had a nice rise!! Until they get trolled again ...

Well, I got about three 1 votes a couple of weeks ago. After a while, one of them was removed. I'm not sure how they decide how many to leave.

 

[rachlou]

Well, I got about three 1 votes a couple of weeks ago. After a while, one of them was removed. I'm not sure how they decide how many to leave.

I imagine it depends on the general voting pattern of your story. If you got 15 x 4 and 5 votes, plus a couple of 1 votes - then the 1 votes are trolls. If you got 75 votes in a contentious story in LW, then not all of the 1 votes are going to be trolls. Some will be genuine people who genuinely didn;t like your story for whatever reason.Therefore some will be left. Eventually all mine got stripped - just takes time I think. Be patient Sometimes it takes months..

 

[FallingToFly]

Don't understand...
10/10/06 By: Anonymous in USA
what all the fuss is about here. No one else will say it to you, but your writing is melodramatic, implausible and over the top in general, and this story is good example.

If you aspire to mediocrity you will certainly attain it. Be more. You've got promise, but your ambition for success is superceding your development as a writer.

You seem to be popular, which takes no small amount of work, if that's your primary goal. This story is fun. You'll do well in the contest.

Thank you. I always welcome honest and heartfelt criticism.

Admittedly: I write purple prose. It's my favorite kind of writing in fact, and my more tailored and spartan efforts (most of the other Playlists, Killing Loneliness, Serpent Heart, etc) simply don't have the same punch, for rme, that my more elaborate work does. It will take time to settle it out into a happy medium, but I'm young enough to have that time to spare.

As for my ambition to success... not sure I have that so much, lol. I enjoy writing, and I enjoy seeing what other people think of my writing, so Lit is a good medium for me. It gives me a chance to throw something out and see how it comes together for the readers. Nothing I have up now is what I would consider to be "finished" work- it's all rough drafts. In two years, or five, or ten, I'll be able to polish them as they should be polished, and then send them out into the real world.

Lit is a practice ground for me, as it has been for so many other writers here. Thank you for recognizing that I do need work, and pointing it out in such a friendly and straightforward fashion. I only wish you had left a name so I could say all this to you directly.

 

[Aurora Black]

On Bitter Harvest:

Falls Flat
10/11/06 By: Anonymous

You need to keep working to become a better writer in order to get away with this kind of derivative and unoriginal story.

I did read to the end hoping that such a lengthy story would deliver something greater than room temperature, but it was relatively tepid all the way through.

Disappointing. As a reader I put a lot more into your story than you did.

This is a Roger Corman B-movie story without the B-movie schmaltz and fun. Please raise your standards or lower them. You have to do one or the other to make this kind of soap opera work.

Dear Anonymous,

You are a complete idiot. Have a nice day.

Aurora

 

[Darkniciad]

On Bitter Harvest:



Dear Anonymous,

You are a complete idiot. Have a nice day.

Aurora

Idiot is a bit light, don't you think? How about knuckle-dragging lackwit?

Even if annyanus is honest, it's like taking a swill of something you don't like, and then drinking all of it to see if it tastes better in the bottom - and then cursing it because it tastes bad and made you drink it all...

And that is the same as admitting you're deadfall rotting at the foot of the family tree