Aurora Black
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FallingToFly said:How come I never get the benefit of those?
*pouts and sulks*
There, there. *runs*

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FallingToFly said:How come I never get the benefit of those?
*pouts and sulks*

Aurora Black said:Classy.![]()
SweetWitch said:I wish the KKK would go back to reading their own propaganda.![]()
Pscho?
09/24/06 By: Anonymous in Federal Buruea of Investigation
Was Marie insnae? I want to know. Good story.
LMAO... That guy's following your stories now. I just glad to be rid of himSEVERUSMAX said:Regarding your comments on "Stacey's Daydreams-Ch. 3"
1. Stacey never screwed around on Walter in the first place.
2. She was thus NOT a "cheating slut".
3. She is a fictional character anyway, so chill!
4. There was no Jamal, Mark, or John in any chapter of that series.
5. There was nothing interracial about the story. Race never came up.
6. She tried in the past, but only lately got his attention.
7. She doesn't have too much time on her hands. Even busy working moms should be able to fit SOME time in for sex, and so should busy working dads. If you're too busy and tired to EVER do it, you're too damned busy and need to scale back on non-essential commitments.
8. She's just a horny married woman with plenty of kinky fantasies.

Jenny_Jackson said:LMAO... That guy's following your stories now. I just glad to be rid of him![]()
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Can I keep it simple and just tell you that I love your writings? More than the eroticism of them, I love how the men and women in your stories have living breathing character and personalities..
Looking forward to more
- Jaded -
that was amazing. i don't know what else to say. amazing.
Funny!
10/01/06 By: Anonymous in Arkansas
I loved the story! The sarcasm added just the right touch and (minus the supernatural) haven't we all been to just those kind of parties?


sucked
10/01/06 by Anonymous in usa
i hated this story.
Highly Enjoyable, Yes!
10/02/06 By: Anonymous
Reading the story took me back to a silly show I saw years ago: A dark comedy about the Devil and Logic.
We all know the story: You are granted 3 wishes, all which will come to pass as you wish; but the Devil gets to have one last thing said or done to you, including "having your soul," etc.
In the silly movie/story I saw, the guy was clever enough to wish for only two things: the third and last thing he wished for was for the Devil to bannish HIMSELF to eternity, or wherever it was that he came out of, and never bother him (the hero) again.
With as much powr as Jack had acquired, he should have opted for a that logical challenge.
People don't realize when they tell stories about good and evil: the Devil or evil entities are not just magical and supernatural beings; they also are very logical! They believe in the CAUSE AND EFFECT; they are a bit more powerful than mortals, so they are able to bluff their way around us, but ultimately, they ARE of the law of CAUSE and EFFECT. Both directly and indirectly, there's a relationship between them and us, their world and ours.
They scare us because we can be scared; they seek us out because they need us. A rock --- or someting like carbon 14 --- for example, does NOT need us: it will exist patiently whether we exist or not and when its HALF-LIFE RUNS out, it will have crumble back into its subparticles constituents; and the latter (as electrons, protons, etc.) in turn will also eventually break down into nothingness, even if it takes trillions of years...
But a FORCE (like an evil or a god) that can and does INTERACT intimately with human beings --- however powerful compared to us --- is A PART of us (even if again it is so much more powerful than we are); that means IT TOO obey the law of cause and effect.
Once, then, once we have reached a point, LIKE JACK in this story here, where we have THAT KIND OF comparable force, and we can move EARTH and any thing AT WILL, we ARE THAT EVIL force itself. So to be afraid of ourselves is meaningful and logical; but to commit suicide ove such a fear is not logical.
Once a person has attained such power, like Jack is made privy to, it is really mind over matter: and he did demonstrate that. In competing minds, which are also supremely knowledgeable, the MOST LOGICAL mind, on average, will triumph.
Think about this: The possible permutations in a chess game, for instance, are huge. No devil can really beat a really, really good chess master. And if you solicit the help of human's machines, too, it is unlikely that Satan or this cousin, the Devil, would have a chance! Hell, even God won't have a chance with those Russian guys!
Thank about it, dear horror story writers! Why Jack in this story gave up, I have no clue, with the MIND he is able to control at will like that....
write more soon
please. this story is great
Submission Title: American Baby Ch. 06
Category: Celebrities
Author: FallingToFly
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 2 Comment(s)
Aurora Black said:On Bitter Harvest:
Huh?![]()
RogueLurker said:Roughly translated:
"I enjoyed the story and it made me think. It made me think a lot about the nature of evil and the power of a person's mind and will. Maybe if you had a different ending ... where Jack banishes the evil that had returned and then he and Claire can live happily after."
He liked it ... and he obviously found it thought-provoking. I'd say you're job as a writer was well done with this one.![]()
Masterful Lady - Multiple KUDO's
10/03/06 By: Anonymous in USA Mi
Your background shines through quite nicely.
Authoress - you are appreciated.
With High Regard
Aurora Black said:Thanks, RL. I was thrown off by what appeared to be rambling.![]()
As for the ending, it was the very first scene in my head when I began writing BH. The rest of the story was formed around it. Happily ever after seemed like a stretch to me, but I think the ending I went with is the next best thing.
Darkniciad said:I agree, happily ever after just would not flow properly. There's a natural cycle to the story, and it can only end badly, or bittersweet in my opinion.
As far as I'm concerned, you used exactly the right ending![]()
I dont like the stupid comments
10/04/06 By: Anonymous
that you leave on the author's hangout. I think your just a conceited cunt/brat, and someone should slap you upside your head..
But the photo is hot, and you are really a talented, intelligent lady. Guees I am saying you aint shit, but you are all of that, when you write.
Keep it up. N take it how you want it.
Aurora Black said:On Bitter Harvest (yeah, right):
And YOU are a cowardly piece of shit that hides behind "Anonymous" because you don't have the balls to leave your real name and take me head on. Since you watch my comments oh so closely, you're bound to see this: I don't give a fuck.
You gave this brilliant *snort* observation along with a 100 temp. You liked the story? Fine. But when you insult me, you've crossed the line. You don't like my posts? Don't fucking read me. Put me on Ignore. End of problem. I won't apologize for being who I am, and fuck you for taking the coward's way out instead of doing the adult thing and contacting me directly.
Oh, and did I mention "fuck you"? I'm doing it again, then. Fuck you.
Darkniciad said:Can I get a witness from the congregation?
I saw this last night. I can't believe someone would give the story a high rating, but devote the entire comment to ranting about what an awful person the author is, on AN INTERNET MESSAGE BOARD nonetheless.
Positively baffling, I tell ya. Then again, maybe not. You hit the nail on the head, they don't want to confront you in any fashion where you can answer them directly, because they'll just end up with that Bugs Bunny transformed-into-a-jackass thing going on.
Some people's kids...