Amateur Writer in Need of an Editor

[IcebergKitten]

Hi guys. It's my first time to write an erotica and I need someone who could proofread it before I submit it. As much as possible, I need someone who is patient enough to give me advices and/or constructive criticism. I also prefer female editors.

The story is about two 'best friends' who meet for the first time. It contains lesbian sex and a bit of BDSM. It's a oneshot containing 3 988 words broken into 135 paragraphs.

Please send me a PM or reply to this thread.

Thank you very much and have a good day.

 

[_Lynn_]

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[IcebergKitten]

Woops. Hahaha, thanks for letting me know MistressLynn.