Advice please...

[Miss_Elena]

Hi! I've submitted two stories. I'm working on a third story and trying to expand my meager writing skills.

Anyway... Here's the situation:

A bi girl who's a virgin wants her girlfriend to take her V-card with a toy. The other girl lost hers to a guy who sweet talked her and dumped her and did the same thing to three other women and has five kids by four different women. The virgin girl says she'll do it herself and she's physically restrained and she's eventually convinced to save it for a man who genuinely loves her.

That too serious or farfetched for a fictional story that I hope comes off as realistic with a touch of outrageousness? I've seen some wild stories here, but this seems wild in a kinda different way.

I don't want to spoil the story, but I'm wondering if it actually fits the story. Just torn on it.

Thanks.

 

[HeyAll]

What does this sentence mean?

The virgin girl says she'll do it herself and she's physically restrained and she's eventually convinced to save it for a man who genuinely loves her.

 

[Bramblethorn]

A bi girl who's a virgin wants her girlfriend to take her V-card with a toy. The other girl lost hers to a guy who sweet talked her and dumped her and did the same thing to three other women and has five kids by four different women. The virgin girl says she'll do it herself and she's physically restrained and she's eventually convinced to save it for a man who genuinely loves her.

I'm confused here - if she's bi and has a girlfriend, why specifically "save it for a man"?

 

[Miss_Elena]

What does this sentence mean?

Sorry I wasn't clearer.

The virgin girl's older girlfriend lost hers in a one night stand and she doesn't want her girlfriend to make the same mistakes.

Trying not to give a lot away here.

 

[PennLady]

Sorry I wasn't clearer.

The virgin girl's older girlfriend lost hers in a one night stand and she doesn't want her girlfriend to make the same mistakes.

Trying not to give a lot away here.

When you're looking for help like this, don't worry about spoilers. We can't help you if you don't provide enough information.

 

[sr71plt]

This raises a question I haven't thought of before. Can you actually be bi before you've had sex with both a man and a woman?

I can see where you are trending toward something and oriented toward it, but I don't see where it's established until it's done (and the thought is there to do it again).

 

[Bramblethorn]

This raises a question I haven't thought of before. Can you actually be bi before you've had sex with both a man and a woman?

I can see where you are trending toward something and oriented toward it, but I don't see where it's established until it's done (and the thought is there to do it again).

I see plenty of virgins identifying as straight (& sometimes gay), so why not?

 

[mikoli5763]

Only my opinion

and like they say everyone has one and usually they stink like a nasty ass, but write it the way you see it. I'm fairly confident it won't be as far fetched as some of my own stories. Almost every scenario you can write about finds its way onto LIT. I would definitely want to read it.

 

[desertslave]

This raises a question I haven't thought of before. Can you actually be bi before you've had sex with both a man and a woman?

Why not? Does one only get to say they're gay or straight after having sex with the appropriate partner? It has to be certified by sex?

I knew from a relatively young age that I was bi. I was attracted to girls and knew what I wanted well before I had the opportunity to act on it. I wasn't especially confused about it, either, other than the fact that I'd never been told that it was possible to be attracted to both genders. I just mentally shrugged and waited for my chance to act on my desires.

 

[horrorotica]

so the premise here is that a female virgin is being seduced by a well known womaniser and she's finding it hard to decide between the lure of the flesh and the advice she's getting to save her first time for when it's with someone she loves.

The issues of her sexuality is not the point as I see it as many young females have intimate girl friends.

It's not an original idea (but not many are) but it can work if done right.