Advice on proper word use in incest stories
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GrantBricksly
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I'm not sure what you are actually asking, as your post is not clear....
If you are asking if the words "Daddy" and "Little girl" are acceptable to use in a story, then the answer is yes, as long as it is made perfectly clear IN THE STORY and withing the CONTEXT of the story, that all characters are over 18.
As in, don't just put one line that says "We are all over 18." No, make it clear by the things you are writing that "Daddy" is an adult. That one is fairly easy. But most importantly...make it crystal clear that "Little girl" is an adult. When you describe her, use words that could not possibly be used to describe a child. Talk about a job that only a 30 year old woman could have. Talk about paying taxes...anything you can through in thee to make it super clear that "Little girl" is not under 18.
Technically, I think a disclaimer saying all characters are over 18 is all you are required to use. But if you can use context to explain it, that is so much better. I write "Daddy/little" stories all the time. I am a Daddy Dom in real life, and my wife is my little. I've never once put a disclaimer in my stories. I've never needed to. My stories make it very clear that the Main Female Character is a full grown adult.
If you are asking if the words "Daddy" and "Little girl" are acceptable to use in a story, then the answer is yes, as long as it is made perfectly clear IN THE STORY and withing the CONTEXT of the story, that all characters are over 18.
As in, don't just put one line that says "We are all over 18." No, make it clear by the things you are writing that "Daddy" is an adult. That one is fairly easy. But most importantly...make it crystal clear that "Little girl" is an adult. When you describe her, use words that could not possibly be used to describe a child. Talk about a job that only a 30 year old woman could have. Talk about paying taxes...anything you can through in thee to make it super clear that "Little girl" is not under 18.
Technically, I think a disclaimer saying all characters are over 18 is all you are required to use. But if you can use context to explain it, that is so much better. I write "Daddy/little" stories all the time. I am a Daddy Dom in real life, and my wife is my little. I've never once put a disclaimer in my stories. I've never needed to. My stories make it very clear that the Main Female Character is a full grown adult.
Thanks. I thought it was fine. I have no interest or intention of having sex with anyone underage and, again, it is strictly fantasy. My wife and I do engage in it. I planned on adding a disclaimer prior to the story text as a precaution since it seems a somewhat common practice. Again, thanks for your advice.
GuiltyCowboy
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On this point, I wrote a story about the siblings in White Lotus (season 3) having sex and submitted it to the I/T category but it was switched and put in Fan Fiction and Celebrities.
I would have thought that the incest aspect trumps everything but, technically, I guess the characters were actually unrelated actors simply pretending to be siblings.
Is Role Playing a category?
NotWise
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No, but it could go into fetish if you write it as a fetish, into BDSM if you stress dominance/submission, or into EC if your characters are just having fun. There might be other spins for other categories.
Jorunn
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Early on establish the age of the little girl, and reference as an adult. Then introduce little girl in private or later in the story.
How’s my little girl works once, but don’t overuse it. Most women over 18 won’t accept that too many times.
How’s my little girl works once, but don’t overuse it. Most women over 18 won’t accept that too many times.
GrantBricksly
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I'm going to have to disagree here. I think both on their own are just as likely to get rejected. That's why context is important. If the only pronoun I use throughout a story for my female character is "girl" and there is not enough context to verify she is 18+ I'm going to get rejected. Same goes for "little girl."
But if I add enough context that it is clear the person in question is an adult, then it won't matter. I can use Girl or little girl to my hearts content, and my story is safe.
NotWise
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I did a text and title search for stories containing "little girl". There were 1269 hits. I did a tag search for the same term and got about 90 hits.
Don't worry about using "little girl." Just establish that the story is two role-playing adults.
Don't worry about using "little girl." Just establish that the story is two role-playing adults.
ElectricBlue
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It's the context of use that gets a rejection, not the presence of a phrase. It might well get flagged, but it depends whether the character is written as child-like or not that matters.
EmilyMiller
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Totally untrue. If the context is established and the age of the person saying that is equally clear.
I’m thinking “little angel “ instead of “little girl “. And under Erotic Coupling.
Write what you think the characters would say. They might say both. But as others have said, make it abundantly clear that this is role play. I might start with the being out of role play as obvious adults talking about their work day or something boring and adult-ish. Done right, the contrast can make the role play sexier.
SimonDoom
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No it won't. Not if the context makes it clear that the characters are actually over 18. This won't be hard to do if the characters are married adults.
If as an author you take the role-play SO far that you are, in effect, delivering to the reader an underage-adjacent erotic experience, then that might get your story bounced IF Laurel reads it carefully enough in the vetting process. But to date (9 years) I can't recall anyone in this forum substantiating that the use of a phrase like this automatically gets you rejected. If you know otherwise, it would be worth sharing.
I like this idea a lot! After a hard week at work, complaining about it and Daddy comforting his little girl or something similar.
EmilyMiller
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I just had a Taboo story approved with these lines included:
I was getting into it enough that a little judicious encouragement was also reflective of my true feelings. “That’s it, Daddy. Use your little girl. Fuck your daughter’s ass. Make me cum, Daddy!”
It was true, I wanted to orgasm so bad. I rubbed myself harder, thrusting my hips back to meet Brett, squealing in pleasure.
I highlighted the language and context to Laurel in the notes field and in a separate PM. The FMC (Cindy - it’s for Dark Fairytales
) is 19 and Brett is her step-mother’s new husband, and not her ‘Daddy,’ who is dead. Cindy also has an agenda in doing this.
RejectReality
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I'll warn you that age-play is a tough sell, and has been for many years.
The old standard used to be that the scene, if read alone, could not read as underage without the additional context. That means you had to have internal dialogue or narrative that plainly established it as roleplay between two people of legal age at least a couple of times throughout the scene.
That sort of went out the window long ago, when it became nearly impossible to get age-play through regardless of how heavy-handed the repetition of their true ages is during the scene. It's been at least a decade. There are probably examples of stories that have made it through, but I would be prepared for a rough road if age-play is what you're going for.
The old standard used to be that the scene, if read alone, could not read as underage without the additional context. That means you had to have internal dialogue or narrative that plainly established it as roleplay between two people of legal age at least a couple of times throughout the scene.
That sort of went out the window long ago, when it became nearly impossible to get age-play through regardless of how heavy-handed the repetition of their true ages is during the scene. It's been at least a decade. There are probably examples of stories that have made it through, but I would be prepared for a rough road if age-play is what you're going for.
I’m seeing lots of relevant information from people who have cogent arguments for and against. It’s giving me better ideas for introducing the couple, who’s married, having had a rough week at work and gradually get into a “father knows best” scenario and the wife is the “little girl “ learning how to deal with tough situations. Or something along those lines. Thanks for your input.
