Actually Happened

[matl]

My wife and I recently experienced a very exciting sexual adventure. I wrote it down, but do not claim to be a writer, I am a carpenter. It is 8 pages long and I wonder if anyone could read it and give some suggestions or even correct it to make it into a story that might be acceptable in the stories section. I would be happy to e-mail the story to anyone who requests it and would greatly appreciate any help. Thanks

 

[matl]

The Basic Subject

It is about sharing my wife with a stranger

 

[matl]

Should I Just Go Ahead And Post It Here?

Being 8 pages long I was hesitant to do that. Or should I post a couple paragraphs at a time?

 

[SexyChele]

I'll take a look at it and try to help you out. Just email it to me at chele_d_s@hotmail.com. If you can, a Word document works best for me.