A true event that needs a story

[Handsomehim]

My partner was hit on at her university holiday party three weeks ago. I’m 36, she is 39. We both attended. It was by a colleague in another department…and his wife. My wife and he are in different departments that cross paths from time to time. He always sings her praises to others. His wife was dancing with me while he was dancing with her. His wife let me know they like to get to know her more…. With my permission. His wife told me I might like to see how well they pamper her. Their personal number is still on a napkin on her bedside table. I think she is more shocked than anything. We have had pillow talk about it. I like the idea of others lusting after her. We have a great sex life… this is just a lot to take in. Maybe some new writer has some ideas. I don’t know.

 

[Britva415]

The title could be "We like your wife but not you"

 

[Djmac1031]

The title could be "We like your wife but not you"

or "Take My Wife... Please"

 

[Djmac1031]

My partner was hit on at her university holiday party three weeks ago. I’m 36, she is 39. We both attended. It was by a colleague in another department…and his wife. My wife and he are in different departments that cross paths from time to time. He always sings her praises to others. His wife was dancing with me while he was dancing with her. His wife let me know they like to get to know her more…. With my permission. His wife told me I might like to see how well they pamper her. Their personal number is still on a napkin on her bedside table. I think she is more shocked than anything. We have had pillow talk about it. I like the idea of others lusting after her. We have a great sex life… this is just a lot to take in. Maybe some new writer has some ideas. I don’t know.

okay so its not a bad idea at all. I suppose the question is where do you see it going?

The husband giving permission for the wife to fuck the other couple? What's his level of involvement, if any? Can he watch? Or just share in her experiences vicariously afterwards?

Is there a financial benefit offered? What exactly does "pamper" imply?

The more details, the more helpful to a potential author.

 

[Handsomehim]

okay so its not a bad idea at all. I suppose the question is where do you see it going?

The husband giving permission for the wife to fuck the other couple? What's his level of involvement, if any? Can he watch? Or just share in her experiences vicariously afterwards?

Is there a financial benefit offered? What exactly does "pamper" imply?

The more details, the more helpful to a potential author.

I’m not sure where it goes. We’ve had pillow talk about it. They do want me to see her pampered. They have asked us to go on a date with them. No finances that I’m aware of.

 

[Tio_Narratore]

I’m not sure where it goes. We’ve had pillow talk about it. They do want me to see her pampered. They have asked us to go on a date with them. No finances that I’m aware of.

If it's actually happening, why would you want a story about it? Wouldn't the real thing be better?

 

[Handsomehim]

There is no definitive it will happen.

 

[Rob_Royale]

This is pretty steamy. Lots of ways to take this.
But Tio has a point. Why not wait and see how this pans out? If nothing happens than perhaps see if a story might be possible? Truth can be stranger than fiction, my friend.

 

[Handsomehim]

I’m hoping a story might help her decide.

 

[Djmac1031]

I’m not sure where it goes. We’ve had pillow talk about it. They do want me to see her pampered. They have asked us to go on a date with them. No finances that I’m aware of.

Gotcha. As a writer, I understand how most story ideas start out simply as fragments of an idea that need to be fleshed out.

As I said, its a good story idea. Hopefully you find someone eager to work with you on it.

My suggestion is, while you wait, to offer more details as you think of them. Unless you dont care and are willing to let the writer have free reign on what actually happens.

You don't have to WRITE it. But maybe an outline. Example:

Story starts at the party with the offer. The couple talk it over and decide to explore it. They discuss boundaries etc.
[Too long read the guidelines]

 

[Handsomehim]

I’m more than willing to talk to talk in a separate chat with any writer that is interested.

 

[MikeXIrons]

I’m hoping a story might help her decide.

So… like a story (or multiple) to enhance the existing “pillow talk” and give her some ideas about where things might head?

I can see that. Does she know you are on lit? And asked for stories? Would she read them? Or is it for ideas for you to relay to her during pillow talk?

 

[Writer61]

I’m hoping a story might help her decide.

Is it just to help her decide, or is it for you too?

What do you want to happen? If you already know, then you have the ending for your story.

 

[dirk2024]

One thing to put out there, fiction might take longer than reality. Some of us are already juggling several stories. Then, there is the actual story length, editing, re-editing, blah, blah, blah.

This is a possible endeavor, and I appreciate your desires to make this happen. It just might not be quick.

 

[Handsomehim]

I am willing to be patient. I’ll talk about more related to it with right intersted writer in a separate chat

 

[PennyThompson]

I hope you don't take this too negatively, but it's starting to sound more like you want someone for private roleplaying and/or free therapy. Which is definitely a thing you can potentially find in some of the other sub-forums on Lit, no judgement!

But not very many writers are going to want to spend their time privately chatting with you about your personal fantasy. Your initial story is pretty interesting, and could be the prompt for some good erotica! I'll join the chorus encouraging you to write it yourself!

You can expand on your ideas here, it's not impossible that you'll inspire someone to pick it up as a story seed. But it will end up being their story, not yours. If you want your very specific fantasy to take shape, you'll either need to pay someone (it sounds like you did this once before and weren't happy with the results) or you'll need to DIY!

 

[Handsomehim]

I am willing to be patient. I’ll talk about more related to it with right intersted writer

 

[Handsomehim]

No looking for therapy at all or role play.. I was just looking for a writer who might be new and thought what happened might make for a good story.

 

[Writer61]

I am confused by your motivations:

I am willing to be patient.

I’m hoping a story might help her decide.

I am very turned on by what occurred. If it does work out. I’d like a story.

I honestly don’t know how I want the story to end. Personally I’d leave it to the author.

Do you want a story to help your wife decide?
Do you want a record of what happens?

 

[Handsomehim]

Bc if it doesn’t workout in reality I have a story I can read. I plan on telling her I love that she got hit on the next time we are filling around.

 

[Writer61]

Bc if it doesn’t workout in reality I have a story I can read.

Which is fine, but not what you wrote.

You have had plenty of good advice from multiple authors, but you are vague and inconsistent. Deliberately or not, you are wasting our time.

My advice: wait and see what happens. If it works out the way you want, you have a memory; if it doesn't, use AI to complete your story.

I'm out.

 

[dirk2024]

Which is fine, but not what you wrote.

You have had plenty of good advice from multiple authors, but you are vague and inconsistent. Deliberately or not, you are wasting our time.

My advice: wait and see what happens. If it works out the way you want, you have a memory; if it doesn't, use AI to complete your story.

I'm out.

*clutches pearls*

 

[VerbalAbuse]

reminds me of Indecent Proposal: almost the story of how they divorced.

 

[Handsomehim]

No. This is a couple.

 

[Andreas_Kreuz]

To me it sounds like you want to put a possible way forward into the form of a story, to use the story as a way for communication? BTW. You got a PM.