A treat for all my kinkster friends...

[Keroin]

Inspired by the raunchy ramblings on this board, I have taken a detour off the straight and narrow to pen a little smut. This is not my first foray into erotic fiction - that story was confiscated by Nala and will not make an appearance until November - but I'm still green as Kermit, in this genre.

Anyway, I hope you'll take the time to have a read and offer feedback. Remember, be honest, I worked in the film business, by choice, therefore I'm a dyed in the wool masochist.

Here goes nuthin'...

Vice Cream - Dessert in Seven Parts

Cheers,
Keroin

 

[WriterDom]

I read the first one. I will savor the rest. But as a practical matter is it healthy to stuff a pussy with ice cream and fruit?

 

[Keroin]

I read the first one. I will savor the rest. But as a practical matter is it healthy to stuff a pussy with ice cream and fruit?

That's why it's "fiction".

 

[WriterDom]

That's why it's "fiction".

I was just wondering is all.

 

[Keroin]

I was just wondering is all.

Wondering is cool. No worries.

Yeah, I know some people demand absolute realism in their erotic stories but that's just not me. My belief is that fiction is the realm in which we can do all the no-no's we'd never consider in real life. Erotic fiction, particularly, is a place to explore fantasies safely.

Having said that, I don't mind reading stories that are very real.

In real life, most of the actions in my stories would not be advised, including the first one.

 

[WriterDom]

Some 18 year old reader is going to turn his girlfriend into a banana split and have her push out sourdough dinner rolls for a week.

 

[Keroin]

Some 18 year old reader is going to turn his girlfriend into a banana split and have her push out sourdough dinner rolls for a week.

Hey, I'm sure a lot of kids ran full speed into brick walls trying to get to the Hogwarts train, too, but I doubt JK Rowling loses any sleep over it.

 

[00Syd]

I enjoyed

 

[Keroin]

I enjoyed

Thanks Syd!

Favourite flavour?

 

[lilylicious]

Hey, I'm sure a lot of kids ran full speed into brick walls trying to get to the Hogwarts train, too, but I doubt JK Rowling loses any sleep over it.

LMAO!!!

 

[terraform]

Loved it.

 

[00Syd]

Thanks Syd!

Favourite flavour?

Rocky Road, hands down.

 

[Keroin]

Loved it.

Thanks! And thanks also for the lovely comments you wrote.

Rocky Road, hands down.

Very interesting. *Pulls out pen and notepad, starts jotting down notes*

Now, tell me about your mother...

Kidding, kidding, kidding.

 

[00Syd]

Very interesting. *Pulls out pen and notepad, starts jotting down notes*

Now, tell me about your mother...

Kidding, kidding, kidding.

*snort*

It's the idea of being woken up and taken by a stranger that gets me.

Hhhhhooottttt.

 

[Keroin]

Oh my gosh, did you see that? Someone just bumped this thread. The nerve of some people.

Oh, right, it was me.

Um...

I have no pride.

 

[Keroin]

LMAO!!!

Miss Lily (private joke),

Thanks so much for the delightful comments! Glad you enjoyed the mango sorbet.

K

 

[WriterDom]

I think I'll copy your style. Not the food thing but little stories within a story.

The Ass Licking
The Flogging
The Spanking
The Ass Fuck
The Pussy Fuck
The Bondage
The Sideways Sixty-Nine

Probably not in that order though.

 

[WriterDom]

Have you checked your score?

 

[Keroin]

Have you checked your score?

Nope. I didn't know I had a score. How do I check? What significance does the score have?

 

[WriterDom]

On your Author page you'll see

Submit a story
Submit a poem
View Current Submissions

Click on the bottom thing and it will tell you the score from 1 to 5. And how many have read it. You want at least a 4.5 to get a red H. Stands for Hot

 

[Harmony_1985]

I read the first one. I will savor the rest. But as a practical matter is it healthy to stuff a pussy with ice cream and fruit?

Sir and I were talking to another Dom at the last munch, and he said something about eating a mars bar out of his sub's pussy.

I can't see how it can be healthy, but you'd need a vaginal douche afterwards.

 

[Arkhilokhus]

Hey K,

Just read them. Loved them all, but put me down for black licorice if I have to choose (I'm sure you're shocked ). Although the caning scene was tres hot as well.

 

[WriterDom]

I see she has the red H

 

[Keroin]

I see she has the red H

Ahm Hawt! Baby!

 

[Keroin]

Hey K,

Just read them. Loved them all, but put me down for black licorice if I have to choose (I'm sure you're shocked ). Although the caning scene was tres hot as well.

Thanks Ark!

No surprise with your choice, LOL.


So far, the Favourite Flavour Score is:

Vanilla 0
Mango Sorbet 1
Black Licorice 1
Bubble gum 0
Rocky Road 1
Coconut 0
Neapolitan 0

Maybe I'll start a poll?