A Sex Ed Class How To 'Story' shot down

[Boobytrap73]

I recently had a story rejected when the 13 year old daughter alleged (falsely) that a man she suspected as her mother's lover exposed himself to her. Simply changing it to say that he "behaved inappropriately" let it sail right through without impacting the story one bit.

This seems weird to me. "Behaved inappropriately. " could mean any and all activities. In contrast, "exposed" is a very limiting description about what went on.

I could see both being turned down but if I was going to pick one as not violating the rule, I've have gone with the exposure.

~BT73

 

[dmallord]

I knew an old lady who used to entertain a sailor whenever he was in port. Over time she began to dry up to the point it was uncomfortable for him. Eventually the only moist hole available was behind her glass eye.

He wasn't in port all that often but she always kept an eye out for him.

I heard that one in Vietnam, but it's not a sailor version.

 

[jehoram]

I edited Athalia's stories, and remember that her last one was something called "College Sex Club" with "Sex Ed 101" and "Sex Ed 102" being two of the chapters.

https://www.literotica.com/series/se/493976628

And I think that high school sex ed was mentioned in passing in "Summertime Sex Ed"

https://www.literotica.com/s/summertime-sex-ed

Both of those stories passed muster, IIRC. (At least, I don't remember her telling me that they'd bounced.)

 

[M_K_Babalon]

Certain words and phrases(sometimes the lack of) will trigger Laurels red flag. I once wrote and submitted an incest story where the adult son was in a sexual relationship with his mother, who was mentally retarded from a car wreck, and was mentally the age of twelve, or some shit. It was stressed in dialog that they were mother and son, both adults, that his father divorced her over it, and in exposition, I think. But the mental age kicked it back. Eh, shit happens.

I wrote it because we were discussing about such folks of those types of afflictions a few years ago.This is the first, many, if not all of you are hearing about it, because it's not a big deal to me, that it was kicked back. I did try to clarify in the mod notes, and I never resubmitted, or rewrited, or whatever. The rejection still ain't an issue. I can always try another site, or post it on my blog. I know all the blah, blahs, I've been here fifteen years now. It's just an example.

 

[TheWritingGroup]

Certain words and phrases(sometimes the lack of) will trigger Laurels red flag. I once wrote and submitted an incest story where the adult son was in a sexual relationship with his mother, who was mentally retarded from a car wreck, and was mentally the age of twelve, or some shit. It was stressed in dialog that they were mother and son, both adults, that his father divorced her over it, and in exposition, I think. But the mental age kicked it back. Eh, shit happens.

I wrote it because we were discussing about such folks of those types of afflictions a few years ago.This is the first, many, if not all of you are hearing about it, because it's not a big deal to me, that it was kicked back. I did try to clarify in the mod notes, and I never resubmitted, or rewrited, or whatever. The rejection still ain't an issue. I can always try another site, or post it on my blog. I know all the blah, blahs, I've been here fifteen years now. It's just an example.

That's a very serious "No" from almost anyone, because if you aren't mentally adult you cannot consent. You can do nonconsent on Literotica, in certain contexts, but presenting someone as childlike is going to get a hard "NOPE" from Laurel every time.

-Carl