30 in 30 Companion Thread

[butters]

Only in the sense of Marvel's "What if?" series or a glimpse of potential futures in the manner of the Ghost of Christmas Yet to Come...one of those bleak outcomes that arise to tease and taunt a person when at one of those spiritual/emotional lows that come along when you least expect it.

just goes to show how well you wrote it, then read like a first hand account of someone you knew who (maybe) went on to commit suicide. loved that it left questions and made me think about it.

 

[butters]

harry and remec, so many word-pictures and sounds dancing through your writes today!

 

[Piscator]

x-17

I wonder if mister fishy knows,
I've written a commercial to be shown below,
airs this Friday, early too,
get yours now; this worms for you

Must be getting close to crappie time down south.

Do you rig your salties Texas or Carolina style?

 

[HarryHill]

Must be getting close to crappie time down south.

Do you rig your salties Texas or Carolina style?

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worms or minnows, very light weight, no salties

 

[HarryHill]

butters your 5-2

 

[Angeline]

butters your 5-2

Agreed, it's really good--a well-reasoned argument for the narrator's perspective and an especially strong ending.

 

[butters]

butters your 5-2

Agreed, it's really good--a well-reasoned argument for the narrator's perspective and an especially strong ending.

ty, both. glad you enjoyed it, even if it wasn't at all what i set out to write!

 

[HarryHill]

Okay, I laughed, one of those involuntary bursts of mirth and appreciation

 

[Remec]

Whew...there's another one...time for a break, I think...hehehe maybe I should shift to some of the story ideas bumbling about in my head...

 

[Piscator]

Whew...there's another one...time for a break, I think...hehehe maybe I should shift to some of the story ideas bumbling about in my head...

Congrats, sit back and have a drink of your favorite beverage, even if it isn't Scotch, and what the heck throw in some ice as well.

 

[butters]

Whew...there's another one...time for a break, I think...hehehe maybe I should shift to some of the story ideas bumbling about in my head...

well done! been a pleasure

dropped off twice already tonight; better get mine in

 

[HarryHill]

Whew...there's another one...time for a break, I think...hehehe maybe I should shift to some of the story ideas bumbling about in my head...

Ah, then the Scotch was well earned, thanks for waving the red 30/30 flag.

 

[greenmountaineer]

equis 26

Bien escrito, Harry(Javier?) I can relate. Dios Mio!

Seriously, nice, tight; I enjoyed reading it.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

ty, both. glad you enjoyed it, even if it wasn't at all what i set out to write!

5-2 should be published

 

[butters]

5-2 should be published

thanks, annie, though it probably needs a lot of work it;ll never see because, for now (and too often), i am a bad lazy writer.

hey Harry! last one and you;re done!

 

[UnderYourSpell]

thanks, annie, though it probably needs a lot of work it;ll never see because, for now (and too often), i am a bad lazy writer.

hey Harry! last one and you;re done!

At least you're writing I've just fizzled out

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Applause Harry

 

[Piscator]

Well done Harry - now back to the garden for more inspiration and some vegs.

 

[HarryHill]

*bows*

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Harry your Post coital 32 took my breath away and almost jealous it wasn't written for me!

 

[HarryHill]

Harry your Post coital 32 took my breath away and almost jealous it wasn't written for me!

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You're taking this mod thing serious, aint 'ca?

 

[UnderYourSpell]

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You're taking this mod thing serious, aint 'ca?

I don't understand .............. I spoke from the heart ............ hurt now and shutting up

 

[HarryHill]

I don't understand .............. I spoke from the heart ............ hurt now and shutting up

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Oh you know I was just playing, congratulations and thank you

 

[HarryHill]

I need a mod in here

 

[todski28]

Champ??? What happened???? Come back