gauchecritic
When there are grey skies
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Talking to a good friend the other night I was reminded of a phrase I think I coined, pertaining to 'flowery prose' (anyone else read that as 'flow-ery'?) as opposed to Hemingways(?) spare or even sparse style.
When I get into the 'flowery prose' vein I tend to use the "histories of things" ( (c) GC 2003) approach.
The very first creative writing exercise I ever did involved describing a thing. Instead of describing it I gave it a short history.
Exercise: Look around you and choose some physical object. Describe it with little or incidental reference to its obvious use.
So instead of this:
The rainbow coloured CD contains all manner of programmes and useful bits of information for the enthusiast.
Et voila;
Every month a periodical is delivered. Sellotaped to it's garish front cover is a disc. Very occasionally I will take from it something of interest. Otherwise it does what it's doing now: keeping my desk from being burned by a hot cup of tea.
Gauche
I do realise that the second contains adjectives. Get over it.
When I get into the 'flowery prose' vein I tend to use the "histories of things" ( (c) GC 2003) approach.
The very first creative writing exercise I ever did involved describing a thing. Instead of describing it I gave it a short history.
Exercise: Look around you and choose some physical object. Describe it with little or incidental reference to its obvious use.
So instead of this:
The rainbow coloured CD contains all manner of programmes and useful bits of information for the enthusiast.
Et voila;
Every month a periodical is delivered. Sellotaped to it's garish front cover is a disc. Very occasionally I will take from it something of interest. Otherwise it does what it's doing now: keeping my desk from being burned by a hot cup of tea.
Gauche
I do realise that the second contains adjectives. Get over it.