StillStunned
Mr Sticky
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And for a story rated 4.91, no less. This Stacnash must know something that other readers don't.Two-star club with all the cool kids!![]()
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And for a story rated 4.91, no less. This Stacnash must know something that other readers don't.Two-star club with all the cool kids!![]()
And for a story rated 4.91, no less. This Stacnash must know something that other readers don't.
Really? Thanks! Mostly I don't rate higher than four stars. People keep telling me "You're a **** writer, and a **** person."Y'all are five-star writers in my book.
Hmm ... Stacnash just favorited my most recent story.Yeah? Where can that be found?
ETA: Nevermind. Found it!
They favorited my worst story (by my own feeling of it.) Should be fun to read that review when it comes in, lol.
No, I see it now. They don't have a Favorites list, just lists of stories where they rate the author. And "Wager" doesn't actually appear on any of the lists, probably because of how slow some kinds of updates are on Literotica. I wonder which list they put me on.
I believe we've been added to their reading list it used to be on their list of lists but isn't since they reordered their list (which I'd like to thank them for. The out of order list really bugged me.)No, I see it now. They don't have a Favorites list, just lists of stories where they rate the author. And "Wager" doesn't actually appear on any of the lists, probably because of how slow some kinds of updates are on Literotica. I wonder which list they put me on.
-Annie
You can also have a private list. I don't know if that shows up as a favorite, but I think it does.No, I see it now. They don't have a Favorites list, just lists of stories where they rate the author. And "Wager" doesn't actually appear on any of the lists, probably because of how slow some kinds of updates are on Literotica. I wonder which list they put me on.
-Annie
Somebody downvoted the story twice in the last couple of hours, too. Hmm ....No, I see it now. They don't have a Favorites list, just lists of stories where they rate the author. And "Wager" doesn't actually appear on any of the lists, probably because of how slow some kinds of updates are on Literotica. I wonder which list they put me on.
-Annie
I made it to the end, but it wasn’t easy. Most of this is extraordinarily poor.
They spent an awful lot of words reviewing a story they hated.There we go.
-Annie
Three more words, it would have been long enough to publish in Reviews & Essays.They spent an awful lot of words reviewing a story they hated.
Shame that's not where they post their reviews. Can you imagine the comments?Three more words, it would have been long enough to publish in Reviews & Essays.
Honestly, some of those criticisms are valid. I did overplay the vision thing, for instance.Shame that's not where they post their reviews. Can you imagine the comments?
BTW I enjoyed your story![]()
I would say you overplayed the explanation of the vision thing, but not necessarily the vision thing. I've spent time with a friend who had to forgo her glasses for a few days and the observations of what she could/couldn't see align with Maureen's, but I didn't need the reminders re the reason she couldn't see (if that makes sense?) Just my opinion.Honestly, some of those criticisms are valid. I did overplay the vision thing, for instance.
The criticisms are just expressed so cruelly and arrogantly that they end up parodying themselves.
-Annie
I think you just explained what I was thinking better than I did.I would say you overplayed the explanation of the vision thing, but not necessarily the vision thing. I've spent time with a friend who had to forgo her glasses for a few days and the observations of what she could/couldn't see align with Maureen's, but I didn't need the reminders re the reason she couldn't see (if that makes sense?) Just my opinion.
I've been trying different formats for that. I had italics for thoughts in other stories. The Writing Group in general is using Literotica to experiment, and this is certainly part of that project.I had no issue with the chosen style for the dialogue/internal thought formatting, though it was not necessarily the most common convention for this site.
To be fair, I did ask for feedback, repeatedly. You'll notice I'm not angry or upset. Stacnash's response wasn't useless to me, it was just pointlessly mean (in my opinion).I would say people have different goals when they post stories here. From whacking up a first draft as they want to share their own fantasies, to placing well crafted pieces of prose that they have worked hard on and consider a serious attempt at writing... I don't feel Lit is really the place for such critiques to be placed in comments unasked for, especially when expressed so cruelly and arrogantly.
Here's an allegation about hundreds of AI-written and AI-narrated audiobooks.
https://smartbitchestrashybooks.com...d-the-issue-of-library-ai-circulation-policy/
Not about Literotica, but ....