Looking for a co-author for my first long story

[chouffe]

Hiya!

I’m new to literotica and working on my first long story (around 7k words). Though I’m enjoying it a lot, I’m a bit insecure about the quality of the story. Does it make sense? Is it not too wordy? Am I focusing on frivolous details? Long story short; I’m having a hard time finishing it.

I’m not sure if it’s customary to work on stories together, but I’d really appreciate it if someone would take the time to help me complete this story. Also, if I’m supposed to post this in a different forum, please let me know.

For the ones interested, here is a synopsis:
Sasha has been working at a large corporate insurance agency for many years, working toward a promotion that could help her realise her lifelong dream. Despite her effort, she notices many female colleagues around getting promoted instead of her. One day she hears about secret parties hosted by the directors. If a girl is selected to attend one of these parties, she most provide ‘anonymous services’ in exchange for a promotion. With her lifelong dream finally within reach, Sasha attempts to become one of those girls without knowing exactly what is expected of her.

 

[AlinaX]

7k is about two Lit pages. It's a decent length, but not long for Lit.

It's hard to write the ending when you don't know what it is. If you do have an ending, and don't know how to get there, sometimes it can help to tell the story in a non-linear fashion, mixing scenes from then and now.

It's also worth, if you haven't done this, introducing a friend or colleague with whom she can talk, and who may or may not know what really happens at those parties.

Remember, also, you need to make the reader want her to go to the parties, but there has to be a part of her angry that it's somehow necessary and degrading.

 

[chouffe]

7k is about two Lit pages. It's a decent length, but not long for Lit.

It's hard to write the ending when you don't know what it is. If you do have an ending, and don't know how to get there, sometimes it can help to tell the story in a non-linear fashion, mixing scenes from then and now.

It's also worth, if you haven't done this, introducing a friend or colleague with whom she can talk, and who may or may not know what really happens at those parties.

Remember, also, you need to make the reader want her to go to the parties, but there has to be a part of her angry that it's somehow necessary and degrading.

Hey!

Good remark about the ending, I actually haven’t really thought about it yet and just let the story guide me.

I did already introduce a colleague and introduced an internal conflict with regards to the party

 

[chouffe]

Sounds like a great premise of a story. If I had more time I'd love to assist, but my forecast this week is busy with the potential of torrential assignments

I’m not in any rush. If you find yourself with some time later on, feel free to send me a message.

 

[Small_Island]

Finishing a story can often be the toughest part. If you're still looking for help, you can respond to my DM.