Looking for someone who wants to help edit each others work

[trained23]

My story is a mind control, nonlinear chapter project I’m trying to write. The prequel shows her transformation into a “stupid, cock addict, bimbo” while the main story is about her adventures in porn. I’m interested in hearing ideas about the overall structure, idea, or I’d appreciate (heavy) help editing my work.

I’d also be happy to help you out but I’d hope we become friends or at least something more than just tit for tat edits haha

 

[AlinaX]

I feel compelled to warn you that there's very little eroticism in the adventures in porn of a stupid, cock addict bimbo. There can be eroticism in the transformation to stupid, cock addict bimbo, but once the transformation is done the story dies a death.

ETA: Think of it as a tension between who the character wants to be and who the reader wants her to become. Your job as author is to seduce the character into becoming who the reader wants, and also to seduce the reader into wanting the character to become who she wants.

Tiffany grinned back at me from the mirror with her platinum blonde curls and entirely too perky breasts. "You can't deny me forever," she said. "Sooner or later you will break and be mine entirely."

"I'll never be you," I growled back at her, trying desperately to deny the coiling lust that the sight of her always excited in me. I hated her for everything she represented - a brainless, cock-obsessed bimbo - and I hated that that was what people saw me as whenever I ventured out of my apartment. What I hated most, however, was how fucking hot I found myself.

Tiffany giggled. "Oh, yes you will. Refuse to bend, even a little, and you will break. And don't you want to bend? Maybe just a little?"

 

[Bamagan]

Not to pile on, but the MC category has probably got about 3000 stories involving stupid, cock-addicted bimbos. It's basically a staple of the genre, as you probably already know. There's obviously an audience for those stories, and if I'm being uncharitable I think of them as stupid, bimbo-addicted cocks, so the story might do well with the target demographic, even without particularly good editing.
I wish you good fortune in finding an editor, but there's often very little that truly distinguishes one bimbofication story from the huge pile of others. Editing can be a tough job, and it's even harder when it feels like you've read the same story a hundred times. Maybe you'll get lucky and find someone whose appetite for that kind of porn is as insatiable as a bimbo is for sex.

My story is a mind control, nonlinear chapter project I’m trying to write. The prequel shows her transformation into a “stupid, cock addict, bimbo” while the main story is about her adventures in porn. I’m interested in hearing ideas about the overall structure, idea, or I’d appreciate (heavy) help editing my work.

I’d also be happy to help you out but I’d hope we become friends or at least something more than just tit for tat edits haha