Sex & Shenanigans

[vagrantx]

Did you like that?

Pet-talk is my weak spot From Nails:

"A telltale clack, clack from behind me, the familiar sound of my lover's stilettos as she dug her heels into the cold stone floor. "Your Queen can't hear you, pet, not yet." I gasped as the silence shattered. She fired off that pet like a bullet from a gun; there was weight and depth and meaning behind it. It pierced my chest and pushed all of the right buttons."

 

[crazychemgirl]

Critique is great. But it's just that, critique. Unless stated somewhere in the venue though, unsolicited critique is like an unsolicited dick pic. Fuckem if they don't like it.

Unsolicited critique is like an unsolicited dick pic


… interesting

 

[hotoldrguy]

If someone even MOTIONS to tickle me.., I will punch that motherfucker in the throat.

back in the day, my wife and I were naked and fooling around. She was on my lap and I started tickling her. This was also my first and only Golden Shower

 

[Silver_Arrow]

32 comments though?

I wouldn't count many of those as feedback. Some of them are weird, one word, or nothing very helpful.

 

[crazychemgirl]

I wanna go get real margaritas, chips and queso with you. One day...

Samesies!!!!!

 

[Silver_Arrow]

Unsolicited critique is like an unsolicited dick pic


… interesting

Maybe to some degree, but I often want to know what people genuinely like about my stories beyond 'more' 'good read' etc. The super detailed critique on my writing that I've asked for from other authors is one thing. I've never had anyone send me a detailed thing on what they liked about the story or characters.

I think it was said when we were taking about Stephen King by someone, but I would rather write good stories than have my writing be technically perfect.

 

[crazychemgirl]

Maybe to some degree, but I often want to know what people genuinely like about my stories beyond 'more' 'good read' etc. The super detailed critique on my writing that I've asked for from other authors is one thing. I've never had anyone send me a detailed thing on what they liked about the story or characters.

I think it was said when we were taking about Stephen King by someone, but I would rather write good stories than have my writing be technically perfect.

100%

Who cares about technically perfect … a good story is captivating.


Also … the only thing that REALLY bothers me is plot holes … or when someone describes something in a way that my brain can’t make sense of.

Stephen Graham Jones writes interesting stories but I absolutely cannot stand them. It’s the way the detail is written .., I can’t picture the scenes or how it’s playing out … and it’s incredibly frustrating.

I always go back to King cuz when I’m reading him I can picture the whole thing in my head.

 

[vagrantx]

Maybe to some degree, but I often want to know what people genuinely like about my stories beyond 'more' 'good read' etc. The super detailed critique on my writing that I've asked for from other authors is one thing. I've never had anyone send me a detailed thing on what they liked about the story or characters.

I think it was said when we were taking about Stephen King by someone, but I would rather write good stories than have my writing be technically perfect.

I would highly recommend requesting a review from AMD and Omenainen over in their thread in the Story Feedback forum! I've had 3 reviews of my stories there, and they've always been both helpful and insightful. I've referred one more person there who got their story reviewed, and they said it was super helpful to them too!

Though they do not tread lightly. If they find perceived flaws, they will point them out and they usually aren't polite about it. They're not rude, but they're direct and honest. Some people can't handle that when they sign up, so, just giving you fair warning!

But yeah, again, highly recommended!

 

[vagrantx]

Hype!
A Star Wars game where I get to play as a female scoundrel and smuggler? By a swedish studio? Sign me the f up!

 

[SWR101]

Hype!
A Star Wars game where I get to play as a female scoundrel and smuggler? By a swedish studio? Sign me the f up!

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I’m very cautiously optimistic for this, but SW has burned me a lot lately

 

[Silver_Arrow]

I would highly recommend requesting a review from AMD and Omenainen over in their thread in the Story Feedback forum! I've had 3 reviews of my stories there, and they've always been both helpful and insightful. I've referred one more person there who got their story reviewed, and they said it was super helpful to them too!

Though they do not tread lightly. If they find perceived flaws, they will point them out and they usually aren't polite about it. They're not rude, but they're direct and honest. Some people can't handle that when they sign up, so, just giving you fair warning!

But yeah, again, highly recommended!

Not really the kind of feedback I want, I've asked for some people to tear my writing apart, and while helpful in some ways it was generally not helpful in what I was looking for. I don't want people to blow smoke up my ass, I know my writing is not perfect. I just want the people who read my stories (I know we are on lit and its smut) to talk about parts they like and why or character bits. I have no baseline to tell if the way I enjoy writing about things resonates with people beyond stars and likes. That's all very arbitrary and doesn't help me dial in character or story stuff.

 

[vagrantx]

I’m very cautiously optimistic for this, but SW has burned me a lot lately

Even if they're very rarely masterpieces, I enjoy the Ubisoft formula. Also, The Division was really entertaining back in what, 2015? Massive is a great studio for atmosphere and general feel!

Worst comes to worst I'll enjoy it and forget about it, but I seriously doubt I'll hate it!

 

[SWR101]

Even if they're very rarely masterpieces, I enjoy the Ubisoft formula. Also, The Division was really entertaining back in what, 2015? Massive is a great studio for atmosphere and general feel!

Worst comes to worst I'll enjoy it and forget about it, but I seriously doubt I'll hate it!

Eh, that’s all fair, but I’m also more concerned this will be Assassins Cry: Star Wars, just a thin coat of SW on the AC/FC formula

 

[vagrantx]

Not really the kind of feedback I want, I've asked for some people to tear my writing apart, and while helpful in some ways it was generally not helpful in what I was looking for. I don't want people to blow smoke up my ass, I know my writing is not perfect. I just want the people who read my stories (I know we are on lit and its smut) to talk about parts they like and why or character bits. I have no baseline to tell if the way I enjoy writing about things resonates with people beyond stars and likes. That's all very arbitrary and doesn't help me dial in character or story stuff.

Very fair points. I'd offer my point of view but I don't really like or even read boy/girl stories at all, so my feedback would be just me yucking your yum if it's not focused on the actual writing, but the content. Sorry

 

[LadyLascivious1]

Question for the shenanigang …. Who here has posted their dick / vag on lit?

Oh, hell no! I once showed a glimpse of my ass…in a thong and not a full view. I haven’t even shown my nipples in the public threads.

I showed my backside in a shower pic, that was pushing my boundaries quite a bit. Gimme a year, or five, then we'll talk

I think I’m much closer to this camp…except my nipples are not shy in private messages

 

[crazychemgirl]

Oh, hell no! I once showed a glimpse of my ass…in a thong and not a full view. I haven’t even shown my nipples in the public threads.


I think I’m much closer to this camp…except my nipples are not shy in private messages

@MindYaBitness and I don’t have nipples. You can confirm with @Mr_bogey

 

[Bry1313]

I'm in the pacific northwest, my maternal family are Midwest transplants. Dinner=Lunch, and is the biggest meal, Supper=Dinner, and varies if we have company. All my friends thought we were weird for it.

That’s Midwest farm behavior, not Midwest city behavior

 

[MindYaBitness]

Oh, hell no! I once showed a glimpse of my ass…in a thong and not a full view. I haven’t even shown my nipples in the public threads.


I think I’m much closer to this camp…except my nipples are not shy in private messages

Mine are shy, always, for no reason, I have no idea why. I can count on one hand how many people I've shared a full on topless pic with here. Now, once I'm comfortable with you, that a different story entirely. It can quickly become a topless extravaganza when my partner matches my energy
https://i.giphy.com/media/v1.Y2lkPTc5MGI3NjExYm1neXEzeTdoYWZ6bmM1bDB0dWJ6NnNscDM4NnE2a3podm55MDJ6NCZlcD12MV9pbnRlcm5hbF9naWZfYnlfaWQmY3Q9Zw/3o6Ztp6hwOuNQSAZkQ/giphy.gif
That's right @Lmizzler , I'm tossing that at you!

 

[SWR101]

My old av was me topless… but I’m a guy so it’s more socially normalize…

 

[MindYaBitness]

That’s Midwest farm behavior, not Midwest city behavior

100% farm & ranch folks. How do think I know how to pop the head off a chicken with just my heel, hang a hog, or braid onions for the root cellar

 

[MindYaBitness]

My old av was me topless… but I’m a guy so it’s more socially normalize…

Indeed, but never underestimate the hypnotic power of a nice chest & shoulders

 

[crazychemgirl]

Indeed, but never underestimate the hypnotic power of a nice chest & shoulders

this

 

[crazychemgirl]

99% of my posts on here.

 

[crazychemgirl]

 

[KateAt55]

Little bit of both last night and tonight planned as well. Gonna be tricky.