alohadave
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I began my story with an Author's Note stating "Author's Note: This is very short and intentionally written this way for an author challenge. This task was to write a story with ONLY 750 words, the minimum number of words allowed for a Literotica story."Thanks for organising.
I see from someone else's entry that they've included a link to this thread and a brief explanation, which falls outside the 750 word count. It would be really helpful if those permitted introductions were included in next year's in the challenge invitation post - maybe like a template we could all stick to? I've added my explanation as a comment, which isn't ideal.
...only a 3.58 score...
If you type fast, don't edit, and post right off, you can have it in the queue in fifteen minutes.So early you all are. I only just remembered this is on my todo list. But hey, how long can it take?
I liked it—I just gave it 5So my 750-word story is up. I have gotten a few new followers on it already. Had 40 votes, three likes, no comments, and only a 3.58 score. I don't think folks on here like my writing or is it my focus on Interracial?
As stickygirl mentioned earlier, maybe next year the challenge should include a standard author's note explaining the conditions limiting it to 750 words. The Amorous Goods anthology challenge has its standard mandatory prologue. This might assist new authors by being proactive in heading off the reader critics.750-word stories, in my experience, and from what I gather from others, do not score all that well. Some do, but I can't put my finger on the winning formula. It's been said several times that the format limitation is too short for decent development for anticipation of the eventual climax (of either kind).
I guess it's the LitE equivalent of a quickie, yeah, it might get one of you off, but the other is likely to be left wanting more.
I put a short note at the top of mine stating it was for the challenge and Laurel linked it to the official page when she processed it.As stickygirl mentioned earlier, maybe next year the challenge should include a standard author's note explaining the conditions limiting it to 750 words. The Amorous Goods anthology challenge has its standard mandatory prologue. This might assist new authors by being proactive in heading off the reader critics.
My previous entries solicited several shitty comments about it being too short. At least I haven't yet received such comments this year with the disclaimer stating it is required to be only 750 words. But I've still appreciated my dedicated 1-bombers!I don’t think disclaimers help. People will hate these for being too short, no matter what we say.
Thank you. I actually had to add to it to get the word count right. I wrote that a few years ago. And it only had 450-500 words. So I figured with my increased writing skills, I could take it and re-work it and make it better. Being meant as a bedtime story I think helped, as it is naturally shorter.Yours (Grant) is one of the better ones I've read so far this year.
In some stories, I think the authors removed too much to fit within the 750-word limit, and it makes the story too hard to follow. But yours was well done.
I know it's a typo, but now I'm stuck wondering what a cuck sucker might be.
My first one up this time has already done far better than in earlier 750-word-exercises. 56 votes already (which is very high for me--the GM category) and is Hot, currently at 4.56. In previous exercises, my entries usually didn't get above the high 3s in rating, at least not initially. No complaints of "too short" yet. My author's note is a simple notification that it's submitted to an exactly 750-words exercise. I've just submitted the second one (of six), which is much different from the first, but also set in a blizzard.750-word stories, in my experience, and from what I gather from others, do not score all that well. Some do, but I can't put my finger on the winning formula. It's been said several times that the format limitation is too short for decent development for anticipation of the eventual climax (of either kind).
I guess it's the LitE equivalent of a quickie, yeah, it might get one of you off, but the other is likely to be left wanting more.