Agiel
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I really like a comma, as against colons or semi-colons. But I shudder, as would my English teacher, at the thought of putting a comma before “too” in this instance.
“I have a question, too,” said Norman, raising his hand.
“I too have a question,” said Norman, raising his hand.
“I also have a question,” said Norman, raising his hand.
Or maybe just:
“I have a question,” said Norman, raising his hand, as soon as the teacher had answered Donald.
But that’s me and maybe you should just write as you prefer to get the point across. I don’t think the majority of readers will be bothered as long as the story is a good one. It’s only the grammar police who would be concerned about it.
“I have a question, too,” said Norman, raising his hand.
“I too have a question,” said Norman, raising his hand.
“I also have a question,” said Norman, raising his hand.
Or maybe just:
“I have a question,” said Norman, raising his hand, as soon as the teacher had answered Donald.
But that’s me and maybe you should just write as you prefer to get the point across. I don’t think the majority of readers will be bothered as long as the story is a good one. It’s only the grammar police who would be concerned about it.