Zeb_Carter
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Okay, here's one I work up thinking about and I don't know why and I have so many I thought I'd share it hear to see if someone else would like to write it.
Young woman is driving home for the store when the first spring rain hits. The streets are slippery and she spins out turning on to her block. The car goes into the retention pond and sinks to the bottom. The car is filling up with water fast. As she takes her last breath the water covers her face.
She wakes up, lying on the ground two of the neighbor boys home from college for spring break, over her trying to revive her. She gasps, spiting up water, looking up at the to young men. The sit back with relief on their faces. The woman is whisked away by ambulance to the hospital.
The next day, the young men are packing their car for the trip back to college when the woman comes over to them to thank them for saving her life. She kisses each of them passionately and tells them whenever they are home, she is theirs to do with as they please. Anywhere, anytime, she will do what they want.
You all can take it from there. Oh, in my mind she is married and the husband was so happy she survived that he agrees to what she wants to do.
Young woman is driving home for the store when the first spring rain hits. The streets are slippery and she spins out turning on to her block. The car goes into the retention pond and sinks to the bottom. The car is filling up with water fast. As she takes her last breath the water covers her face.
She wakes up, lying on the ground two of the neighbor boys home from college for spring break, over her trying to revive her. She gasps, spiting up water, looking up at the to young men. The sit back with relief on their faces. The woman is whisked away by ambulance to the hospital.
The next day, the young men are packing their car for the trip back to college when the woman comes over to them to thank them for saving her life. She kisses each of them passionately and tells them whenever they are home, she is theirs to do with as they please. Anywhere, anytime, she will do what they want.
You all can take it from there. Oh, in my mind she is married and the husband was so happy she survived that he agrees to what she wants to do.