Escaping Death

Zeb_Carter

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Okay, here's one I work up thinking about and I don't know why and I have so many I thought I'd share it hear to see if someone else would like to write it.

Young woman is driving home for the store when the first spring rain hits. The streets are slippery and she spins out turning on to her block. The car goes into the retention pond and sinks to the bottom. The car is filling up with water fast. As she takes her last breath the water covers her face.

She wakes up, lying on the ground two of the neighbor boys home from college for spring break, over her trying to revive her. She gasps, spiting up water, looking up at the to young men. The sit back with relief on their faces. The woman is whisked away by ambulance to the hospital.

The next day, the young men are packing their car for the trip back to college when the woman comes over to them to thank them for saving her life. She kisses each of them passionately and tells them whenever they are home, she is theirs to do with as they please. Anywhere, anytime, she will do what they want.

You all can take it from there. Oh, in my mind she is married and the husband was so happy she survived that he agrees to what she wants to do.
 
Why must they wait?
If that is the case, it ought to build the plot- like they need to stay celibate/not have a gf when they get back, because she wants their cherries/doesn't want them cheating with her.
 
Why must they wait?
If that is the case, it ought to build the plot- like they need to stay celibate/not have a gf when they get back, because she wants their cherries/doesn't want them cheating with her.

She isn't in control, they are. She is just thanking them with her body when they are home from college. There is a long hot summer coming up...

I see one or the other or both showing up at her place anytime of the day and twice on Tuesdays, to get a piece. These are young, handsome, college freshmen, hot to trot at the drop of a hat.

One might even come over while the wife is fucking her husband cowgirl and slips into her ass. Then the other shows up and quiets her screams of passion by shoving his dick in her mouth to make her airtight.
 
She isn't in control, they are. She is just thanking them with her body when they are home from college. There is a long hot summer coming up...

I see one or the other or both showing up at her place anytime of the day and twice on Tuesdays, to get a piece. These are young, handsome, college freshmen, hot to trot at the drop of a hat.

One might even come over while the wife is fucking her husband cowgirl and slips into her ass. Then the other shows up and quiets her screams of passion by shoving his dick in her mouth to make her airtight.

Does she enjoy moustache Mondays best? On Mondays she gets to ride for free...
 
Okay, I have decided to write this one myself. Don't know when I will finish it but when I do, I will post a link in this thread. It has nagged its way into my mind and I just couldn't help myself. :(
 
This just seems like another one of those grateful damsel in distress things where she ends up giving up control to others.

Flip it a bit .... work it out so the accident was staged as a part of her pursuit of the neighbor frats. Give her the power of making things happen.
 
This just seems like another one of those grateful damsel in distress things where she ends up giving up control to others.

Flip it a bit .... work it out so the accident was staged as a part of her pursuit of the neighbor frats. Give her the power of making things happen.

I never understood the attraction to frat boys
 
I never understood the attraction to frat boys

Young, viral, intelligent even though they might not be smart about somethings, most are fairly good looking, and they are always hot to trot.

Originally Posted by jaF0
This just seems like another one of those grateful damsel in distress things where she ends up giving up control to others.

Flip it a bit .... work it out so the accident was staged as a part of her pursuit of the neighbor frats. Give her the power of making things happen.

And who says she's giving up control? ;)

And you want her to die just to meet the frat boys down the street? Oh my. :eek:
 
I wrote one like tis...

In my story, a young woman is going to her Grandmother's house and her GPS takes her down the wrong road. (This happens if you ever come to my house). Anyway, the woman gets stuck, and some rednecks happen along and almost rape her, but at the last minute an old farmer shows up with shotgun and drives them off.

She ends up spending the night at his farmhouse because of the blizzard, it being dark, and his tractor hard to start. Anyway she finds a strange attraction to him for him helping her, and she gives him sex despite their age difference.

He always wonders about her, until a year later...she shows up. In the car is a surprise...his infant son. He ten tells her that his late-wife and him could not have children, and is ecstatic about the birth.
 
Well, I submitted the story four days ago this morning. It's still in Pending. As soon as it's up I'll post a link here.
 
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