Comment on my newest...

[Zeb_Carter]

So, I just got this comment from Daveh143 via email...

"You are the most worthless writer on here. I'm hoping to destroy your ratings. Fuck off you racist homo!"

I have to assume my latest story caused him to remember all the things his wife made him do while he was her cuckold.

And the fact that I don't write gay male, nor do my characters exhibit any racist tendencies, his wife must have been making him suck her bulls cocks for her.

I emailed him back over on Yahoo that I didn't care about ratings. Which I really don't.

Now, I'm wondering how many other authors of LW stories he's threatened?

Anyone here heard from this POS.

 

[TadOverdon]

We truly live in a new world, when a knuckle-dragger who wants to call someone the worst things they can think of settles on a combo like "racist homo." Straddling the culture war divide a bit, there. LOL

 

[SimonDoom]

I doubt he has a wife.

But he fantasizes about having one, and it fills him with rage, because he knows -- he just knows -- that she would cheat on him. Because, you know, that's women.

And with a racist homo, no less.

 

[DanDraper]

The LW section is filled with those incel morons. You can write a story about a woman being faithful to her husband and treats him like a king and they will still find something to complain about.


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[lovecraft68]

Rare to get an e-mail to respond to.

Last time that happened to me was someone who thought I was female saying they live within "spitting distance" of RI and he and his friends were going to come find me, rape me, beat me and pour acid into my rancid cunt.

I replied that I was actually a guy and attached a picture of my knife collection.

If it happened today I wouldn't bother replying, but that was back when my wife was ill and I would have enjoyed their visit immensely.

 

[BiscuitHammer]

If it happened today I wouldn't bother replying, but that was back when my wife was ill and I would have enjoyed their visit immensely.

I'm sorry that happened at all. As someone who slugs Nazis and incels when they dare to come out of their slimy holes, I find this kind of behaviour incredibly vile. True, they're ultimately harmless and full of seething rage and self-loathing, but they the fact that any person who walks upright has to endure them is irksome.

I don't know your circumstances, but please accept my best wishes or condolences about your wife as applicable.

 

[JaxRhapsody]

I doubt he has a wife.

But he fantasizes about having one, and it fills him with rage, because he knows -- he just knows -- that she would cheat on him. Because, you know, that's women.

And with a racist homo, no less.

With a bigger dick and truck.

 

[JaxRhapsody]

The LW section is filled with those incel morons. You can write a story about a woman being faithful to her husband and treats him like a king and they will still find something to complain about.


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"Sure she sucked his dick real good, while feeding him his sandwich but where was the ball rub and finger in the asshole? Your shit sucks 1 star!"

 

[Bray123]

The daft thing is that the ratings system here is so primitive that anyone can up (or down) vote to their heart's content. You can give any story the score you choose with a bit of thought on how scores are tracked and half an hour idle clicking.

I've been scolded before for explaining the process, but really it's not that hard to work out.

 

[ElectricBlue]

The daft thing is that the ratings system here is so primitive that anyone can up (or down) vote to their heart's content. You can give any story the score you choose with a bit of thought on how scores are tracked and half an hour idle clicking.

I've been scolded before for explaining the process, but really it's not that hard to work out.

Yes, and it's that pattern of behaviour the sweeps detect and eliminate. The site didn't come down in the last shower, either.

You should be encouraging people to vote with some kind of integrity, not encouraging people to manipulate.

 

[MrCurrie01]

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[MrCurrie01]

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[Wifetheif]

So, I just got this comment from Daveh143 via email...

"You are the most worthless writer on here. I'm hoping to destroy your ratings. Fuck off you racist homo!"

I have to assume my latest story caused him to remember all the things his wife made him do while he was her cuckold.

And the fact that I don't write gay male, nor do my characters exhibit any racist tendencies, his wife must have been making him suck her bulls cocks for her.

I emailed him back over on Yahoo that I didn't care about ratings. Which I really don't.

Now, I'm wondering how many other authors of LW stories he's threatened?

Anyone here heard from this POS.

I haven't but take EVERY snide comment in LW with a huge grain of salt. I ALMOST pity these guys. They obviously can't get laid to save their lives or have jobs that suck and wives that don't. They think they're a big man ( and it is ALWAYS men) behind their keyboards and that they have really shown you up. What's so frustrating is that LW is such a fun topic to write about and its possibilities are almost endless. I'd write more in it if not for the trolls. I don't take it personally, I do however hate to have my work shat on simply because I dared to post it.

 

[Zeb_Carter]

Well heard from him again...

This feedback was sent by: Email Removed

Comments:

Told ya I would continue rating your shift stories as the piece of shit they are!

The reason I'm leaving his email address is that he doesn't deserve anonymity, even though I laugh at him and his comments.

And here is his lit ID Dlh143, it seems he has no imagination. He also doesn't have any thing submitted under that ID so, I have to assume it's an alt some one uses to be a full time asshole.

If you want email him of leave him a PM.

Email addresses should not be posted to the open forum. Especially when it's someone else's -- AH Mod

 

[TadOverdon]

Yeah, I'm not sure about that kind of dogpiling.

I don't like nasty emails either. But then, I do post porn, so...

 

[Comshaw]

So, I just got this comment from Daveh143 via email...

"You are the most worthless writer on here. I'm hoping to destroy your ratings. Fuck off you racist homo!"

I have to assume my latest story caused him to remember all the things his wife made him do while he was her cuckold.

And the fact that I don't write gay male, nor do my characters exhibit any racist tendencies, his wife must have been making him suck her bulls cocks for her.

I emailed him back over on Yahoo that I didn't care about ratings. Which I really don't.

Now, I'm wondering how many other authors of LW stories he's threatened?

Anyone here heard from this POS.

I haven't run into him yet, but I imagine I will at some point.

On the subject of reader comments:
I wrote a story a while back and it was well-received. Some of the comments were that they would like me to continue the story. Normally I try to stick to a one-off story. It's just my way of doing things. But I decided to accommodate the readers and continue. So far they seem to be enjoying it.

Today on a different story I get this comment:
"Five star story - 1 star ending. Most disappointed you left them to go their separate ways. There are hundreds of stories on this site alone in which this age disparity or greater have worked out in a positive manner. You perhaps exceeded your intention of making their feelings for each other more than intended, but I read it as true love, not something to be abandoned because a of an age difference that wasn't even clearly defined. Now go back and write a part two in which either or both seek out the other."

It made me laugh. While I will consider a continuation of a story if the readers want it and if I get motivated enough to do it, how can any reader here think that demanding such from an author (whose only payment is a stroke or two via readers) will make it happen? In fact, because of my personal psychological makeup, things like this cause me to become reticent about it. I was never much for taking dumb ass demands or orders. And yes it has caused me some grief in my life. But I decided a long time ago that I would take what comes to be true to who I am.

Do any of you have a trigger like that? One that causes you to lock your heels, put on the brakes and say 'no fucking way!'?

Comshaw

 

[lovecraft68]

I haven't run into him yet, but I imagine I will at some point.

On the subject of reader comments:
I wrote a story a while back and it was well-received. Some of the comments were that they would like me to continue the story. Normally I try to stick to a one-off story. It's just my way of doing things. But I decided to accommodate the readers and continue. So far they seem to be enjoying it.

Today on a different story I get this comment:
"Five star story - 1 star ending. Most disappointed you left them to go their separate ways. There are hundreds of stories on this site alone in which this age disparity or greater have worked out in a positive manner. You perhaps exceeded your intention of making their feelings for each other more than intended, but I read it as true love, not something to be abandoned because a of an age difference that wasn't even clearly defined. Now go back and write a part two in which either or both seek out the other."

It made me laugh. While I will consider a continuation of a story if the readers want it and if I get motivated enough to do it, how can any reader here think that demanding such from an author (whose only payment is a stroke or two via readers) will make it happen? In fact, because of my personal psychological makeup, things like this cause me to become reticent about it. I was never much for taking dumb ass demands or orders. And yes it has caused me some grief in my life. But I decided a long time ago that I would take what comes to be true to who I am.

Do any of you have a trigger like that? One that causes you to lock your heels, put on the brakes and say 'no fucking way!'?

Comshaw

I received a comment on a taboo story that was -'paraphrasing-

Great story, good characters, hot sex, ready to click that five until junior pulled it out and came on her tits. It should have been inside or else there's no point in mother son sex.

Who knew that there was only one acceptable place? Learn something knew every day.

I/T is not the troll fest of LW, most of the readership is happy if you give them their kink, but it has its weird factions and niches.

I've gotten a few where they don't like the "mom" talked dirty. Its okay she's screwing her son, having sex in multiple positions, oral sex...but talking dirty? Mom's don't do that!

 

[Zeb_Carter]

I haven't run into him yet, but I imagine I will at some point.

On the subject of reader comments:
I wrote a story a while back and it was well-received. Some of the comments were that they would like me to continue the story. Normally I try to stick to a one-off story. It's just my way of doing things. But I decided to accommodate the readers and continue. So far they seem to be enjoying it.

Today on a different story I get this comment:
"Five star story - 1 star ending. Most disappointed you left them to go their separate ways. There are hundreds of stories on this site alone in which this age disparity or greater have worked out in a positive manner. You perhaps exceeded your intention of making their feelings for each other more than intended, but I read it as true love, not something to be abandoned because a of an age difference that wasn't even clearly defined. Now go back and write a part two in which either or both seek out the other."

It made me laugh. While I will consider a continuation of a story if the readers want it and if I get motivated enough to do it, how can any reader here think that demanding such from an author (whose only payment is a stroke or two via readers) will make it happen? In fact, because of my personal psychological makeup, things like this cause me to become reticent about it. I was never much for taking dumb ass demands or orders. And yes it has caused me some grief in my life. But I decided a long time ago that I would take what comes to be true to who I am.

Do any of you have a trigger like that? One that causes you to lock your heels, put on the brakes and say 'no fucking way!'?

Comshaw

Not really, although just to show the asshole Dave that I don't care about scores or comments I turned them off on my latest one. So, he found another of my stories to comment on. I just deleted it without reading it. Fuck him and the horse his wife fucks.

 

[Bramblethorn]

Today on a different story I get this comment:
"Five star story - 1 star ending. Most disappointed you left them to go their separate ways. There are hundreds of stories on this site alone in which this age disparity or greater have worked out in a positive manner. You perhaps exceeded your intention of making their feelings for each other more than intended, but I read it as true love, not something to be abandoned because a of an age difference that wasn't even clearly defined. Now go back and write a part two in which either or both seek out the other."

It made me laugh. While I will consider a continuation of a story if the readers want it and if I get motivated enough to do it, how can any reader here think that demanding such from an author (whose only payment is a stroke or two via readers) will make it happen? In fact, because of my personal psychological makeup, things like this cause me to become reticent about it. I was never much for taking dumb ass demands or orders. And yes it has caused me some grief in my life. But I decided a long time ago that I would take what comes to be true to who I am.

Do any of you have a trigger like that? One that causes you to lock your heels, put on the brakes and say 'no fucking way!'?

I got this one on the final chapter of my last series:

No! No! No! This cannot be the end! Please let there be a Chapter 13.

This is a beautifully written story. A bit slow at the start, but eventually becomes a real page turner. It becomes very apparent early on that both Anjali and Sara truly love each other -- but neither can honestly admit that fact to themselves. It's also apparent that, even they part in Iceland, that they each still love each other and will (or at least should) get together again sometime in the future. It's also apparent that even though Lucy is in love with Sarah, any relationship they will have will be one of friendship, not true love. Lucy always will be just a rebound for Sarah.

Now, I truly appreciate the efforts of the author. My knowledge of the trials and tribulations of those effected by autism is close to zero. I am very appreciative that the author gives us a real insight into their world. Before reading this story, all I knew of autism was limited to Dustin Hoffman's portrayal of an autistic man in the movies. Which, I am truly sure is not reality. Thank you, Bramblethorn, for shedding a light into the darkness we all have of that world.

But, I, and probably most of the other readers, believe that Sarah and Anjali's story cannot end here. Or, that there must be a lot of life to live before Sarah and Lucy develop the same love that Sarah and Anjali left behind. Right now, we all feel empty. Unfinished. Unsatisfied. Please tell us that there will be a Chapter 13!

Always great to be told "you got your own characters wrong, here's what they SHOULD be feeling". Double points for being told this, as an autistic author writing two autistic characters, from somebody whose only reference point on autism is "Rain Man". And after one of those characters effectively says "I think I might be aromantic and I need time alone to figure that out".

Same guy was also posting on a friend's stories to the effect of "this new story sucks, you should write more chapters of the one I liked instead". Weirdly, trashing an author's current work actually isn't an effective way to motivate them to write to order. Who knew?

(Please don't go looking for that dude though, a couple of us had words with him about why this is a jerk move, and it's possible he's learned the error of his ways.)

 

[ElectricBlue]

Always great to be told "you got your own characters wrong, here's what they SHOULD be feeling". Double points for being told this, as an autistic author writing two autistic characters, from somebody whose only reference point on autism is "Rain Man". And after one of those characters effectively says "I think I might be aromantic and I need time alone to figure that out".

This just goes to show an author cannot dictate how a story is read, no matter what meaning you think you've put into it.

Cudos for getting such a heartfelt response though - that's the bit you should be celebrating. If your writing was rubbish you wouldn't have got the same response. Remember too, NTs ain't NDs, so you can't really expect the same thought processes.

 

[oggbashan]

Anon doesn't like my latest.

I have deleted at least one comment straight away. It might not be one of my best but I think it is competent. It is in the Mature category, so little sex, but not 'none' as claimed by one.

Edited: Deleted two more anon comments...

If you want to attack all my works without reading them, say who you are, or be deleted.