Lesbian story - 1st time author

[Arking]

This is a semi Auto- Bio long story. Romantic with graphic sexual references. I just need some feed back from an experienced Editor.

As I'm a mature person, creative criticism is welcome and no offence will be taken.

Not sure if it should broken down into short stories or kept as a long read?

I've been asked to add the actual word count of the story. So far it is only. 3724 words long, but is nowhere near being finished.

 

[ElectricBlue]

This is a semi Auto- Bio long story. Romantic with graphic sexual references. I just need some feed back from an experienced Editor.

As I'm a mature person, creative criticism is welcome and no offence will be taken.

Not sure if it should broken down into short stories or kept as a long read?

How many words?

 

[CiaoSteve]

If you are still looking, I'd be happy to take a look. Several of my stories have a lesbian side to them if you wanted to check my style.