“Hammered – an Ode to Mickey Spillane” Story Event: Official Support Thread

Well, I would have said yes, but the challenge organizer says no, so that opens up the whole realm of PIs, including Mannix, Magnum PI, Peter Gunn, et al.

Not all detective stories are noir. Noir is a particular type of style. It's hard to define but it's usually identifiable when you watch it or read it.

Magnum PI, for example, is definitely not noir. He's too much of a good guy, and the tone of the series is too positive, even lightly comic at times. His side kick is definitely not a noir character. And it's in Hawaii, an un-noir setting (at least as portrayed in the series).

Elements characteristic of noir include:

A dark, cynical attitude that pervades about the world, people, and their motives.

People are easily corrupted by sex and money.

The hero, often a detective, usually has some good qualities, but he's not perfectly good. He's in it for the money, too. He is cynical, not optimistic, about the world. He doesn't expect much from people or the world. Usually, he finds people disappoint him.

Women are often femme fatales, temptresses, and instigators of bad stuff.

Authorities are often corrupt, or at least not to be trusted.

If there's humor, it's dark and bleak and sardonic. It's never light.

Noir is unpretentious. It appeals to the reader's basic desires for sex and violence, told in clear prose.

Sometimes it's hard to put your finger on.

Chinatown is definitely noir. Jack Nicholson's character Jake Gittes is noir. But French Connection, made around the same time, is NOT noir. The Godfather, even though it's cynical and full of bad people and violence and sex, is not at all noir.

Blade Runner, though it's sci fi, has many elements of noir.
 
Well, I would have said yes, but the challenge organizer says no, so that opens up the whole realm of PIs, including Mannix, Magnum PI, Peter Gunn, et al.


One other thing of note for writers tackling this. One of the key features of both the McGavin and Keach TV series was the satire and tongue-in-cheek, backhanded humor mixed with non-PC wisecracks.

Well, I’m not going hard and fast on how anyone wants to interpret this. Treat Mickey Spillane As a stylistic guide and go for it. I wouldn’t even say it has to be the same period, just that short snappy minimalism, non PC of course, and that’s Spillane sex and violence combo. I’m not doing a detective / PI story myself. Mine will be a bit more action oriented.

It’s a bit hard to define, and I think Simon has a good handle on it - I’m organizing but I’d say if it looks like a duck and quacks like a duck, it’s a duck. So go for it however you you see it, just think Spillane. Once you’ve read a couple the style is there. Bars. Dames. Dolls. Heaters. Palookas. Hoods. Rainy nights. Back alleys. Slopping beer. Tough guys.
 
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I have a lot of stories that approach the Mickey Spillane/Raymond Chandler effect. I don't think I'll push any further into someone else's mold, though.
 
I have a lot of stories that approach the Mickey Spillane/Raymond Chandler effect. I don't think I'll push any further into someone else's mold, though.

Just do one of yours. Pretty close sometimes 🤗
 
If you're looking for visual representations, try ... the trade paperback version of The Fade Out by Ed Brubaker. It's a twelve-issue comic series that nails the tone perfectly.
I second this. It's excellent.
 
For those that want an abridged bibliography (there are some fuller ones, but this one has many of the referenced works in Nook format) here is a link:

https://www.barnesandnoble.com/b/contributor/mickey-spillane/_/N-2khv

[disclaimer]I have no connection to B&N other than it is one of the last surviving bookstores near me.[/disclaimer]

I wouldn’t even say it has to be the same period, just that short snappy minimalism, non PC of course, and that’s Spillane sex and violence combo. I’m not doing a detective / PI story myself. Mine will be a bit more action oriented.

If you think about it, the movie Blade Runner with Harrison Ford is a very noir film and it is definitely not in Mickey's timeline.

I don't know if I will try. I am not big on violence, especially to dames, unless they are really asking for it. There's nothing like a good backhand to straighten a dame out, though.

James
 
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Wish there was some way to position this at the top of the thread....
 
The 'Mike Hammer' TV series used 'Harlem Nocturne' as a theme song. Got it in my computer!
 
Dammit, Chloe! This is an absolute soul-sucker. It’s a year away and I can’t keep my mind on anything else.

“I’ll get you for this!” the voice hissed from the dark alley.
 
Dammit, Chloe! This is an absolute soul-sucker. It’s a year away and I can’t keep my mind on anything else.

“I’ll get you for this!” the voice hissed from the dark alley.
I know! It's not like me to ever plan ahead, but I've actually got the last sentence of this story written, and a few key characters. Now all I've got to do is get a story to put before it...
 
I know! It's not like me to ever plan ahead, but I've actually got the last sentence of this story written, and a few key characters. Now all I've got to do is get a story to put before it...

You guys have it bad, huh? I have a story lined up for the event, and it sparked off the idea for a novel to publish, and I got a custom designed cover from goonwrite dot com which is great but now I have to write it. That wasn’t on my list!
 
I've got a character (from a previous story), and a concept involving BDSM and goodness knows what else, but I haven't got much further. But it's a neat event idea.
 
I've got a character (from a previous story), and a concept involving BDSM and goodness knows what else, but I haven't got much further. But it's a neat event idea.
I'm downloading Veronica Lake photos because 1940s movie star, right? Hard bitten detective drives a beat up Ford, he's a ring-in from my time travelling EH thing from years ago, recast. She's got the kid brother who's the dead reporter who got the dirt on the scumbag movie producer who is of course into cocaine and bondage. My latest short story squeeze, Ruby, is the cigarette smoking gal with the heart of gold. What could go wrong?

Now, of course, I've done a Simon and talked it all up. I've got to deliver, or he'll get payback for all that merciless New Year resolution bollocks I stirred him with last year. I'll write him in with a cameo. He can do Jack Nicholson, Chloe can do the gal from Chinatown. I need to find a map of 1940s LA. Fuckin' nailing the noir, right there ;).
 
Holy Shit! I just realized I have a story like this already started. :eek:

Not exactly Mickey Whathisname but a detective anyway.
 
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