Help with my new story

[WatchedBeth]

It’s been rejected twice. Aargh!
I guess I need some additional editor help. If you can genuinely help me and have an interest in Mature / Stranger play, please pm me. It would be nice to get my story published. It’s called An Innocent Date.

Thank you. Beth x

 

[Carnevil9]

It’s been rejected twice. Aargh!
I guess I need some additional editor help. If you can genuinely help me and have an interest in Mature / Stranger play, please pm me. It would be nice to get my story published. It’s called An Innocent Date.

Thank you. Beth x

First of all, this is the wrong forum for your post.

Second, you'd get more replies if you explain what the problem was with your story. What did the rejection notes say?

 

[WatchedBeth]

First of all, this is the wrong forum for your post.

Second, you'd get more replies if you explain what the problem was with your story. What did the rejection notes say?

Thank you for your reply. Most helpful.