Need a critique

[Indian_Princess]

Hello folks,

I've published a couple of stories on Literotica earlier but have been inactive for quite some time now.

Off late I found time to write a new story, but it is so different from my usual style, I'm not sure whether it is upto the mark. The theme is non consent/BDSM but the story isn't much about sex.

I was hoping to share it with someone who could give me some constructive feedback.

Anyone interested please PM or reply here

 

[ThisNameIsntTakenYet]

Probably going to have more luck in the editor's forum or story feedback.

 

[Bramblethorn]

Probably going to have more luck in the editor's forum or story feedback.

Story Feedback is for stories already posted here, but I think OP is looking for feedback before submitting.

 

[Indian_Princess]

Story Feedback is for stories already posted here, but I think OP is looking for feedback before submitting.

That's right.

 

[ThisNameIsntTakenYet]

Story Feedback is for stories already posted here, but I think OP is looking for feedback before submitting.

That's right.

Then the Editor's Forum I guess. That's what it's for, people proofreading your stories. Just mention you're not looking for thorough editing but just some general feedback.

 

[ChasP]

re critique

Do you have the OpenOffice or LibreOffice suite on your device? Both suites are 100% free to download/use.

How many pgs (wordprocessor #) is it?

I am a copy editor. I won't be editing your story, but rather making suggestions. My comments will appear in the right margins, and I use one of the suites, so if you want to see my suggestions, you'll have to have one of the suites.

 

[ThisNameIsntTakenYet]

Do you have the OpenOffice or LibreOffice suite on your device? Both suites are 100% free to download/use.

How many pgs (wordprocessor #) is it?

I am a copy editor. I won't be editing your story, but rather making suggestions. My comments will appear in the right margins, and I use one of the suites, so if you want to see my suggestions, you'll have to have one of the suites.

Or just knowing a word count can also be useful, that's the general measure of length around here besides Lit-pages.

Also, I tend to use a PDF-printer to turn Word documents into a PDF that includes the comments and Track Changes suggestions for people that don't have MS Word when I edit for them. That way they can still see all the feedback without needing the program. Might be an idea to look into?