An Appeal to all Lit. writers

[friendsmom]

Its an appeal to all Lit writers that I am an Indian boy of 24. My name is "TORON". I am in deep love with my best friend "SAZIB"s mom. Sazib is 25 years old. His mom is around 43 years old. Her name is "SHANAJ". Is there any kind writer to write a story based on us? I would anyhow let sazib read the story. So it will be easy for me to convince sazib.

 

[Sean Renaud]

You have to give a lot more information than that if you're going to get a writer. you're already kind of up against a barrier her to begin with the majority (If I'm not mistaken someone with solid stats feel free to call me an idiot and correct me) of the people on Lit are in North America, the USA in particular. Yes we have people from around the globe but they a minority. What this means is that most of us have little if any knowledge or understanding of Indian Culture or anything that would make it authentic feeling. I could go and wikipedia up some things but pretty much I'd be stuck at "Pakistan is bad, cows are sacred, Ganges River and angry god with six arms!" After that I'm kinda done. It's not something that I'm particularly proud of but there it is.

Then on a personal level you've told us nothing about any of the personalities of the characters. Are you popular? Shy? Rich? Poor? Handsome? What about Shanaj, what kind of woman is she aside from being a mother?

 

[Strangebuddy]

So...you want a story about you and your friend's mom which you'll show to your friend to...convince him it's cool that you love his mom? Or are you hoping that he'll read the story and give you the go ahead to seduce his mom?

I am a bit confused.

 

[Tio_Narratore]

Shanaj was always pleased to have her son's friend over for dinner, and he often asked to be invited. No one complimented her cooking as he did, and it pleased her more than anything to serve him.

"Aunty-ji," he would say warmly, " your murgh mahkani is as golden brown and smooth as the skin of its cook." And Shanaj would thank him as she lowered her eyes in a little embarrassment.

And he would praise her drinks: "Aunty-ji, your lhassi is sweeter than the juice of a fresh-squeezed ripe mango!" As he said it, he would hold up his hand near his chest and squeeze as if he really had a mango. And Shanaj would thank him as she lowered her eyes in embarrassment.

"Oh Aunty-ji," he would exclaim, " You are the best cook in all of India, in all of the world. Your laal maas fills me with the heat and strength of a wild bull." As he spoke he would throw his shoulders back and press his hips forward, and Shanaj would stammer her thanks as she looked down, hoping the frantic beating of her heart would not be noticed...

 

[friendsmom]

Shanaj was always pleased to have her son's friend over for dinner, and he often asked to be invited. No one complimented her cooking as he did, and it pleased her more than anything to serve him.

"Aunty-ji," he would say warmly, " your murgh mahkani is as golden brown and smooth as the skin of its cook." And Shanaj would thank him as she lowered her eyes in a little embarrassment.

And he would praise her drinks: "Aunty-ji, your lhassi is sweeter than the juice of a fresh-squeezed ripe mango!" As he said it, he would hold up his hand near his chest and squeeze as if he really had a mango. And Shanaj would thank him as she lowered her eyes in embarrassment.

"Oh Aunty-ji," he would exclaim, " You are the best cook in all of India, in all of the world. Your laal maas fills me with the heat and strength of a wild bull." As he spoke he would throw his shoulders back and press his hips forward, and Shanaj would stammer her thanks as she looked down, hoping the frantic beating of her heart would not be noticed...

Your Idea seems interesting. pls write one for me

 

[Sean Renaud]

You still haven't given us much to go on here. And PMs are simply not the best way to go about it, it limits the number of people who are involved in the process. In case I wouldn't even know where to begin asking questions on anything cultural to make this accurate. I don't know what kinds of behavior are normal, abnormal, or utterly unthinkable.

 

[friendsmom]

You have to give a lot more information than that if you're going to get a writer. you're already kind of up against a barrier her to begin with the majority (If I'm not mistaken someone with solid stats feel free to call me an idiot and correct me) of the people on Lit are in North America, the USA in particular. Yes we have people from around the globe but they a minority. What this means is that most of us have little if any knowledge or understanding of Indian Culture or anything that would make it authentic feeling. I could go and wikipedia up some things but pretty much I'd be stuck at "Pakistan is bad, cows are sacred, Ganges River and angry god with six arms!" After that I'm kinda done. It's not something that I'm particularly proud of but there it is.

Then on a personal level you've told us nothing about any of the personalities of the characters. Are you popular? Shy? Rich? Poor? Handsome? What about Shanaj, what kind of woman is she aside from being a mother?

I would provide any information you need. pls PM me

 

[friendsmom]

You still haven't given us much to go on here. And PMs are simply not the best way to go about it, it limits the number of people who are involved in the process. In case I wouldn't even know where to begin asking questions on anything cultural to make this accurate. I don't know what kinds of behavior are normal, abnormal, or utterly unthinkable.

Friend's mom is treated almost own mom in our country. They also treat son's friend as own son. Its totally unthinkable & erotic to sleep with friend's mom. Even Marrying her.
You can begin with me fantasizing for Shanaj for the last two years. I intend to go to their house quite frequently

 

[friendsmom]

I am 5'6". My body complexion is fair. My friend sazib is 5'8". He is brown. His mom Shanaj around 43 years old. almost as fair as European people. She has a nice pair of breasts. Not fatty. But has a wide ass which reflects that she got frequent fuck from her husband. Her husband name is Shajahan. he is banker 55 years old. they have their own house. Shanaj usually wear Salwar kamiz. But for occassions she put sharees.

 

[Tio_Narratore]

Your Idea seems interesting. pls write one for me

I wrote to show how such a story could be written, even with little knowledge. Your brief reply seems to suggest you think authors are massed is some hiring hall, desperately waiting for a little nod of interest to put their talents to work.

I do write for people who are intrigued and pleased by my writing. I only write on approval, though, when there's remuneration in the mix.

 

[friendsmom]

I wrote to show how such a story could be written, even with little knowledge. Your brief reply seems to suggest you think authors are massed is some hiring hall, desperately waiting for a little nod of interest to put their talents to work.

I do write for people who are intrigued and pleased by my writing. I only write on approval, though, when there's remuneration in the mix.

what do you want from me? what type of remunaration/ pls let me know

 

[friendsmom]

So...you want a story about you and your friend's mom which you'll show to your friend to...convince him it's cool that you love his mom? Or are you hoping that he'll read the story and give you the go ahead to seduce his mom?

I am a bit confused.

I wish that reading the story my friend would that It would be so erotic if i sleep with his mom. It may lead him to make some space for me

 

[Sean Renaud]

You're doing fine, keep it up.

 

[Tio_Narratore]

what do you want from me? what type of remunaration/ pls let me know

I think what we'd all like to see is you continuing to think out what you want; then you may end up writing a good story for yourself.

 

[friendsmom]

I think what we'd all like to see is you continuing to think out what you want; then you may end up writing a good story for yourself.

But I am not a writer. I won't be able to make a nice story which would make sazib excited. rather he may got angry

 

[Tio_Narratore]

But I am not a writer. I won't be able to make a nice story which would make sazib excited. rather he may got angry

Ok, but you should still try writing. Remember, Vatsayayana said one must be a master of words as well as all other arts to be a good lover.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Oh behave Tio. Also translate that last bit into stupid westerner for me if you'd be so kind.

Lots of people aren't writers or at least lack the confidence. I'm not going to put you on the spot there. I'm going to say that the more details you give about who your characters are and a bit about what they do the better chances you have of getting a story and the better the story will be. Physical descriptions are nice don't get me wrong but what kinds of things you like where would you go, why might you and his mother be hanging out? Is that normal?

 

[friendsmom]

Oh behave Tio. Also translate that last bit into stupid westerner for me if you'd be so kind.

Lots of people aren't writers or at least lack the confidence. I'm not going to put you on the spot there. I'm going to say that the more details you give about who your characters are and a bit about what they do the better chances you have of getting a story and the better the story will be. Physical descriptions are nice don't get me wrong but what kinds of things you like where would you go, why might you and his mother be hanging out? Is that normal?

well she is a moral mother,wife. But her one nervous point is Penis. Its true. when i go to their home sometimes I grab hold my cock over my pant & talk to her. She got angry sometimes with my behavior. And sometimes act its normal. But in both situation she look at my crotch area. Because it become hard.

 

[friendsmom]

Oh behave Tio. Also translate that last bit into stupid westerner for me if you'd be so kind.

Lots of people aren't writers or at least lack the confidence. I'm not going to put you on the spot there. I'm going to say that the more details you give about who your characters are and a bit about what they do the better chances you have of getting a story and the better the story will be. Physical descriptions are nice don't get me wrong but what kinds of things you like where would you go, why might you and his mother be hanging out? Is that normal?

once I was looking closely at her ass & sazib noticed that. But he didnt tell me anything. Both the mom son can understand my desire. But they cant talk to me on this because may be they feel ashamed. In our society women are conservative. If any women molested but not raped she may quite silent.

 

[friendsmom]

You still haven't given us much to go on here. And PMs are simply not the best way to go about it, it limits the number of people who are involved in the process. In case I wouldn't even know where to begin asking questions on anything cultural to make this accurate. I don't know what kinds of behavior are normal, abnormal, or utterly unthinkable.

Will these information be helpful?

 

[Sean Renaud]

I can't promise a story but yes the information is helpful.

 

[friendsmom]

I can't promise a story but yes the information is helpful.

Pls sir make a story for me. It would be great if you narrate the story from Sazib's perspective most. Mine & Shanaj will also describe but Sazib's telling will be more interesting. And pls mantion our name "Toron" is me, My friend "Sazib" & his mom "Shanaj"

 

[Tio_Narratore]

Oh behave Tio. Also translate that last bit into stupid westerner for me if you'd be so kind.

Do you mean about Vatsayayana? He was the author of the Kama Sutra. In the introduction he points out that the positions and acts he describes are not enough for proper sex. A good lover must be able to cook, paint, play and compose music, recite and write poetry, tell stories, know astronomy and mathematics, and just about everything else you can get from a good college education.

And I would note that your "prodding" has pushed him into developing more of his own story, and it's becoming quite interesting. He may just need some editing help to polish it in the end.

 

[MyRubiLips]

But I am not a writer. I won't be able to make a nice story which would make sazib excited. rather he may got angry

He may get angry regardless, especially if his parents are still married. How is adultry viewed in India? (Fantasy is one thing...but to say you want the story to "make your friend give his blessing on the sex is a whole other ball of wax!)

 

[loquere]

I think this fellow should write his own story.

However 'Tio' you could edit it for him.