I want to write a novel about a cheating mom. Any suggestions?

[deb66]

I’m planning to write a novel about a cheating mom who gradually descends into depravity, unlocking more and more sexual experiences under the guidance of her affair partner.

The protagonist is 18 years old, and his mom is 36. His dad has a premature ejaculation issue—severe enough that he couldn’t last even a minute during a blowjob from Mom, cumming in her mouth. Naturally, this left Mom unsatisfied. For 18 years of marriage, she’s been unfulfilled, relying solely on masturbation to meet her needs, which sets the stage for the story to come.

Later, Dad goes abroad for work, and Mom, under the relentless pursuit of her boss, starts an affair with him. This part will span several chapters detailing Mom’s affair with her boss, showing how her sexual skills improve step by step under his guidance—from a shy, inexperienced woman who couldn’t even give a good blowjob, to a skilled seductress who masters techniques like rimming.

Eventually, her boss’s business hits hard times, teetering on the brink of bankruptcy. At his urging, Mom is forced to sell her body to clients to secure orders for the company. This section will include stories involving several clients: a fat, balding middle-aged man, a tall, muscular black man, and more. Through these encounters, Mom’s sexual experiences expand—she gets fucked by a black man’s forearm-sized cock for the first time; experiences her first threesome when a client brings a friend to join in; and later unlocks anal sex, public exposure, and more extreme acts. One client even brings his son, and they fuck her together in the same hole. This part culminates in a massive gangbang with over a dozen men, where Mom reaches her peak of depravity and fully falls.

The third part focuses on the protagonist’s college classmates and his mom. In the previous chapter, a client and his son fucked Mom together. That son, Mark, happens to be my college classmate and a member of a fraternity. Mark brings his frat brothers to toy with Mom in all sorts of ways—glory holes, piss play, and more. At every frat party, Mom is called over to perform a striptease and gets gangbanged by the members. During this, her sexual skills reach their peak—no man can last more than 3 minutes in her mouth. The frat’s initiation test becomes surviving 2.5 minutes of Mom’s blowjob without cumming. The climax of this section is the protagonist’s initiation: Mom, blindfolded, gives him a blowjob without realizing it’s him. He passes the test and later joins the gangbang, finally fucking his mom.

I’m still brainstorming the later parts, but the plan is for the female lead to fall even further, becoming a cheap prostitute.

What do you think of this story, friends? Any suggestions?

 

[TheWritingGroup]

It sounds as if your protagonist doesn't even appear until 2/3 of the way through the book?

-Annie

 

[Rob_Royale]

I think the son is superfluous here. Unnecessary. Lots of readers in the I/T category but they won't be happy if there's only one scene of incest at the very end.

Make the son the neighbors boy in the story. He's lusted for her for years, and when he finally sees her in the frat she's terrified and wildly turned on. He could tell everyone, ruin everything. Bring her whole life crashing down. But seeing the look in his eye, she knows that after this, she'll own him, body and soul.

Maybe through him she finds a way out of her risky debaucherous lifestyle. In return for her continued carnal visits, he'll manage an OnlyFans account for her. This way she's able to break from the shitty job and people who used her.

This is more of a happy ending than your version but that's just my style.

 

[deb66]

It sounds as if your protagonist doesn't even appear until 2/3 of the way through the book?

-Annie

The approach I envisioned is that in the first two parts, the male protagonist spies on his mom having sex with various men through different means, described from the male protagonist's first-person perspective to create a stronger sense of immersion. As the mom gradually descends into depravity, the protagonist's attitude toward her continuously changes—from initially being infatuated with her to later hoping she gets thoroughly ravaged. Since I’m writing a plot summary, I omitted this part of the description and focused on depicting the mom’s descent into depravity. Thank you for your suggestions.

 

[Noor]

This story sounds like an incel male’s wet dream, is that what you intented?
Who is your audience? Where is the likable character, why should the reader care enough to continue reading?

 

[deb66]

I think the son is superfluous here. Unnecessary. Lots of readers in the I/T category but they won't be happy if there's only one scene of incest at the very end.

Make the son the neighbors boy in the story. He's lusted for her for years, and when he finally sees her in the frat she's terrified and wildly turned on. He could tell everyone, ruin everything. Bring her whole life crashing down. But seeing the look in his eye, she knows that after this, she'll own him, body and soul.

Maybe through him she finds a way out of her risky debaucherous lifestyle. In return for her continued carnal visits, he'll manage an OnlyFans account for her. This way she's able to break from the shitty job and people who used her.

This is more of a happy ending than your version but that's just my style.

Hello, thank you for your suggestions. This isn’t a traditional incest-themed story; it’s similar in style to an article I really like, “MOM GETS STRIP SEARCHED.” In the early parts, the story is described from the son’s perspective, detailing the process of the mom’s infidelity and violation, which creates a stronger sense of immersion. As the mom gradually descends into depravity, the protagonist’s attitude toward her continuously evolves—from initially being infatuated with her to later hoping she gets thoroughly ravaged. Since I’m writing a plot summary, I omitted this part of the description and focused on depicting the mom’s descent into depravity. Your suggestion about the mom starting an OnlyFans account at the end is a great idea, and I think it could work well with the protagonist engaging in various live-streamed sexual acts. I’ll seriously consider it—thank you!

 

[deb66]

This story sounds like an incel male’s wet dream, is that what you intented?
Who is your audience? Where is the likable character, why should the reader care enough to continue reading?

This isn’t a traditional incest-themed story; it’s similar in style to an article I really like, “MOM GETS STRIP SEARCHED.”I think some people’s fetish is seeing their mom being violated, and honestly, I’m one of those people. I believe this might stem from when I witnessed my mom cheating in the past—I once saw her having sex with three men at our house, and since then, I’ve unlocked this fetish, desperately wanting to see my mom get thoroughly ravaged. Part of this novel is inspired by my personal experiences.

 

[taimur40]

The plot here overlaps between cheating wife and mother/son incest and both have their own dynamics. The connecting part between the two seems an typical boy fantasy (i.e. spying on mom, mom getting hot and they end up in bed). Also, the age of the mother seems a little too young, at 36 having a son of 18 means she got pregnant at 17. Perhaps a 40 year old MILF mother might be fore appropriate. Nonetheless, its your story or its your call.

For the first part, the husband lack of satisfaction is just one factor. In my opinion, there should be emotional support aspect too, like the husband is more and more busy, she find herself with no one to share her feelings and the help that she seek. The boss needs to lend his shoulder to cry on first to have her legs on them later. Moreover, cheating after such a long time is a big step and there is always lot at stack, it requires a mental state where a person goes through a serios of steps for self convincing with justifications of the actions and next course of actions. Helping to save the business of boss is one thing, but escalate to the gangbangs may be better if its kind of a celebration or victory party with customer, having his mistress and the whole scenario pull her to the dark side, instead just boss asking to spread her legs for people she doesn't know.

For the second part, the son may figure it out and is emotionally hurt. He confronts the mother with proof she cannot deny. The family will fall apart for sure and its all in the hands of the son. The son wants to punish her and there is where he takes the control to drive her to the depth of depravity. None of them see that coming, the mother just wants to damage control, while the son want his anger to vent out, so one thing lead to another and she gets thoroughly ravaged.

Just my 2 cents...

 

[StillStunned]

Have you written anything before? Because if not, you might find it easier to start small than going for a full-length novel straight away. The quicker satisfaction of putting something out there and getting immediate response is very encouraging while you're still finding your feet. Will a novel, you might run out of steam and lose the enthusiasm as soon as you hit the first difficulties.

Writing smaller is also good practice. You can find your voice. Reader feedback will help you to identify your weaknesses. And it gives you a completely different perspective on the effort that writing takes. When I first started, I was writing stories of 1.5k words and felt like I was Dickens. But the more you write, the more comfortable you become with writing. You stop rushing to the end, and that gives your stories the depth and detail that you need if you're going to write something novel-length.

But whatever you decide, good luck and have fun!

 

[deb66]

The plot here overlaps between cheating wife and mother/son incest and both have their own dynamics. The connecting part between the two seems an typical boy fantasy (i.e. spying on mom, mom getting hot and they end up in bed). Also, the age of the mother seems a little too young, at 36 having a son of 18 means she got pregnant at 17. Perhaps a 40 year old MILF mother might be fore appropriate. Nonetheless, its your story or its your call.

For the first part, the husband lack of satisfaction is just one factor. In my opinion, there should be emotional support aspect too, like the husband is more and more busy, she find herself with no one to share her feelings and the help that she seek. The boss needs to lend his shoulder to cry on first to have her legs on them later. Moreover, cheating after such a long time is a big step and there is always lot at stack, it requires a mental state where a person goes through a serios of steps for self convincing with justifications of the actions and next course of actions. Helping to save the business of boss is one thing, but escalate to the gangbangs may be better if its kind of a celebration or victory party with customer, having his mistress and the whole scenario pull her to the dark side, instead just boss asking to spread her legs for people she doesn't know.

For the second part, the son may figure it out and is emotionally hurt. He confronts the mother with proof she cannot deny. The family will fall apart for sure and its all in the hands of the son. The son wants to punish her and there is where he takes the control to drive her to the depth of depravity. None of them see that coming, the mother just wants to damage control, while the son want his anger to vent out, so one thing lead to another and she gets thoroughly ravaged.

Just my 2 cents...

Thank you for your advice! Indeed, a MILF mother around 40 years old would be more suitable and feel more realistic and relatable.

Your suggestions for the first part are great, making the plot more natural. However, I'm a bit worried about whether I can effectively write the gradual development of the relationship between the mom and her boss.

Your suggestions for the second part have given me new ideas! I'll think about which role the son should take to truly dominate the mom, making her sense of depravity stronger. Should the son be a passive figure, forced to participate in the mom's debauched party? Or should he be a domineering bully, using evidence of the mom's affair to threaten and dominate her? Or perhaps he starts as a passive participant, forced to engage with the mom at the party, but after experiencing the pleasure of her body, he becomes insatiable and threatens to dominate her again when she returns home.

 

[deb66]

Have you written anything before? Because if not, you might find it easier to start small than going for a full-length novel straight away. The quicker satisfaction of putting something out there and getting immediate response is very encouraging while you're still finding your feet. Will a novel, you might run out of steam and lose the enthusiasm as soon as you hit the first difficulties.

Writing smaller is also good practice. You can find your voice. Reader feedback will help you to identify your weaknesses. And it gives you a completely different perspective on the effort that writing takes. When I first started, I was writing stories of 1.5k words and felt like I was Dickens. But the more you write, the more comfortable you become with writing. You stop rushing to the end, and that gives your stories the depth and detail that you need if you're going to write something novel-length.

But whatever you decide, good luck and have fun!

Thank you for your advice! Starting with a long piece can be quite challenging. Sometimes I plan out longer stories, but I often lose momentum halfway through. Now I have some smaller ideas, and I've decided to follow your suggestion to begin with short pieces.

 

[Raybies93]

This story sounds like an incel male’s wet dream, is that what you intented?
Who is your audience? Where is the likable character, why should the reader care enough to continue reading?

I like what

This story sounds like an incel male’s wet dream, is that what you intented?
Who is your audience? Where is the likable character, why should the reader care enough to continue reading?

I like what Noor said about the likable character. I keep telling people that Z Nation is better than Walking Dead because the characters are much more likeable. I’ve read so many stories where I could not care less if the MC died or not.

 

[VerbalAbuse]

need a lot of anal sex

 

[deb66]

need a lot of anal sex

Of course, anal sex is something I really enjoy. I'm obsessed with my mom's big white ass, and the thought of her being sandwiched between two cocks, front and back, is very exciting.

 

[Nightscream89]

Thank you for your advice! Indeed, a MILF mother around 40 years old would be more suitable and feel more realistic and relatable.

Your suggestions for the first part are great, making the plot more natural. However, I'm a bit worried about whether I can effectively write the gradual development of the relationship between the mom and her boss.

Your suggestions for the second part have given me new ideas! I'll think about which role the son should take to truly dominate the mom, making her sense of depravity stronger. Should the son be a passive figure, forced to participate in the mom's debauched party? Or should he be a domineering bully, using evidence of the mom's affair to threaten and dominate her? Or perhaps he starts as a passive participant, forced to engage with the mom at the party, but after experiencing the pleasure of her body, he becomes insatiable and threatens to dominate her again when she returns home.

This is what I would do with it.
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She had always flirted with her boss, she has had a crush on him for a while now, however he never responded to it, knowing she was married and he didn't want the trouble however business was going slow and he needed more money. So he got an idea, he had heard that a website called OnlyFans made people a lot of money, so he sets up a camera in his office. He starts flirting back with her, mostly when they are alone together, nothing happens just yet however she is flustered by it. It feels right and wrong at the same time, it has been years since she felt desired by a man, sexlife with her husband was non existent and they are just going through life at this point without any sex or physical attraction.

After a work party she stays late and eventually it's just her and the boss left. They aren't drunk only a couple of wines in, but tipsy enough to give in to her desires, enough so she can blame the alcohol, even though this is what she wanted, even when completely sober. They go to his office and have wild sex, she climaxes under his touch, something her husband was never able to achieve.

The affair begins, of course her boss told her that it needed to be a secret and it would never become more than just sex, something she agrees to, she doesn't want to break up her family.
However gradually it becomes kinkier. One day he calls her into his office, she made a spelling mistake in a report. With a smile he says that a spanking would be a good punishment. He spanks her ass cheeks red and then his fingers slide into her wet pussy. He pulls back and prods his middle finger against her asshole and asks her if she has ever tried anal. She confesses she hasn't, slowly he starts fingering her butthole and she loves it. But he stops there, bringing out a buttplug and tells her she has to wear that every day at work, she has to put it in before she comes in and can only remove it after getting into her car.

After that she makes another spelling mistake, maybe on purpose this time. He again spanks her ass-cheeks red but this time he removes the plug and slams his cock into her ass. Eventually he asks her if she doesn't want to experience Anal and vaginal at the same time, she hestitates, knowing that that would mean another person would get involved. However at this time she is submissive to her boss and gives in, so a threesome happens where she is DP'ed.

This eventually leads to him sending her to sexparties to get gangbanged etc.

Meanwhile the son has found the Onlyfans page and follows his mother descent into becoming a true submissive slut, and he loves it. He secretly helps his mother in a subtle way. Like one day she comes home smelling like sex. He offers to cook, which gives her time to shower before her husband comes home. Happy with her son's thoughtfull gesture she doesn't think much of it and is happy to be able to shower.

He eventually sees on her OnlyFans that the next video will be of her at a frat party. He does his research and finds out which party and goes there. He stays hidden but close enough to see the frat guys ravage her. One of the frat guys notices him intently watching, even though there are other girls there being gangbanged, he is infatuated with his mom. The frat guy tells him to take a turn, her ass is open, her face is pressed down in another guys crotch. She can't look behind her to see who's cock fill her asshole. He fucks his mom in the ass, without her knowing it's him. She feels amazing she wants to look behind since this cock is what she always dreamed of, but her head is held tightly by a frat guy fucking her throat. The son is done and gone by the time she can look behind her.

Switch to home where it is revealed the husband is watching the live stream, frantically pulling on his cock. The next morning they all sit at the breakfast table. She thinking her husband and son don't know her secret. Son knowing he fucked his mom's ass, not knowing his father knows he did. The husband sitting there with a smile on his face, enjoying the fact that they think he doesn't know, secretly enjoying every moment of it.
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Sorry for the long post, but this is pretty much how I would outline the story if I were to write it. Of course with a lot more in between and build up, but I think you can imagine those yourself. Not my intention on writing a full story here haha.

 

[Goodalphamale]

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I’m planning to write a novel about a cheating mom who gradually descends into depravity, unlocking more and more sexual experiences under the guidance of her affair partner.

The protagonist is 18 years old, and his mom is 36. His dad has a premature ejaculation issue—severe enough that he couldn’t last even a minute during a blowjob from Mom, cumming in her mouth. Naturally, this left Mom unsatisfied. For 18 years of marriage, she’s been unfulfilled, relying solely on masturbation to meet her needs, which sets the stage for the story to come.

Later, Dad goes abroad for work, and Mom, under the relentless pursuit of her boss, starts an affair with him. This part will span several chapters detailing Mom’s affair with her boss, showing how her sexual skills improve step by step under his guidance—from a shy, inexperienced woman who couldn’t even give a good blowjob, to a skilled seductress who masters techniques like rimming.

Eventually, her boss’s business hits hard times, teetering on the brink of bankruptcy. At his urging, Mom is forced to sell her body to clients to secure orders for the company. This section will include stories involving several clients: a fat, balding middle-aged man, a tall, muscular black man, and more. Through these encounters, Mom’s sexual experiences expand—she gets fucked by a black man’s forearm-sized cock for the first time; experiences her first threesome when a client brings a friend to join in; and later unlocks anal sex, public exposure, and more extreme acts. One client even brings his son, and they fuck her together in the same hole. This part culminates in a massive gangbang with over a dozen men, where Mom reaches her peak of depravity and fully falls.

The third part focuses on the protagonist’s college classmates and his mom. In the previous chapter, a client and his son fucked Mom together. That son, Mark, happens to be my college classmate and a member of a fraternity. Mark brings his frat brothers to toy with Mom in all sorts of ways—glory holes, piss play, and more. At every frat party, Mom is called over to perform a striptease and gets gangbanged by the members. During this, her sexual skills reach their peak—no man can last more than 3 minutes in her mouth. The frat’s initiation test becomes surviving 2.5 minutes of Mom’s blowjob without cumming. The climax of this section is the protagonist’s initiation: Mom, blindfolded, gives him a blowjob without realizing it’s him. He passes the test and later joins the gangbang, finally fucking his mom.

I’m still brainstorming the later parts, but the plan is for the female lead to fall even further, becoming a cheap prostitute.

What do you think of this story, friends? Any suggestions?

you Egglime's lil bro?

 

[OnlyHappyEndings]

Switch to home where it is revealed the husband is watching the live stream, frantically pulling on his cock.

Didn't see that coming. You managed to get a happy ending out of a nasty degrading story.

 

[Nightscream89]

Didn't see that coming. You managed to get a happy ending out of a nasty degrading story.

Could even reel it back afterwards, like a flashback but this time you speed through the events with the husbands POV.
Revealing that he actually set it up together with the boss.
At a work party where spouses were invited, he noticed the look in his wife's eyes. The subtle flirting, how she twisted her hair with her finger when talking to her boss. He immediately knew that she was in love with her boss. So he secretly started talking with the boss, forming the plan. It needed some convincing but it succeeded. Secretly he always wanted a slut wife, and now, he has one. He didn't expect his son to find out and that it would play out like this, but this only made it more satisfying for him.

 

[Maximsdarling]

What is the POV?

Are you doing this strictly through the sons eyes? Or the Moms ? Are you switching around? Or is it all third person? Only asking because I find when I write stories sometimes planning the POV helps me focus in on the aspects of the stories. There are a lot of threads here so what is going to connect them?

Im also curious if we are supposed to like any of the characters? Are readers enjoying her descent into depravity or are they judging her for it?