What's your all time favorite story comment?

[Mister_Chris]

The biggest reward I have for writing is the positive comments I receive on my stories.

(And the biggest reason I have for NOT writing is posting stories for free, and then finding assholes copying them and selling them on Amazon et al as their own work. But that's another story.)

So, moving back to the positive side of the spectrum...

What's your all time favorite positive comment? And what story was it attached to?

>MC

 

[lovecraft68]

This is from "That Damn Red Dress" an incest story I wrote to be disturbing and not "yay, incest" I expected a lot of bashing and a low score due to the stark reality of the story, instead it did very well score wise and most of the comments seemed to get what I was going for.

This was the best of them as it made me feel I achieved exactly what I wanted.

02/04/14 By: tygz
Definitely disturbing - verging on erotic horror, except I didn't really find it especially erotic.

Still, it's a very powerful story and exceptionally well-written - I say this without being able to decide if I actually *like* the story - it merits 5 stars even if you don't get off on the semi-nonconsensual aspects of it (she didn't feel like she had a choice, after all; she had a figurative gun to her head, and I personally don't get excited by that imagery).

Ever see a movie that had a strong message, was acted really well and still made your skin crawl? That movie probably won many Oscars; this is the short-story equivalent. Read it.

Here's the link

http://www.literotica.com/s/that-damn-red-dress

This story was a challenge to myself. The two things that can get you killed in incest is darkness and non consent. This story was depressing and although I wouldn't say actual non consent the MC of the story made a decision that was pretty desperate and stuck by it no matter what so full consent, but reluctant.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

A publisher told me I was talented. He bought the story.

 

[FantasyXY]

I posted this in another thread the other day, but it fits here too...

My favorite comment so far is actually two comments. After reading a thread here on the AH about writing as the other gender, I decided to see if I could write a story completely in a woman's voice. Here are the comments that verified I had hit the mark.

Thank you for sharing!
05/23/14 By: xxxxxxxx
All hyperbole aside, this truly is one of the best stories I've read on this site. I didn't expect to like it at first, but it was so compelling, and so brutally honest, I couldn't help but get caught up in it. Thank you so much for sharing your story.

Then later that day I received this comment from the same reader

Yep, I fell for it
05/23/14 By: xxxxxxxx
Hook, line and sinker! I believed this was a true story was written by a middle-aged woman...until I took the time to check out the author's profile. I'm even more impressed by this story now.

Here is the link to the story

http://www.literotica.com/s/my-first-bj-really

 

[AZMotherLover]

There's an anonymous commenter who writes long comments on lots of mom/son stories, using similar terms and phrases. I'd love to find out who this guy is.

A comment he left on my story.

"You like the way my balls smell?" I asked.

That's big strong good-looking Max speaking to his mother. I could have quoted any number of similar statements from this excellent story, but I like this one because it's so damn raw. Of course his mother likes--really, loves--the way his balls smell. She plasters her face between Max's ass cheeks and slurps his squeaky clean asshole, and loves its musky scent too. Max's mom is the kind of mother all boys should have. Most boys have to make do with noticing their mother darting glances at what they've got jumping around in their pants. Not Max. His mother fucking worships his big hard cock and his heavy loaded balls. She chews on Max's smelly jockstraps and joyously welcomes his cock in every hole she has. Mom cums like crazy and blisses out when her boy blows his balls up inside her. Max is a super-virile young male, so he fucks every cunt that comes along. Understandable. But I didn't care for his mom's lesbo action. It takes away from the centrality of motherfucking in the story. Okay if she strums her twat watching her big boy fucking the shit out of some random twat or other. Still, five stars for a superb job.

A comment he left on another author's story.

a great story and a great moniker

How many boys do you think would love for their mother to be dirty-minded? To be just as interested in what her son's got between his legs and he is in what his mom's got between hers? The relationship between Jesse and his mother is the kind all sons and moms should have. The boy walks into the room where his mother's shaving her bush, her legs spread wide. Jesse takes a good look, but doesn't miss a beat. Mom reflects, "It was strange to think that my son had seen my pussy enough by this point that it was becoming almost normal for us. It gave me a shamefully good feeling inside." But why shouldn't a boy see the wonderful hole he came out of, his own mother's cunt? It's the kid's own damn birth canal, for pete's sake, and seeing it gets the boy harder than he's ever been before. And like Jesse, every son should have the right to do lots more than just look. Mom loves having her boy see her cunt and getting super-hard over the sight. Jesse's got to blow his young balls, no two ways about it, and his mother shows him just where to shoot his semen. Right over his mommy's warm wet ever-loving twat. Jesse thinks that's a really neat idea, and splatters his creamy semen all over his mother's twat and her belly and ass. My, my, what a lot of cream her virile manly boy's got in those hot young balls of his. I trust that the gifted DMM will tell us that Jesse and his mom discover an even better place for the boy to cream.

 

[Carnal_Flower]

That guy is a legend. Another incest writer and I call him "creepyanon" short for "that slightly creepy anonymous dude who comments on mom/son". I would love to find out who he is, too!

There's an anonymous commenter who writes long comments on lots of mom/son stories, using similar terms and phrases. I'd love to find out who this guy is.

A comment he left on my story.



A comment he left on another author's story.

 

[8letters]

After I published Sister Has a Plan (a brother-sister incest story), I got the following PM:

Someone just forwarded me your most recent published story and it has me a little curious. are the characters based off real people because except for the sexual relationship with the character's sister, every character involved seems to be based off people I know both in name and background. Additionally, the school attendance and majors, plus events in the story development just seem too close to actual situations to be coincidence. I'm not upset that it's published but I would like to know if we know eachother so I'm not so weirded out. Based on the content I would guess you are either one of my ex's, a close friend, or (hopefully not) my sister. Thanks

I replied to the author of the PM that the story was made up from whole cloth. Later, I got a comment on the story that I assume is from the same person:

A beautiful, well developed, warm and realistic story that BEGS continuation. It is eerily close to a TRUE story I swore, decades ago, never to divulge. It gave me goosebumps and brought tears. It is SO SIMILAR.
Please continue it.
Thanks.

I felt good that a story I made up seemed realistic enough that someone thought it was about them.

 

[DreamCloud]

I love your stories. I suspect that English isn't your first language. If I am correct, you do very well, however, there are a number of mistakes that would be caught by a different editor/proof reader.

USA born and raised. I swear - I am improving.

 

[Carnal_Flower]

DC I think your ouvre prooves him wrong. A very impressive and exciting body of work. Sigh. If only you would venture into something wrong and taboo. If only I liked Romance, EH, EC, BDSM or Group I'd be your biggest fan. I can only admire from the bleachers.

I love your stories. I suspect that English isn't your first language. If I am correct, you do very well, however, there are a number of mistakes that would be caught by a different editor/proof reader.

USA born and raised. I swear - I am improving.

 

[Sammael Bard]

The biggest reward I have for writing is the positive comments I receive on my stories.

(And the biggest reason I have for NOT writing is posting stories for free, and then finding assholes copying them and selling them on Amazon et al as their own work. But that's another story.)

So, moving back to the positive side of the spectrum...

What's your all time favorite positive comment? And what story was it attached to?

>MC

It wasn't a story, but an essay that got this wonderful exposition by swingerjoe:

I've been fascinated by the BTB crowd since the day I discovered this site. I understand why people would be turned off by stories that include a husband who is humiliated by the wife, and who is forced to suck dicks and swallow cum. And I understand, and agree with, their opinion that stories like that don't belong in the LW category.

What I don't understand is why they enjoy stories where a husband exacts revenge on his cheating wife through divorce (which is a storyline that bores me to tears) or murder (which is sociopathic.) To me, not only do these types of stories not belong in the LW category, but they don't belong on this website, period.

If you enjoy these types of stories, why on earth would you even visit a site called "Literotica?" There is nothing erotic about those stories. And if you are an angry, bitter old man who has been wronged by a cheating woman, and reading stories about cheating wives stirs bad memories and emotions, why on EARTH would you even look at the LW category? I just don't get it.

What I find most confusing about the BTB crowd is when they comment on a story about a loving wife who is willingly shared by her husband, with his full consent and approval, and where there is no humiliation or "gay contact"...and they still rant and rave about "cuckholds", "wimps", etc..

I can only conclude that the BTB crowd visits the LW category specifically to voice their own version of "morality" to the rest of the world. It must make them feel good about themselves to lecture others about how the world "should be" and what fetishes we all should have, and to hurl all sorts of vile names at those who don't share their worldview. I see this sort of thing all the time in political discussions.

Lastly, what I find most amusing about the BTB crowd is how ANGRY they get at fictional characters in a story! I can only imagine what it must be like to watch a movie with these people! They would spend the entire time shouting at the screen!

The best one on my submissions in a long time to come.

 

[tw_holt]

my fav comment...

...is from my editor. It was on a story about woman who cheats with black men, teases/manipulates her son, and basically becomes a whore. Some of it was based on facts that a reader shared with me (she did cheat with a black man), but the rest of the story is all fantasy. There is no prostitution, no stripping, no implied incest. The anonymous trolls really came out of the woodwork on it, thinking the story was the gospel truth. My editor summed up their idiocy quite nicely:



"What is the problem here. Most of you Anonymous morons (too ashamed to give a name to their drivel) don't read properly. The Authors note at the beginning says it is based on a some truth and a lot of fantasy. Read it for what it is; a story. You have no idea how much is true and how much is not.
I bet most of you on here have had a fantasy of fucking someone other than your partner whether married or not. It may be a black cock it may be your son, daughter, mother, father or whoever, and those of you who have actually done it, I bet your partner is unaware in most cases.
I reckon a lot of the stories here in a good number of categories are based on true stories but the Author is not going to admit that whether it is based on them or someone else.
As for myself, I don't give a fuck about who does what to whom. I am on here to read erotic stories in a variety of categories. If I don't like them I give up part way through and go on to the next. Its a lot easier doing that than wasting time venting your stupidity anonymously."

http://www.literotica.com/s/torries-year

 

[AZMotherLover]

That guy is a legend. Another incest writer and I call him "creepyanon" short for "that slightly creepy anonymous dude who comments on mom/son". I would love to find out who he is, too!

He just left a comment on my latest story:

a great, very well-written story, but...

I think Jeffrey's mother was being terribly unfair. She let her boy achieve what lots and lots of sons, who knows maybe every last one of them can only whack off dreaming about. She spread her legs for Jeffrey to stick his hard young cock up the same wonderful hairy hole he came out of--and she loved it. The kid became a motherfucker many times over. Then she suddenly cuts him off? Just when Jeff's thinking that his mother's cunt is permanently open for business as far as her son's concerned? Is that what a caring, loving mom would do? Well, at least Jeffrey's got some very hot memories. It's not every boy who gets to splatter his semen up where he was once a baby.

 

[masterandmargarita]

My favorite comment so far, your results may vary

Lov it

You out did yourself again. Loved it all. Also I want to thank you for this permanent smile on my face. I showed my wife your BJ Bliss story. I guess she learned a few tricks from it. I have never had my balls sucked on so much and been deep throated so much. Like daily.

 

[lovecraft68]

I love your stories. I suspect that English isn't your first language. If I am correct, you do very well, however, there are a number of mistakes that would be caught by a different editor/proof reader.

USA born and raised. I swear - I am improving.

Oh, ow! That's tough, but kind of funny, no offense, but it is kind of funny.