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Mister_Chris
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In a story I'm developing, two characters have a lengthy discussion. One storms off; the other gets drunk. Morning after, they talk again. Sex ensues shortly after.
From the time that the last fuck happens to the time the next fuck happens in the story is about 4500 words. Roughly two full Literotica pages.
Too long? I could figure out how to insert some gratuitous sex. I could also take a chainsaw and do some editing. Or I could leave it as is.
Thoughts?
From the time that the last fuck happens to the time the next fuck happens in the story is about 4500 words. Roughly two full Literotica pages.
Too long? I could figure out how to insert some gratuitous sex. I could also take a chainsaw and do some editing. Or I could leave it as is.
Thoughts?