The depths the cuckold crowd will sink to.

DeYaKen

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A while ago it was stated in these threads that it was only the Burn The Bitch fans that persucuted aednd intimidated writers. I just thought I'd let you know that it is definitely not a one sided thing when I logged in to my view page the other day, I was greeted by the following message.

>Hi Ken! Just sending this report to you to let you know. If this collectionis your work under another
> penname, or if this person stole it from you, please let me know and I'll reinstate the story.
>Thanks! Report ID: 12888 Title: Possible copyright violation, plagiarism (please comment below):
>Details: This story was published a year before on Amazon in a collection of short stories by Emma
> Holly. The main character's name was different, but both the wife and the other woman are
>named the same. This is the collection http://www.amazon.com/Fantasy-Christ...ection+romance
>Submission: The Surrogate Wife [edit] Submission Author: DeYaKen

There are ways and means of finding out what is in a book so, knowing I was totally innocent, I investigated. The book quoted contains four stories, none of which bears the slightest resemblance to The Surrogate wife.

This is the second malicious report I have suffered. The first one I got so mad that laurel hadn't bothered to ask me to defend it, that I just pulled it. This one was down for only 24hrs. I know who wrote the first report. Frontlinecaster, someone whose avowed intention is to push marital strife stories out of loving wives and me off of Lit, was openly bragging to other authors that she had done it.

I don't know for sure who filed the second malicious report, but it came only 48 hrs after my cyber stalker as I call her, was made to look extremely silly when she pursued me though another writer's comments page.

I don't write BTB stories and I've had my share of flack from that quarter, But those people have never stooped so low as to lie about the content of my story to get it taken down, or to accuse me of an illegal act.
 
Aww, you've been arguing with someone else in comments threads besides me? I'm hurt! Or do you just assume that anyone who takes issue with rape and misogyny and violence towards women in stories has to be a woman?

But nope, wasn't me, I've given up on reporting yours or anyone else's story since this site proves completely unwilling to do anything about a large number of them. Nice try though, see you've stopped name checking me at every oppurtunity to try to get people to message me. You and StangStar both thought that was some kind of threat, that I was /so/ scared of your fans that I'd be shaking in my boots if you kept using my name places and linking people to me.

I take credit when I do something, like I never denied reporting Smoking Kills. So if someone else has a beef with you or is spamming you it's not me.
 
Aww, you've been arguing with someone else in comments threads besides me? I'm hurt! Or do you just assume that anyone who takes issue with rape and misogyny and violence towards women in stories has to be a woman?
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Not sure what the deal is between you and the OP, but I will say that on this male driven misogynistic site anyone who takes the woman's side is pegged as one.

I get e-mails all the time saying what a "bitch" I am when I point out LIts BS rape rule and write stories with the women in control, because of course that means I must be one. I mean come on, what "real man" doesn't want to see a woman raped or put in her place:rolleyes:

One of my burn the bastard LW stories even got me rape threats, said they could find where I lived and they would rape me dead.

I told them come on down. I think they will be unpleasantly surprised with what they find when they get there.

So yes, if you don;t like rape or abuse or chauvinism or misogyny here you must be one of "dem broads"
 
Not sure what the deal is between you and the OP, but I will say that on this male driven misogynistic site anyone who takes the woman's side is pegged as one.

I get e-mails all the time saying what a "bitch" I am when I point out LIts BS rape rule and write stories with the women in control, because of course that means I must be one. I mean come on, what "real man" doesn't want to see a woman raped or put in her place:rolleyes:

One of my burn the bastard LW stories even got me rape threats, said they could find where I lived and they would rape me dead.

I told them come on down. I think they will be unpleasantly surprised with what they find when they get there.

So yes, if you don;t like rape or abuse or chauvinism or misogyny here you must be one of "dem broads"

Not at all in my case Lovecraft. I have written from both points of view. But the person concerned is NOT an author just someone who thinks they are the arbiter of all things in loving wives. When it comes to allocating a sex. If it walks like a duck and quacks like a duck it must be a duck.

She chooses to police a category but like some police persons, it seems that when she can't find a genuine charge she drums one up. Or, as in the previous case, lies about the content of the story.

Yes there are misogynists on Lit just as there are misandrists I'll gladly do battle with both. The problem is that some people join you in battle, show themselves up for the fool that they are, then retreat to the shadows and slash away at anyone that comes near.

The irony here is that I was going to pull the Surrogate Wife story from Lit since people pay $2 for it on Ether. It didn't make any sense to be giving it away on Lit. However my cyber stalker has done lit readers a favour. The story stays, as do I.

If you or anyone else has had threats of rape or other forms of violence I seriously advise you to take it to the police. With the amount of data ISPs are legally bound to keep these days no one is truly anonymous on the internet anymore. Such people deserve to be taken down, and the British Police are getting very good at it. Facebook and twitter trolls Have found themselves in gaol. Sadly defamation is a civil case not criminal so I'd have to fund my own case. However, I have informed the writer concerned she may decide to follow it up. An allegation of plagiarism damages the reputation of both writers concerned as people will always dispute who wrote the original.
 
This is a small sandbox and everyone has to accept that there are other people playing in it. It cheapens everyone when people try to drive others away and ultimately the entire site and readership suffers. I've noticed less traffic, comments, and visits in the recent weeks/months as opposed to earlier and do not know if that is seasonal or something else. Also, the quality of the stories submitted seems to be lacking lately - meaning that instead of tripping over good stories in all genres it now requires looking, digging, or waiting for something at caliber to be posted.

DeYaKen - what is Ether? I was approached at least twice to post over at Stories online and declined because I'm a big fan of 1) Loyalty, and 2) Free Internet. I assume it isn't the same? I know a few people who have done stuff at Amazon and Lulu - is this like that?

-V
 
There is a solution to this dilemma, actually two...

1.) Stop writing LW stories.

2.) Turn off all feedback on LW stories.

I actually just thought of a third solution...

3.) Post all your LW stores under and Alt ID, then ignore all comments.


When I wrote LW here, there were my loyal followers who loved my stuff and there were the trolls who would wish the bitch dead or me dead. Those that liked my stuff I corresponded with. The others, I ignored, even laughed at their warped views. I knew they were, in most cases, husbands of wives who cheated on them even if they never admitted it. Or husbands of wives who left them for another. Or just sick son of bitches who needed some mental health help. (Most of them thought my stories were true...go figure) :rolleyes:
 
This is a small sandbox and everyone has to accept that there are other people playing in it. It cheapens everyone when people try to drive others away and ultimately the entire site and readership suffers. I've noticed less traffic, comments, and visits in the recent weeks/months as opposed to earlier and do not know if that is seasonal or something else. Also, the quality of the stories submitted seems to be lacking lately - meaning that instead of tripping over good stories in all genres it now requires looking, digging, or waiting for something at caliber to be posted.

DeYaKen - what is Ether? I was approached at least twice to post over at Stories online and declined because I'm a big fan of 1) Loyalty, and 2) Free Internet. I assume it isn't the same? I know a few people who have done stuff at Amazon and Lulu - is this like that?

-V

OK V Answer to the question, what is Ether?
www.etherbooks.com is a company which specialises in supplying quality short stories to your smart phone or tablet. They provide a free app which allows you to find and read short stories review them and rate them. It also provides a bit of social interaction.

Most of the content is free but they charge for the best ones and most of the erotic stories. Stories should be 6000 words or less. More than that and you have to submit in sections.

You won't get anywhere near the numbers you get on Lit. What you will get is really nice people who treat you as if you are important to them. You get an email to acknowledge receiving your story, and another when they are going to make it available.

I've been with them for about two years now and it's been a positive experience. I've just finished their competition to write 8 five hundred word stories in eight days. Each day they gave you a new topic.

Until they really break through, you probably won't see any money, but who knows what the future brings.
 
That doesn’t really surprise me. After writing my first & only Loving Wife story, where the wife is neglected & cheats; I received the lowest rating I’ve ever had & my other stories started to bleed as well.

However my belief is that Literotica is free access, to great stories & good people to dialogue with, all of which improves my skills. A little antagonism isn’t all that bad when I look at the big picture.
 
I agree

That doesn’t really surprise me. After writing my first & only Loving Wife story, where the wife is neglected & cheats; I received the lowest rating I’ve ever had & my other stories started to bleed as well.

However my belief is that Literotica is free access, to great stories & good people to dialogue with, all of which improves my skills. A little antagonism isn’t all that bad when I look at the big picture.

Anyone who posts in loving wives must expect a certain level of hostility. It is, and always has been a bear pit. However what we are talking about here, is not whether it is right to offer adverse comments, but whether it is acceptable for an individual to use lies and misinformation to try to restrict the freedom of others to read the stories they enjoy.

To conduct a campaign of deliberate malicious reporting, in an attempt to drive certain authors from Lit because they don't write her sort of story, is a blow against civil rights and, yes the american constitution.

I titled this thread the way I did, not because I have anything against people of the cuckold persuasion, but because I wanted those people to see what was being done in their name.

I don't understand the cuckold lifestyle so I don't read about it. What this person does is skim stories that she knows she will not like, in order to get sufficient information to misrepresent it, in an effort to get the story removed, thereby depriving others of reading pleasure.

I think that most of us would be happier if she went back to her fantasy games and left those adults amongst us to make our own choices about what we do or do not want to read.
 
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Okay, seriously who are you talking about? You clearly can't mean me, what with the 'she' comments and the fact that I reported a grand total of one of your stories once, no where near as many as I'd reported from other people. But you clearly have a specific person in mind. Try having the balls to actually say what you mean and stop dancing around it.
 
Not at all in my case Lovecraft. I have written from both points of view. But the person concerned is NOT an author just someone who thinks they are the arbiter of all things in loving wives. When it comes to allocating a sex. If it walks like a duck and quacks like a duck it must be a duck.

She chooses to police a category but like some police persons, it seems that when she can't find a genuine charge she drums one up. Or, as in the previous case, lies about the content of the story.

Yes there are misogynists on Lit just as there are misandrists I'll gladly do battle with both. The problem is that some people join you in battle, show themselves up for the fool that they are, then retreat to the shadows and slash away at anyone that comes near.

The irony here is that I was going to pull the Surrogate Wife story from Lit since people pay $2 for it on Ether. It didn't make any sense to be giving it away on Lit. However my cyber stalker has done lit readers a favour. The story stays, as do I.

If you or anyone else has had threats of rape or other forms of violence I seriously advise you to take it to the police. With the amount of data ISPs are legally bound to keep these days no one is truly anonymous on the internet anymore. Such people deserve to be taken down, and the British Police are getting very good at it. Facebook and twitter trolls Have found themselves in gaol. Sadly defamation is a civil case not criminal so I'd have to fund my own case. However, I have informed the writer concerned she may decide to follow it up. An allegation of plagiarism damages the reputation of both writers concerned as people will always dispute who wrote the original.

This entire site preaches hatred and abuse or at least misuse of women. I can line this post with examples, from story comments to pm stalkers, to threads to the hypocrite who runs this site who says "we don't allow rape stories, btw check out our NON CONSENT section.

But Then I get flak and BS and frankly I am tired or trying to educate idiots who are to ignorant and flat out fucking spineless to ever admit someone has a point.

This site will allow sexual trafficking stories, gang rape stores, brutal rape, extreme rape, torture and degradation of women and any form of abuse towards women possible.

Write a story where a man is sexually tortured it will be rejected and if it somehow slips through will be reported because on literotica

The prick is sacred which makes sense since its full of them.
 
I wouldn't worry about the rest of us spineless idiots who read and write here, but rather how utterly hypocritical this makes you. If YOU feel this way about lit, truly, then you only come across as a spineless moron who won't live up to his own rants and get off a site you apparently loathe. I'm just stating the obvious.

Here's the shocking thing. Your opinion is just that--yours. You're not stating some transcendent almighty truth about lit. It's how you feel about it; well and good. Stop generalizing to the rest of us.

Personally, as a woman, anytime Ive been on any sex site when I see a Non Con section, I automatically assume oh, that's for women. Doesn't bother me in the least. I'm not big into rape fantasy, aside from a nice one about sailors, but I certainly know many who are. Because guess what. Real women who like actually exist outside the porn universe, have rape fantasies. Deal with it. Suck it up. Go to a women's group and talk. You're just looking like a fool ranting on a sex site about it.

Personally I do not feel this "entire site" preaches hatred of women. Hardly. But then, I'm grown up enough to separate the users and writers from the site itself.

I hate porn. I loathe the porn culture as much as you profess to hate the rape culture but guess what, I simply don't go on spastic rants about it. Lit is not some enclave outside the real world. Its a reflection of the world.

Above all stop calling other people hypocrites. I mean for f's sake, you can post incest here! Every single thing you complain about someone else can complain about incest, get real.


This entire site preaches hatred and abuse or at least misuse of women. I can line this post with examples, from story comments to pm stalkers, to threads to the hypocrite who runs this site who says "we don't allow rape stories, btw check out our NON CONSENT section.

But Then I get flak and BS and frankly I am tired or trying to educate idiots who are to ignorant and flat out fucking spineless to ever admit someone has a point.

This site will allow sexual trafficking stories, gang rape stores, brutal rape, extreme rape, torture and degradation of women and any form of abuse towards women possible.

Write a story where a man is sexually tortured it will be rejected and if it somehow slips through will be reported because on literotica

The prick is sacred which makes sense since its full of them.
 
Yeah but the problem with this community isn't the stories that get posted. It's not the rape or the incest or the murder and torture porn. It's the comments, it's that anyone posting a story, man or woman, which has a male character that doesn't fit some standard of 'macho' or 'tough' gets threatened and abused by sick, anonymous little man children who can't stand that someone else has a different kink than them. They spew vile, hateful, abusive shit, and when someone calls them out on it or tries to stick up for a story they get even worse. And the stuff they spew, especially in Loving Wives, is openly misogynistic and antagonistic to women. A lot of talk of killing the dumb cunt or how cunts can't be trusted or all cunts who cheat or break up with a guy should be tortured and then burned alive while everyone gathers around to watch and then piss on their grave.

But right, right, right, let's get back to the /real/ injustice here. I didn't like one of Deyaken's stories and thought it violated submission guidelines, and Laurel agreed with me! God, men like him really are the oppressed minority on this site you guys! I mean, the guys calling me a faggot and threatening to track me down for saying that maybe death and torture porn don't belong in a porn site are nothing compared to the fact that I didn't like a story someone wrote!
 
Yeah but the problem with this community isn't the stories that get posted. It's not the rape or the incest or the murder and torture porn. It's the comments, it's that anyone posting a story, man or woman, which has a male character that doesn't fit some standard of 'macho' or 'tough' gets threatened and abused by sick, anonymous little man children who can't stand that someone else has a different kink than them. They spew vile, hateful, abusive shit, and when someone calls them out on it or tries to stick up for a story they get even worse. And the stuff they spew, especially in Loving Wives, is openly misogynistic and antagonistic to women. A lot of talk of killing the dumb cunt or how cunts can't be trusted or all cunts who cheat or break up with a guy should be tortured and then burned alive while everyone gathers around to watch and then piss on their grave.

Yep - that's Loving Wives for ya. :)

Refusing to completely nuke, obliterate and disintegrate a wife who as much as dare look in the direction of another man is dealt with swiftly and with extreme prejudice. As a writer who has a tendency to let the wife come out on top (just like they always do in real life :rolleyes: ) I have been in the eye of that shit storm more than once.

Some commenters in that forum really need to get laid soon. Especially that Anonymous-dude....
 
Yep - that's Loving Wives for ya. :)

Refusing to completely nuke, obliterate and disintegrate a wife who as much as dare look in the direction of another man is dealt with swiftly and with extreme prejudice. As a writer who has a tendency to let the wife come out on top (just like they always do in real life :rolleyes: ) I have been in the eye of that shit storm more than once.

Some commenters in that forum really need to get laid soon. Especially that Anonymous-dude....

As You say, that's loving wives.

If you read the flak I got for "She Chose me" you would know that I understand all about the type of comments you get.

However, the comments are never a valid reason for using lies and misinformation to get a story taken down. That would be like making a visit to Madame Tusaud's and demanding the closure of the chamber of horrors because a few little boys thought torture was funny.

If you don't like the comments, don't read them. If you don't like a particular type of story, don't read it. Very few writers are so clever that you get to the end of the story before finding out that you don't like the subject matter.

What has been happening is that, certainly one, maybe more individuals have been saying, That story doesn't fit into what I think the world should be like, so I will use any means fair or foul, to get it taken down.

Females control the means of reproduction, they are more essential to the survival of the species than men. In a world where the use of physical force, on a personal basis, is outlawed, they will always be in a superior position. Some men have difficulty accepting that and want fantasies where they come out on top. It's no different from women wanting fantasies in which the superstud rides into town, singles her out and fucks her stupid while forcing her husband to wait on them, suck his dick, wipe his arse, and whatever other degrading treatment you can think of.

Not understanding why people want these fantasies is no excuse for trying to get them removed, and that is what has been happening.

I suppose the next step is the destruction of every film John Wayne ever made.
 
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Let's be clear. No one is trying to get your precious, misogynist stories taken down. You've shown your true colors with that last remark, but no one is saying you can't be a sexist, that's your right. There are rules on this site about snuff, I thought one of your stories violated them, and I did read the whole thing. Laurel agreed. That was it.

You are no more the injured party here then all those men you talk about who can't beat up women. Jesus Christ man, stop trying to play the martyr here, it is pathetic.
 
I've noticed less traffic, comments, and visits in the recent weeks/months as opposed to earlier

Incorrect. The site is receiving more traffic, comments, and visits than six months ago, and definitely more than this time last year and the year before.
 
Anyone who posts in loving wives must expect a certain level of hostility. It is, and always has been a bear pit. However what we are talking about here, is not whether it is right to offer adverse comments, but whether it is acceptable for an individual to use lies and misinformation to try to restrict the freedom of others to read the stories they enjoy.

First off I have mixed feelings about LW writers and readers, although I have to admit I haven't read a story there since, shall we say, the battle became a war. As I see it some really well written, interesting stories written by authors from the, it's ok if my wife has sex with others group, were trolled and voted low by the BTB group, bringing the ratings much lower than they deserved. While many god awful stories written by the BTB authors, from the standpoint of quality, received high ratings, which, at least for me, is an indications the trolling was at least somewhat one sided. What's happening to you may not be right but in a way maybe the problems your having is poetic justice.

To conduct a campaign of deliberate malicious reporting, in an attempt to drive certain authors from Lit because they don't write her sort of story, is a blow against civil rights and, yes the american constitution.

Our you freaken crazy, how is this a violation of your civil rights? Even if you could prove she was doing so in any way that would violent any law, civil or criminal, she is still not violating your civil rights. Not to mention she already said she did not turn you in for plagiarism.

If you are instead speaking of your First Amendment right of free speech and free expression you are again wrong. First off the First Amendment applies to the government, at one time many held it only applied to the federal government but because of a number Supreme Court rulings, thankfully, it applies to all governmental bodies within the borders of the United States. A site like literotica.com, a non-governmental site, has no legal obigation to honor your First Amendment right to free speech. Nor does this 'she' you keep speaking of. The First Amendment would only apply if a governmental agency was trying to force literotica to remove your story, which would be a violation of the First Amendment, unless your story was pornographic and lacked substantial social value, there are limits to free speech.

Laurel, for the most part, seems to believe in free expression, free expression that some here don't like, for the most part I don't like non-consent stories but I don't want her to band those, why should my free expression be upheld by Laurel and others not. She also allows us, for the most part, free expression on these boards which means she allows you to complain, while at the same time allowing someone else the right to lobby to have your stories removed or what not. I'm not for having your stories removed but I have to admit most of the BTB stories are not about loving wives and many aren't even erotic. I'm sure there are those who would lobby for my removal from the boards if they thought it would do any good, I'm not often kind and gentle, more often harsh and caustic, thank god Laurel believes in free expression.

I think that most of us would be happier if she went back to her fantasy games and left those adults amongst us to make our own choices about what we do or do not want to read.

Speaking of ADULTS, I made a comment on one of the BTB stories about the story's lack of character development of the lady in question and how the protagonist of the story could have lived with such a god awful person for twenty some years, afterward the comments became about me and if there had been anyway these men could have found out who I am and where I live, I would have been very concerned about the safety of my family and myself. So I'll leave it up to you to decide how I feel about how adult the BTB followers are. There again don't we all at times act rather childish but advocating violence against someone based on a comment made about a story or a post here isn't childish, its abusive and evil.
 
Yep, go into Loving Wives and say anything other than 'Lol, dumb bitch got what was coming to her' or call someone a faggot or a wimp and you get stalked and harassed and abused. But nope, DeYaKen is the persecuted one here. Someone took down a story he wrote for violating the rules of the site! Boohoo! He is such a victim that he is /still/ months later posting passive aggressive things like this about me and now trying to imply I'm some kind of copyright troll, for reporting one story months ago.

Also, he hilariously keeps calling me 'she' even after being corrected, because his small little mind can't comprehend that a guy disagrees with him or thinks he like so many other LW authors are misogynist fucks.
 
Not to mention she already said she did not turn you in for plagiarism.

Yes that could be believed had she not denied that she misreported the other story that was taken down, only to admit it when I produced an obusive Email written to another writer in which she bragged about getting the story taken down. Do you really have to ask why I don't believe her?


Laurel, for the most part, seems to believe in free expression, free expression that some here don't like, for the most part I don't like non-consent stories but I don't want her to band those, why should my free expression be upheld by Laurel and others not. She also allows us, for the most part, free expression on these boards which means she allows you to complain, while at the same time allowing someone else the right to lobby to have your stories removed or what not.

When I was suggesting an improvement to the site Laurel told me that if it was the forums I was referring to she and Manu could do nothing as they do not run the forums. There are companies that provide the facility which links into your site. You help with look and feel but everything else is down to them. I assume from what laurel said that she uses such a service so I would suggest that it is not she who is offering the free speech. However, that is nit picking

I'm not for having your stories removed but I have to admit most of the BTB stories are not about loving wives and many aren't even erotic. I'm sure there are those who would lobby for my removal from the boards if they thought it would do any good, I'm not often kind and gentle, more often harsh and caustic, thank god Laurel believes in free expression.

We agree on that

Speaking of ADULTS, I made a comment on one of the BTB stories about the story's lack of character development of the lady in question and how the protagonist of the story could have lived with such a god awful person for twenty some years, afterward the comments became about me and if there had been anyway these men could have found out who I am and where I live, I would have been very concerned about the safety of my family and myself. So I'll leave it up to you to decide how I feel about how adult the BTB followers are. There again don't we all at times act rather childish but advocating violence against someone based on a comment made about a story or a post here isn't childish, its abusive and evil.

You seem to be under the impression that i write BTB stories, I don't. I get as much flack from them as anyone else. Yes I do find some of them somewhat juvenile but just because one of the readers is an idiot, that's no excuse for depriving all the others of things that they want to read.

I've said it before and I'll say it again If you feel threatened by comments made on your stories or by emails, you should take them straight to the police. The only way to get rid of that sort of low life is to let them see that they cannot get away with it. You've got to go to a lot of trouble and be extremely net savvy to be genuinely anonymous on the internet these days.

FWW I've written stories in which the husband dies, the husband goes back to his wife, the wife pulls the family back together after it is wrecked by an outsider. I wrote one where a man has brought up two children who were fathered by her lover and 10 years after her death he still misses her. Does that sound like the work of the misogynist I am being painted as?

I wrote 1 story in which a wife is blown up by her young lover, and it get's reported and taken down. I saw the description used in the report, it bore no relation to the story.

I don't want to get into what appears to be Lit's policy as relations with Laurel seem to be repairing themselves.

This continued persecution results from my refusal to accept one person's right to be the self proclaimed policeperson of the loving wives category. I am fortunate though at least one other writer had their account banned because of the activities of this person.
 
Interesting how you keep claiming not to not write BTB stories on the same day you repost the same violent story that this whole thing is about.

And I never denied reporting it, I said when you first came at me, attempting to hide your identity and claiming the whole time to be a 'concerned fan', that I didn't remember what you were talking about. And that was the truth, I reported your story on a day that I reported several, then I gave up on trying to make Lit and LW a better place and moved on. You only got me to keep paying attention to you with your sad attempts at threatening me with exposure (oh no! What will I do! The LW authors know that I reported a couple of stories. Frankly I still think you all owe me a round of applause no matter what else you think for getting Duna banned for his constant spamming) and attempting to shame me for what I'd done. Now you're trying to pin every single thing you don't like about this site on me.

Guess what, people make erroneous copyright claims, try putting anything on youtube for any length of time. It gets ignored, most people don't see it as a sinister plot against them.

And again, because I really do want you to stop making a fool of yourself. I'm not a woman, no matter how much it hurts your head to consider a man who has anything approaching feminist ideals. Or do you prefer imagining that you have some obsessed female fan who's all hot and bothered reading your stories? Because if you wanted that, I'd suggest first writing stories that are erotic and not just pointlessly violent.
 
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