Either Really Creepy Truth, or Genius Writing and Delivery

[slyc_willie]

My wife got a link to this little story on her Facebook page, and I thought I'd share it with the AH. Warning: even if you think it's a hoax, it's still damn creepy.

Little Girl's Friend Lisa

 

[patientlee]

My wife got a link to this little story on her Facebook page, and I thought I'd share it with the AH. Warning: even if you think it's a hoax, it's still damn creepy.

Little Girl's Friend Lisa

Wow. Excellect structure for a very short story. I don't believe a little kid wrote it, but it is a highly effective story.

 

[slyc_willie]

Wow. Excellect structure for a very short story. I don't believe a little kid wrote it, but it is a highly effective story.

It is, isn't it? I'm leaning heavily toward it being fake, but either way, it's damn creepy.

 

[stlgoddessfreya]

Those are definitely adult immitations of the way kids draw. Way too focused on showing single events and too consistent. Well done though. Doesn't take it a step too far, the way a lot of horror stories do. Interesting stuff!

 

[slyc_willie]

Those are definitely adult immitations of the way kids draw. Way too focused on showing single events and too consistent. Well done though. Doesn't take it a step too far, the way a lot of horror stories do. Interesting stuff!

My thinking, too. Drawing "Lisa" as an obvious ghostly figure was the first tip-off. And the short sentences without any wayward thinking was another.

But I loved the delivery. It's just child-like enough that you could believe it.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

I've seen LISA before. Cant remember where, cant remember when.

 

[litmlove]

It is not very creepy at all to me - except for the blood, the "girl" is drawing her imagination, but kids can suprise you like that.

FWIW - the artist who made it.
http:// ocularfracture.deviantart.com/

 

[DesEsseintes]

I rather liked that, but agree that the point of view, in both pictures and words, seems too consistent for a young child. In a different way, this little animation, though obviously made by skilled adults, seems aimed at children at first - but not for long. Lovely and understated, I thought - does anyone agree?

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

I rather liked that, but agree that the point of view, in both pictures and words, seems too consistent for a young child. In a different way, this little animation, though obviously made by skilled adults, seems aimed at children at first - but not for long. Lovely and understated, I thought - does anyone agree?

Youre right. Adults finesse and qualify information, and that's obvious in this example.

 

[slyc_willie]

I've seen LISA before. Cant remember where, cant remember when.

It is not very creepy at all to me - except for the blood, the "girl" is drawing her imagination, but kids can suprise you like that.

FWIW - the artist who made it.
http:// ocularfracture.deviantart.com/

I'm not surprised. The comments by the artist are pretty interesting.

 

[StrangeLife]

She grew up and married Bill Clinton...

 

[jomar]

Creepy. Comments said it's proven to be the work of an adult artist.

http://ocularfracture.deviantart.com/art/The-story-of-Lisa-Pg1-193140959