Vector City: Dystopian Erotica

slyc_willie

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I had an idea several weeks back after watching Sin City, about a suitably depraved dystopian metropolis, combined with the quirkiness of Golden Age street-level superheroes. I call it Vector City. It's your typical Gotham-esque industrial mecca situated "somewhere" on the east coast of the USA, where the mayor is a puppet figure, cops are crooked, politicians are corrupt, and organized crime runs everything.

Basically, the idea would revolve around street-level vigilantes (with or without masks) with some superhuman abilities, quirky gadgets, and really off-the-wall scientifically implausible background stories as to how they became vigilantes. You know . . . "Billy Budd was struck by lightning while transporting a vat of radioactive waste. When he awoke, he found that his skin was as hard as rock. Thus was born The Gargoyle Man."

I figure there would be a ton of angles with an idea like this, so why not make it a shared universe of stories? They wouldn't have to go into Chain Stories, as each story or series would pretty much stand alone, just take place in Vector City. Depending on subject matter, they could be Sci-Fi/Fantasy, Nonhuman, Erotic Horror, or Non-Con, as examples (Mind Control would probably be another possibility).

As events progress in one story, they could be referred to in others. For instance, say in my story the district attorney is blackmailed by a sex scandal and he ultimately commits suicide. Someone else could pick up on that and introduce a new DA. We could even have cameo appearances of other authors' vigilantes, or do cross-overs.

Naturally, we would probably want to post updates in this or another thread (maybe on the AH) to avoid stepping on one another's toes.

The only "rules" would be that no one writes anything that would drastically alter Vector City itself (like detonating a nuke under the mayor's desk). I'd also suggest having a shared title for all the stories, something like . . .

Vector City: The Gargoyle Man

. . . to maintain a sense of continuity. Beyond that, we do what we want.

So . . . any interest?
 
Seems like an okay idea, sort of a roleplay type deal, comic book type deal. It sounds like the Marvel or DC universe, all these heros made by different people in the same universe. I'm sure a bunch of us could do it, if we wanted such a challenge. Sort of like what I'm doing myself; all of my stories take place in the same city, about different people who live there. The hard part and what pretty much makes it roleplay, is you are asking many people to write stories with the constraint of the city you propose.

Essentially you would pretty much need to have a reference thread as the Game Master to provide all of us knowledge of this place for us to work with. And if any of these hero's happened to meet, as we only know the personality of our own character, there would need to be some back and forth, at least a little bit between us. If I wrote there was actually a moment of peace in crime fighting, and my girl, Baretta had a chance to see how rock hard Gargoyle mans dick really was, I would need your help by the slightest to keep it canon.

It sounds fun to me until I think about the possible work involved in it. You pretty much described what I'm doing, accept with more people working at it. I suppose if enough people wanted to give it a go, I'd come up with a character for The Chronicles of Vector City.
 
I wanted to leave as much open as possible to allow people to add to the city and the people in it. But you're right, it would be a big undertaking and there doesn't seem to be any real interest. Thanks for the post, though.
 
Sound like fun to me..... already have a character i made up for a adult superhero club but never really got to use her..... club kind of dried up a few posts in.... :(

If you want to start something with it, i'm game.... ;)
 
So... basically a Captain Proton sort of concept?

With any superhero concept, the power of the hero has to be countered by
a) a force of crime commensurate with their power(s).
b) every strength has to have an inherent weakness.

This is standard fanboy lore that should be commonly known.

I had a similar concept a short while ago about a "a shared universe of stories." You could even use that concept, in part or whole, if you like though I already labeled that city "Donalton." My only exception would be that it not be on the east coast since that would make analogies to large east coast cities (chiefly New York). I had originally figured for some location in the central to mid-west cities. I had developed a small map of the city of sorts; that it was located between the branch of two rivers feeding a nearby lake.

I was trying to generate questions as to where it was located so people writing about it could make it seem more realistic (e.g. In the real world "Blizzard strikes Kansas" which is an example of where the city was located and people can integrate that into their stories if they like).
My concept was to create a basic foundation for other stories to be based on, and after a writer has created a verbose description of a location and if they were willing, a writer could post a description of a location in that city that anyone could use.

If you don't want to use Donalton, I might be willing to draw up something similar for Vector City.

Though I had also developed three cities nearby each other. The other two were called "'Nillaville" and "Weirdsville" lacking anything better to call them but trying to describe the sorts of goings on in each. Weirdsville was supposed to be where werewolves, vampires aliens and tentacle monsters all seemed to happen there... I don't see why superheros couldn't be figured into that mix.
 
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I like the story idea. And I've read a few gargoyle stories. :)
 
Sound like fun to me..... already have a character i made up for a adult superhero club but never really got to use her..... club kind of dried up a few posts in.... :(

If you want to start something with it, i'm game.... ;)

With any superhero concept, the power of the hero has to be countered by
a) a force of crime commensurate with their power(s).
b) every strength has to have an inherent weakness.

This is standard fanboy lore that should be commonly known.

I've written a lot of straight superhero fiction, but I didn't want the emphasis here to necessarily be on the superhuman powers aspect. The characters would be very street-level, with or without costumes, just with really implausible and unusual backgrounds.

I had a similar concept a short while ago about a "a shared universe of stories." You could even use that concept, in part or whole, if you like though I already labeled that city "Donalton." My only exception would be that it not be on the east coast since that would make analogies to large east coast cities (chiefly New York). I had originally figured for some location in the central to mid-west cities. I had developed a small map of the city of sorts; that it was located between the branch of two rivers feeding a nearby lake.

I was trying to generate questions as to where it was located so people writing about it could make it seem more realistic (e.g. In the real world "Blizzard strikes Kansas" which is an example of where the city was located and people can integrate that into their stories if they like).
My concept was to create a basic foundation for other stories to be based on, and after a writer has created a verbose description of a location and if they were willing, a writer could post a description of a location in that city that anyone could use.

If you don't want to use Donalton, I might be willing to draw up something similar for Vector City.

Though I had also developed three cities nearby each other. The other two were called "'Nillaville" and "Weirdsville" lacking anything better to call them but trying to describe the sorts of goings on in each. Weirdsville was supposed to be where werewolves, vampires aliens and tentacle monsters all seemed to happen there... I don't see why superheros couldn't be figured into that mix.

As an avid gamer, I've got a city map for Vector City already and have been making a d20 sourcebook for it. When I told my wife about the idea, she was interested in joining a game like that so I figured I'd see if I could find a group.

Anywho, what that all means is that as I've been developing the idea as a game, the original concept has sort of evolved. As I'm working it now, it's very much turned into a three-way between Frank Miller, Tim Burton and Raymond Chandler. Yes, I know: lovely mental image there.

I like the story idea. And I've read a few gargoyle stories. :)

The "Gargoyle Man" thing was just something I threw into the original post for the example. My character isn't a gargoyle. ;)
 
Well, the gargoyle stories I've read I've liked. Good luck with your story!
 
I wasn't talking about a street map but a 3D map, but yeah, ok.

Well, as I said I had the similar idea for Weirdsville (no that wasn't going to be it's name) and as I also said, the "shared universe" concept was what I had too but I took it a step further and suggested that writers could submit a location they developed that other writers could likewise use.

In affect a shared universe within a shared universe, so to speak. However, it seems you have other goals or aspirations, and don't want to use my concept in part or whole. So, yeah.

Sorry to waste your time. Good luck with the game development.
 
I wasn't talking about a street map but a 3D map, but yeah, ok.

Well, as I said I had the similar idea for Weirdsville (no that wasn't going to be it's name) and as I also said, the "shared universe" concept was what I had too but I took it a step further and suggested that writers could submit a location they developed that other writers could likewise use.

In affect a shared universe within a shared universe, so to speak. However, it seems you have other goals or aspirations, and don't want to use my concept in part or whole. So, yeah.

Sorry to waste your time. Good luck with the game development.

It's not a waste of time. The idea is still in progress. I wanted to know what, if any, interest was out there. The main motivation for wanting to keep the stories in one city was to make it easier to reference what other writers were doing. That part was mainly inspired by Sin City.
 
I'm a little too busy with my own stuff to be involved, but if you don't mind a few thoughts from an outsider:

The name Vector City just doesn't channel up anything noirish to me; infact it's exactly the opposite. Bright and clean rather than dark and shadowy. Prior to opening this thread, I assumed it was about some sort of Tron-esque dystopia. How would this city plausibly be named for a mathematical concept? Founded by software geeks? Mathematicians? The lack of name/mood fit would probably be enough to keep me away from it.

Okay, that nitpick aside, I like your sources of inspiration. Noir stories tend to be about the futility of trying to find your way in a morally corrupt world, which fits well with a superhero world in which heroes are constantly trying to change things but ultimately nothing ever really changes. That said, too little change and the world will feel pretty flat. I'd suggest working out a timeline that writers can work within. For example that there are good years and bad years, so that characters can remember a time when things were better and aspire to that. There should be arcs in the city's story just as there are arcs to individual stories.

I'd wait until you have a few writers, and find out what stories people want to tell, how much they want to be involved in the worldbuilding, how much they want the world to be built for them. Personally, figuring out the city history, culture, class conflict, various groups such as prominent businesses, crime families, secret societies, etc... that's the fun stuff to me. Some writers might be the same way, and resist writing in a world where you've already done that; others might prefer to treat it as a roleplay exercise and have the world already clearly established. Let your participants inform the process. Don't rush ahead with things like mapmaking until you know how others want to be involved.
 
Have to agree with callmeismael's nitpicking. I don't know how tron-esque could be dystopian, but I thought the same thing.
 
The reason I went with "vector" was because, as with many large metropolises, the city was originally a major center of industry. The city's slogan was originally something like "Everything Moves Forward in Vector." So, until several decades ago, Vector City was a crisp, ultra-modern paragon of society. But then it fell apart.

At the same time, a "vector" is also a parasitic organism that transmits disease, which I like as a metaphor for the current prevailing social attitudes in Vector City. So, there's a double meaning to the city's name.
 
I just a few days ago wrote something about a character, sort of a ronin who wields bokken I could throw in- if this ever got of the drawing board.
 
I just a few days ago wrote something about a character, sort of a ronin who wields bokken I could throw in- if this ever got of the drawing board.

I think, before I post anything more about this, I'll finish the first story and submit it. By then, I'll have the basics (and probably a lot more) figured out.
 
Well i'm still interested, and the character i mentioned wasn't some mega powered superhero.... the one power she had caused her more embarrassment than anything, though it had it's uses... the other thing she had was a sort of birth defect that made for some unusual outlooks and such.... ;)
 
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