Need Experienced D/s to tell me how this sounds as a punishment

[Ldy_Sea]

In a role play I was doing, I came up with the idea of looking a male sub in a chastity device, then putting the key in his mouth and locking a ball gag in place. Both padlocks use the same key. The only way to recover it was for the sub to check his waste until it passed, then clean the key and present it to his Mistress, who would decide if he had been punished long enough.

In my limited research I found for children, foreign object ingestion usually passes without issue 90% of the time, and can take 4-6 days. So nutrition and hydration become a problem so I added a nurse to start IV's to counter act that problem.

My question is...

Does this sound plausable enough to include in a lit story?

What if any concerns would you have about doing this in real life (besides those I mentioned)?

 

[Stella_Omega]

I can't speak for everyone, but depends on how hot you write it! I've read other outrageously improbable scenarios and yanno-- slid off the chair.


I hate myself in the morning, but it's great while it lasts.

 

[Vixandra]

In real life, I'd rule that out as not being quite sane. There is a possibility for some nasty internal damage from the key and passing it would be less than a joy. Internal bleeding is not my idea of sexy.

You also need roughage and fiber for things to pass. I guess if you've got a nurse there in the scene you could start a nasogastric tube that runs from the nose to the stomach and pump in liquid foods on a regular basis to keep him hydrated, blood sugar stable and have what's needed to make solid waste.

A person can survive without damage on IV fluids for up to 72 hours, after that they need to start taking in substance via the stomach. Waiting longer can cause issues that can end in necrosis or parts of the intestinal tract dying.

If I had to write that scene, I'd keep the gag in for 12 hours to ensure he wasn't throwing up the key and then remove it. Maybe switch him over to set of locked-on hand covers/paws and feed him from a dog bowl. Keeps the humiliation going without too much physical trauma.

 

[bhndblueyes88]

In real life, I'd rule that out as not being quite sane. There is a possibility for some nasty internal damage from the key and passing it would be less than a joy. Internal bleeding is not my idea of sexy.

You also need roughage and fiber for things to pass. I guess if you've got a nurse there in the scene you could start a nasogastric tube that runs from the nose to the stomach and pump in liquid foods on a regular basis to keep him hydrated, blood sugar stable and have what's needed to make solid waste.

A person can survive without damage on IV fluids for up to 72 hours, after that they need to start taking in substance via the stomach. Waiting longer can cause issues that can end in necrosis or parts of the intestinal tract dying.

If I had to write that scene, I'd keep the gag in for 12 hours to ensure he wasn't throwing up the key and then remove it. Maybe switch him over to set of locked-on hand covers/paws and feed him from a dog bowl. Keeps the humiliation going without too much physical trauma.

This sounds much more plausible, although the whole scenario sounds more "Saw" than "sexy" xD

 

[NiceNastyMann]

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[Ldy_Sea]

Here's the scenario I used in the rp.

Mistress had told male to last 30 minutes without running. Seperatlyshe told female to make male cum in 30 minutes. Mistress lives on a fake island that has legal sexual slavery. She takes the untrained meat and turns them to well trained slaves.

The purpose of this was to increase females skill in providing oral, and to increase males staying power ad control. Female was rewarded with a new untrained slave to test sexualy for 24 hours, male was given punishment above, and instructed to videotape the testing.

Oh and male/female are married, although what exactly that means in this society especially among the slaves hasn't ben explored yet. The society is Matriarchal, and uses Amazon mythology for place names. Not sure if any free men will be allowed or not.

 

[thekeenreader]

One question : which airlines fly to this island of yours and how long can I stay?

As for key-passing-through-body scenario I am sure something other that a metal key could be used (a small chipor something). The idea of feeding through a vent in the gag too.

Overall I think it is a good idea providing the accompanying characters are good

I have an udea I will DM you about orgasm denial and training...it might sit well on your island

 

[QuantumJumping]

Gawd

In a role play I was doing, I came up with the idea of looking a male sub in a chastity device, then putting the key in his mouth and locking a ball gag in place. Both padlocks use the same key. The only way to recover it was for the sub to check his waste until it passed, then clean the key and present it to his Mistress, who would decide if he had been punished long enough.

In my limited research I found for children, foreign object ingestion usually passes without issue 90% of the time, and can take 4-6 days. So nutrition and hydration become a problem so I added a nurse to start IV's to counter act that problem.

My question is...

Does this sound plausable enough to include in a lit story?

What if any concerns would you have about doing this in real life (besides those I mentioned)?

Is English your first language?
Reading this post was a terrible experience.
Looking? Locking? WTF?

 

[thekeenreader]

Is English your first language?
Reading this post was a terrible experience.
Looking? Locking? WTF?

Well if that's the worst thing that happens to you today I think you'll survive eh

I mean is a fairly minor typo really a "wtf" moment for you?

 

[Ldy_Sea]

Is English your first language?
Reading this post was a terrible experience.
Looking? Locking? WTF?

Must be nice to never make a mistake....

And never need manners or to be polite to strangers. Guess that's asking a bit much. Going to ignore you now dumbass...