Count The Errors In His Article.

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

http://colorlines.com/archives/2014/01/youth unemployment.html

I'm guessing he has no copy editor...or editor, period.

 

[Bramblethorn]

http://colorlines.com/archives/2014/01/youth unemployment.html

I'm guessing he has no copy editor...or editor, period.

Error #1: "errors in his article" should probably be "errors in this article".

Error #2: link is broken.

;-)

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Error #1: "errors in his article" should probably be "errors in this article".

Error #2: link is broken.

;-)

It is his article, is it not?

Mostly he omitted OF where it was required....several times.
I wonder if someone pulled the article? I would.

 

[Bramblethorn]

It is his article, is it not?

Mostly he omitted OF where it was required....several times.
I wonder if someone pulled the article? I would.

It's still up. The correct URL is http://colorlines.com/archives/2014/01/youth_unemployment.html

(underscore, not space).

And, yeah, even some major news sites have crappy editing these days. Part of it's time pressure, but a lot of it's the money-saving trend where they try to get the journalist to do everybody else's job for free. Or better yet, unpaid members of the public.

 

[sr71plt]

This seems very much a glass house/rocks kind of thread. Must be a lonely day around the Johnson trailer.