Story Idea: Used as Target Practice

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Here's an idea I have for a story...

My boyfriend and his group of friends are playing around with their paintball guns, and they decide to persuade me to volunteer to be used as target practice. They tie me to a vertical surface, blind-fold me and then take it in turns to try to shoot around me, without hitting me. At some point they decide to have a competition to see who can get the closest near-miss without actually hitting me!

(I'd prefer to be weraring nylons/pantyhose/tights in the story).
 
Here's an idea I have for a story...

My boyfriend and his group of friends are playing around with their paintball guns, and they decide to persuade me to volunteer to be used as target practice. They tie me to a vertical surface, blind-fold me and then take it in turns to try to shoot around me, without hitting me. At some point they decide to have a competition to see who can get the closest near-miss without actually hitting me!

(I'd prefer to be weraring nylons/pantyhose/tights in the story).

I'd be more interested if they turned you loose in the woods wearing lingerie, gave you a fifteen minute head start, then hunted you with paintball guns. Whoever scored a killing shot got to take you as a trophy for the next hour.

Taking it one step further, the wives/girlfriends of each of the hunters are released one at a time until everyone has bagged a trophy.
 
I'd be more interested if they turned you loose in the woods wearing lingerie, gave you a fifteen minute head start, then hunted you with paintball guns. Whoever scored a killing shot got to take you as a trophy for the next hour.

Taking it one step further, the wives/girlfriends of each of the hunters are released one at a time until everyone has bagged a trophy.

I like this twist sooo much better, LOL!

Better yet, the shots have points awarded depending on the part of body hit:
  • Back, legs, arms = 1 point
  • Ass = 2 points
  • Crotch = 3 points
  • Breasts (side) = 2 points
  • Breast (head-on) = 4 points
They all have different colored paint balls so at the end the guy with the most points for a particular girl gets that girl...and there is that one girl who EVERYBODY wants... :rolleyes:
 
I like this twist sooo much better, LOL!

Better yet, the shots have points awarded depending on the part of body hit:
  • Back, legs, arms = 1 point
  • Ass = 2 points
  • Crotch = 3 points
  • Breasts (side) = 2 points
  • Breast (head-on) = 4 points
They all have different colored paint balls so at the end the guy with the most points for a particular girl gets that girl...and there is that one girl who EVERYBODY wants... :rolleyes:

My god, do you know how much of a masochist that girl would have to be to actually stand this?
 
My god, do you know how much of a masochist that girl would have to be to actually stand this?

Yeah, that would leave her all bruised and covered in paint. One kill shot to the head or torso (and give her a helmet) would probably work better.
 
SOemthing to think about with regards to the injury factor. I don't play paint ball, though I probably should at some point. Granted, I would look like a living piece of art in a minute, but still, it seems like fun. Almost done with this little project too; maybe by Friday?
We shall see :/
 
LOL, I know paint balls hurt...not sure if they can "tone down" the cartridges or not...but then again, it's a story, so can do what you will, hehehe.

Or make it a game of laser tag to avoid the pain portion (unless that's your thing)...
 
lol, pain's not my thing. At least, as far as I know :)
My character though, she's leaping into a situation that, if not doen right, can hurt.....
 
I finally finished it!

I started this one four months ago, and finished the draft last week. Chapter 1 is up, Chapter 2 submitted. Take a look and post your opinions. Trophy Wife.
 
Yeah, that would leave her all bruised and covered in paint. One kill shot to the head or torso (and give her a helmet) would probably work better.
Never played paintball but I know people wear quite some protective gear. Helmet and face guard are really the bare essentials - hit an eye and the victim may end up blind.

LOL, I know paint balls hurt...not sure if they can "tone down" the cartridges or not...but then again, it's a story, so can do what you will, hehehe.

Or make it a game of laser tag to avoid the pain portion (unless that's your thing)...

Paintball guns work with air pressure, so toning them down should be possible, how to do it would depend on the exact construction of the gun. Range will suffer of course, but the bruises shouldn't be so bad. Accuracy not, those things are not very accurate anyway.

Laser games I have played, that was great fun. You get to wear a harness with targets on your back, chest and shoulders. Being hit disables your own gun for a few seconds, scores are kept electronically (exact scores of who hit who). Normally played in two teams (red and green - lights on the shoulders) in a dark room with flashing lights and all kinds of obstacles.

I'm sure there is some inroad possible for erotic arrangements. Like ask the guys to chase down the girls they like, and the one that shoots her most gets her, but shots by her are deducted from his score, so she should start shooting the guy she does not want. Or maybe add scores and let her shoot who she does want.

Of note is that a laser game normally lasts only 12-15 minutes which is enough to be soaked in sweat. It's a very intense play. I once played a 20-minute game (it was quiet in the mall, they let us play a little longer) and it was really exhausting.

Getting ideas for more stories... great expansion of what I've been doing so far.
 
Several years ago I had a friend who played paint ball. He told me his gun fired the balls at 400 ft./ sec. Some simple calculations say that is 270 MPH. That's dangerous as hell and at a minimum.it hurts like a bitch.

I understand it is just a story, but my vote is for laser tag.

Mike
 
Several years ago I had a friend who played paint ball. He told me his gun fired the balls at 400 ft./ sec. Some simple calculations say that is 270 MPH. That's dangerous as hell and at a minimum.it hurts like a bitch.

I understand it is just a story, but my vote is for laser tag.

Mike

Seconded. Paintballs hurt and can be pretty dangerous.
 
Seconded. Paintballs hurt and can be pretty dangerous.

The story can still be done as is and here's how. The women wear eye protection, and that's it. They're put out on the range as targets.

When a target sees a gun approach, she has two options. Flee, and take her chances of getting whacked in that cute ass by a paintball, or assume the submissive position. Then she'll be safe, but essentially ready for whatever sex the shooter has in mind.

On her knees, blowjob.

On her back with her legs wide open...

Doggy style...

You get the idea. If she's assumed any submissive position, she can be used, but not abused. Some of them run and get whacked a couple times by balls.

And fair's fair. After the girls play target for the boys, the boys play targets for the girls. Even better - the team that goes first is decided on a coin toss.
 
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I'd vote for laser tag as well. But is that something that could be done outdoors (in other words, in the woods) or does that need to be done indoors (maybe in a big old abandoned factory free of clutter). :confused: ;)
 
Several years ago I had a friend who played paint ball. He told me his gun fired the balls at 400 ft./ sec. Some simple calculations say that is 270 MPH. That's dangerous as hell and at a minimum.it hurts like a bitch.

I understand it is just a story, but my vote is for laser tag.

Mike

A quick Google search gives me a typical speed of 300 ft/s. Your friend may have a souped up gun, that he likes to brag about, but the point stands: those things go fast and can hurt badly, particularly at close range. And even at that muzzle velocity, the range is limited to around 50 meters (differs vastly with muzzle velocity and type of ball used - they tend to break in flight which is what mostly limits their range).
 
Sooo...where were all you naysayers the first time this topic was discussed? Before I wrote the story?
 
If you can't past the potential for injury with paintball and want to keep it outside thus eliminating laser tag then how about traditional tag but when the guy catches the girl he marks them with his initials with a marker or splash of paint?
 
If you can't past the potential for injury with paintball and want to keep it outside thus eliminating laser tag then how about traditional tag but when the guy catches the girl he marks them with his initials with a marker or splash of paint?

Or like flag football where you snatch their flag. But then again, why not collect their panties instead? :D
 
If you can't past the potential for injury with paintball and want to keep it outside thus eliminating laser tag then how about traditional tag but when the guy catches the girl he marks them with his initials with a marker or splash of paint?

I don't see why you can not do laser games outdoors. It's commonly done indoors as you need relatively little space (paintball games need more space). Daylight won't affect the lasers as such. Just makes it harder to see the red targeting laser (the actual "shot" is by infrared laser).
 
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