need a man's point of view.

[CindyUSA]

I am trying to write a story about a man that like to receive oral sex, male or female he does not care. He only sees the person as a means to a end cumming. He thinks that anyone who sucks cock is beneath him, pardon the pun, and he has no respect for them.
What would this man thank and say when cumming? Some times he would tell them he would not cum in their mouth but does anyway. He takes advantage of anyone who might be inclined to knee before him. He is not a master and no one is a slave.
What would he say to himself when he climaxes.
Cindy

 

[theunknown2008]

I am trying to write a story about a man that like to receive oral sex, male or female he does not care. He only sees the person as a means to a end cumming. He thinks that anyone who sucks cock is beneath him, pardon the pun, and he has no respect for them.
What would this man thank and say when cumming? Some times he would tell them he would not cum in their mouth but does anyway. He takes advantage of anyone who might be inclined to knee before him. He is not a master and no one is a slave.
What would he say to himself when he climaxes.
Cindy

Take it slut, that is what I would say.

 

[peebudy]

love the story idea. that kind of man would only think of himself at time of climax, and would probably think "there's got to be some else who can suck me better"

 

[flasubm]

In a restaurant bathroom, "Now clean yourself up, your wife is probably wondering what's taking so long".

 

[peebudy]

In a restaurant bathroom, "Now clean yourself up, your wife is probably wondering what's taking so long".

nice!

 

[flasubm]

one more I guess,

"is that the best you can do, go home and take some pointers from your husband before you come back to see me, he knows how to suck cock properly".

 

[Boundlife]

Take it slut, that is what I would say.

love the story idea. that kind of man would only think of himself at time of climax, and would probably think "there's got to be some else who can suck me better"

In a restaurant bathroom, "Now clean yourself up, your wife is probably wondering what's taking so long".

He wouldn't enjoy the moment with a "take it slut/bitch/whore...." and then start looking for the next/dismissimg the last? just asking

 

[flasubm]

He wouldn't enjoy the moment with a "take it slut/bitch/whore...." and then start looking for the next/dismissimg the last? just asking

I think that is a given, I am thinking of more specific humiliating things that might not otherwise be thought of

 

[Kruge]

I am trying to write a story about a man that like to receive oral sex, male or female he does not care. He only sees the person as a means to a end cumming. He thinks that anyone who sucks cock is beneath him, pardon the pun, and he has no respect for them.
What would this man thank and say when cumming? Some times he would tell them he would not cum in their mouth but does anyway. He takes advantage of anyone who might be inclined to knee before him. He is not a master and no one is a slave.
What would he say to himself when he climaxes.
Cindy

The two bolded statements are somewhat in conflict with each other. Given that he sees people who suck on him to be "Beneath" him, I would expect his response to one of someone who feels superior or dominent versus a warmer, caring responses/thoughts.

Responses like "Good Slut" and "do a good job and I may reward you with my cum" might be expected, in an authoritative tone. After he cums, I would expect a dismissive response as he achieves his satisfaction and moves on with minimal concern for the satisfaction of the person suckng him off.

 

[theunknown2008]

He wouldn't enjoy the moment with a "take it slut/bitch/whore...." and then start looking for the next/dismissimg the last? just asking

Well if you look as someone as beneath you are you not adverse to call them names as a way of belittling them?

 

[Boundlife]

I think that is a given, I am thinking of more specific humiliating things that might not otherwise be thought of

I Love your thoughts I was just getting it straight in my head...
Take it, fuck off...got it

 

[HeyAll]

I've always liked the idea of someone receiving oral sex, and then afterwards patting them on the head in a condisending manner.

I wrote a story last year in which an 'evil' step mother has a step-daughter perform oral sex on her, and afterwards she says something, "Not bad. You're a real natural. Maybe one day you'll be as good as your sister."

Something like that. Then she gives a patronizing pat on the head and leaves before making another degrading comment like, "If you were wondering what that taste was, I just had sex with your father." And she smiles and leaves.

 

[peterholmes]

From my poit of view a man with this profile says nothing.
He just wipes the cock with a tissue and leaves the sceene.

 

[CindyUSA]

would he say and think something different

thanks for the input. I was thinking that the character was a sexual sadist but not into the BDSM, just the humiliation of other by is desire to have oral sex. I like the comments so far where he puts down the recipient of his male essence by compare and contrast, not as good as your wife or hubby, that is great.
Yes, he would call the recipient a cock sucker, or bitch or whore, maybe even if a guy is giving the oral, a queer, or fag.
So he might say, "Take my cum you queer cock sucker" or "You need to practice sucking, your mother sucks better than you did." But what was he thinking when he was cumming, "Oh shit, this one is going to be a big load. Fucking queer is on his knees sucking my cock. Stupid cocksucker, swallow my load." Would he be saying one thing and thinking another, humiliation out loud but either discus or praise in his mind.
I know that many men that go to adult theaters or glory hole are self centered and only looking for receiving pleasure and see the person giving oral as not a person with feelings but just a warm place to deposit his seed.

 

[HeyAll]

But what was he thinking when he was cumming, "Oh shit, this one is going to be a big load. Fucking queer is on his knees sucking my cock. Stupid cocksucker, swallow my load." Would he be saying one thing and thinking another, humiliation out loud but either discus or praise in his mind.

Personally, I think it's better to just leave that out. Just describe the enthusiasm of the person performing oral, what it looks like, how he feels, ect...

The degrading part comes before or after, or maybe he makes little snarky comments to the person while he/she is on his/her knees. But there's no need to go overboard with what he's thinking while he's cumming.

 

[flasubm]

thanks for the input. I was thinking that the character was a sexual sadist but not into the BDSM, just the humiliation of other by is desire to have oral sex. I like the comments so far where he puts down the recipient of his male essence by compare and contrast, not as good as your wife or hubby, that is great.
Yes, he would call the recipient a cock sucker, or bitch or whore, maybe even if a guy is giving the oral, a queer, or fag.
So he might say, "Take my cum you queer cock sucker" or "You need to practice sucking, your mother sucks better than you did." But what was he thinking when he was cumming, "Oh shit, this one is going to be a big load. Fucking queer is on his knees sucking my cock. Stupid cocksucker, swallow my load." Would he be saying one thing and thinking another, humiliation out loud but either discus or praise in his mind.
I know that many men that go to adult theaters or glory hole are self centered and only looking for receiving pleasure and see the person giving oral as not a person with feelings but just a warm place to deposit his seed.

I'm thinking that your character needs a little depth and purpose, going around face fucking for the sake of face fucking won't keep my interest very long. Give him deeper purpose than just face fucking. I think you make him think that he is helping these people, spreading is cock and cum as well as the experience will make them better people and he is providing this service. This is all in his head of course.

A question to you though, why do these people suck his cock, what are their motivations?