Women Rate Him?

[JackLuis]

Trying to find men that are attractive to women, to get characters for my stories.
Girls, hows this one?
More pix in the link.

http://galleries.blueloot.com/content/pictures/Jake_1/image_2.jpg

 

[SydneyBlake]

Too much of a good thing. A guy this pumped up spends too much time at the gym and too much time staring at his own reflection. There's also something in this guy's eyes that says, "What's an SAT?"

The handsome fella to the left, however, has an intelligent, thoughtful look. I like that.

 

[Stella_Omega]

Are you illustrating your stories?

If you aren't-- than you can use any picture of any man. It isn't what he looks like as it is how you describe him.

And how you describe him is-- you describe the emotional reaction that your woman gets when she sees him.

 

[3113]

Trying to find men that are attractive to women, to get characters for my stories. Girls, hows this one?

Ack! Jake (that's his "name" right?) looks bored and sleepy and, as Sydney says, dumb as that hammer he doesn't know how to use. His body is nice enough, but--still in agreement with Sydney--he looks like those muscles are way too heavy for him and he doesn't know what to do with them.

This is the sort of guy who'd roll over in bed one night and crush his girlfriend. He'd wake up in the morning, never noticing he'd smothered her, and head out for his egg Macmuffin and a day of bad carpentry work. Scintillating conversation for him would be "Hey."

 

[Dianthus]

Ack! Jake (that's his "name" right?) looks bored and sleepy and, as Sydney says, dumb as that hammer he doesn't know how to use. His body is nice enough, but--still in agreement with Sydney--he looks like those muscles are way too heavy for him and he doesn't know what to do with them.

This is the sort of guy who'd roll over in bed one night and crush his girlfriend. He'd wake up in the morning, never noticing he'd smothered her, and head out for his egg Macmuffin and a day of bad carpentry work. Scintillating conversation for him would be "Hey."

It might extend to 'Yo'.

 

[3113]

It might extend to 'Yo'.

If he was trying to be deep and philosophical, yes.

 

[Dianthus]

If he was trying to be deep and philosophical, yes.

Maybe 'Yo, ho, ho!' in a role play context?

 

[PennLady]

Personally, none of those guys do much for me. But see, there's the problem -- everyone's attracted to someone and something different. From across a room or something, all of these guys would look like they're way too into themselves.

 

[jomar]

Yo Adrian. Adriannnn!

 

[TE999]

Personally, none of those guys do much for me. But see, there's the problem -- everyone's attracted to someone and something different. From across a room or something, all of these guys would look like they're way too into themselves.

Actually, they're way too into each other. (pun intended)

 

[3113]

Yo Adrian. Adriannnn!

LOL! I was thinking that. He is a Stallone wannabe.

 

[lovecraft68]

Too much of a good thing. A guy this pumped up spends too much time at the gym and too much time staring at his own reflection. There's also something in this guy's eyes that says, "What's an SAT?"

The handsome fella to the left, however, has an intelligent, thoughtful look. I like that.

Yeah, but he could just be thinking "What's an S.a.t. as well. He is just concentrating harder.

And guys that pumped up sometimes use enhancements pumping those muscles which diminish certain other muscles. Not worth it.

So have you heard how non muscular I am?

 

[SydneyBlake]

So have you heard how non muscular I am?

Any guy who spars on Lit, sells on eBay, solves Sodorko puzzles, AND writes quality smut at the same time is a *fucking* god in my book.

 

[sr71plt]

Any guy who spars on Lit, sells on eBay, solves Sodorko puzzles, AND writes quality smut at the same time is a *fucking* god in my book.

Thanks for the compliment.

 

[SydneyBlake]

Thanks for the compliment.

whaddayou tawkin about?

 

[sr71plt]

whaddayou tawkin about?

 

[lovecraft68]

whaddayou tawkin about?

I think he's jealous.

 

[JackLuis]

All good comments. Yeah, the guy is from a Gay site.
My character is older 52, and thin from running around the hills of Afghanistan.

Maureen pushed him over on his back, sat up and looked down on him, still stroking his chest, letting her fingers linger on his scars and taunt abdomen, “He’s thin really, too thin for a man his age.” She looked at his face, now calm and gently smiling, his eyes closed. “He’s got more than a few miles, on him but, Lord what a chassis!” Maureen thought as Jodie drifted off lying at Lester’s side. She smiled and traced one scar that seemed newer than the rest.

 

[D_Lynn]

So have you heard how non muscular I am?

Um, yeah. Sometimes, just for kicks, I tease myself by pulling up that photo of you flexing your guns and showing off your tattoo.

Any guy who spars on Lit, sells on eBay, solves Sodorko puzzles, AND writes quality smut at the same time is a *fucking* god in my book.

Watch it, missy. You're flirting with ma boy, there.

All good comments. Yeah, the guy is from a Gay site.
My character is older 52, and thin from running around the hills of Afghanistan.

Maureen pushed him over on his back, sat up and looked down on him, still stroking his chest, letting her fingers linger on his scars and taunt abdomen, “He’s thin really, too thin for a man his age.” She looked at his face, now calm and gently smiling, his eyes closed. “He’s got more than a few miles, on him but, Lord what a chassis!” Maureen thought as Jodie drifted off lying at Lester’s side. She smiled and traced one scar that seemed newer than the rest.

I personally love muscular men, but only if they're masculine. Part of what you're running into here is that you're asking women if they are attracted to a man who is making himself attractive to other men. He's had his hair removed, for crying out loud. Heterosexual men (who aren't strippers, swimmers, cyclists, or latent homosexuals) don't shave/wax/remove every lock of hair from their body.

I can overlook that he's pimping himself in the photos, but I can't overlook that he's smooth like a girl. And that makes him more feminine than masculine.

From your description above, I'd say that using phrases like 'too thin' are a turn-off. If you're trying to say that he looks almost 'too fit' for someone his age, that would be okay.

 

[D_Lynn]

He's had his hair removed, for crying out loud. Heterosexual men (who aren't strippers, swimmers, cyclists, or latent homosexuals) don't shave/wax/remove every lock of hair from their body.

Okay...I looked again. He has some hair. But he still looks feminine for a guy with muscles. He wouldn't turn my head in a bar, even after a few drinks on a lonely Saturday night.

 

[sr71plt]

I wondered what you were nattering on about with the hairless thing.

He's a neither/nor model. Neither masculine enough nor "beautiful" enough. I think 3113 nailed it with the Stallone link.

 

[jomar]

...I think 3113 nailed it with the Stallone link.

*cough cough* Ahem.

 

[sr71plt]

*cough cough* Ahem.

Yes??

 

[lovecraft68]

Okay...I looked again. He has some hair. But he still looks feminine for a guy with muscles. He wouldn't turn my head in a bar, even after a few drinks on a lonely Saturday night.

Now exactly how many drinks does it take? I need to know so I can pace my own drinking when I get down your way.

 

[lovecraft68]

The thing with guys like this is that they are a bit too much. Sometimes what people perceive as the perfect form is less attractive than those with some character shall we say.

Same with women, yes we drool over the penthouse pornstar type, but there is something intimidating and fake about them.

I have my characters for the most part attractive, but not ridiculously so (except for Mark, because I know Syd will call me out on the alpha male) My main female lead in my series was pretty but with a rather flat chest and crooked smile. She was hot, but still had that air of attainability for the common man.