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Received this via feedback from I would guess a "fan". I thought is was real creepy.

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Hi, thanks for the great stories on Literotica, you really bring them to life. I have a scenario I would like creating into a story which I feel you would create brilliantly with your style and attention to detail.

I would like the mother to surpise her young virgin son (18yrs old) and walks in the bathroom in long satin nightdress whilst hes in bath and she starts forcefully kissing him and then plays with his balls before masturbating him whilst still kissing him as he struggles to stop her without success he comes.
Several weeks this goes on until one day she climbs in still in her satin nightdress sitting astride him forcefully kissing him, she stays on top of him whilst kissing him she plays with his balls and masturbating him.

The next time in a diff colour long satin nightdress while on top of him kissing she wants to go further and have full sex. He refuses to and she gets mad and gets handcuffs and cuffs his hands behind his back. She then lays on top of him and has her way. He struggles and she forces him underwater to muffle his protests. She lets him up for air as he nears orgasm she force kisses him and grabs his balls then he comes in her. She then sits up on him and pushes him back under water whilst sat astride him he struggles but cant get her off. He keeps coming up for air so she lays on top of him to keep him pinned down until he stops moving.

Would welcome your feedback and if you could create this great storyline with nasty twist at the end.

Regards, Gaz
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This guy hit me months ago with the same fantasy! I usually save all feedback in a folder and now will have to go look for it. It was back when I wrote Weekends with Laura (mother/son) so last August I think. The e-mail was not identical but he asked me if I could wrote that fantasy and went on and on about the different colored satin night dresses and how the sex escalated with each encounter he ended it with asking me if I would write it.

Bingo! Here it is from December.

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This feedback was sent by: gaz_woodster@yahoo.co.uk

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Hi,

First of all may I congratulate you on your Incest Stories for Literotica....they are all awesome stories and very enjoyable reading!!

Secondly I'd like to ask if you would be willing to write a story to include the following...you have the quality and context in your writings to make it an excellent story.

The scenario is very much around the seduction of a son by the mother. She knows he has a fetish for satin and it turns him on. She starts going to his room each night wearing long satin nightdresses that hugs ger curves.

Each night then unfolds like this:-

Night 1 - She wears a long black satin nightdress and climbs in to bed with him and gets on top of him but only kisses him passionately while laying on top of him rubbing her satin body all over him. Then leaves.

Night 2 - She steps up her game this time wearing a long blue satin nightdress and does the same as night 1 only this time when he thinks she is leaving she gives him a handjob while sat on top of him kissing him.

Night 3 - She wears a long red satin nightdress but underneath this she wears black stockings and suspenders and gets into bed on top of him and while kissing him he runs his hands all over her nightdress and stockings. He is wondering what she will do next and she then ties his hands to the bed. Then she teases him with her satin before giving him a blowjob and riding him all while still wearing the nightdress and stockings.

Obviously the rest is to be added with your style and content but if the scenario above can be included into your story that would be awesome!!!

Let me know your thoughts....look forward to hearing from you.

Kind Regards,

Gaz


At least he is consistent!
 
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lc, at least in the email he sent you, he didn't advocate killing the guy. Geez.

And if this is the same guy who sent to both of you, I wonder why he doesn't write it himself. The outline isn't that bad.
 
PennLady said:
lc, at least in the email he sent you, he didn't advocate killing the guy. Geez.

And if this is the same guy who sent to both of you, I wonder why he doesn't write it himself. The outline isn't that bad.
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His now throwing in killing the guy (or at the least erotic asphyxia) shows that his behavior is escalating. If someone does not write this soon he may kill someone himself!

As for the idea not bad at all. Matter of fact I admit to toying with it a bit. My problem was the stages of the seduction. I see it as one actual encounter but a lot of teasing with the night gowns being the build up. That probably would not have satisfied him however and he would have wanted top drown me.
 
PennLady said:
lc, at least in the email he sent you, he didn't advocate killing the guy. Geez.

And if this is the same guy who sent to both of you, I wonder why he doesn't write it himself. The outline isn't that bad.
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lovecraft68 said:
His now throwing in killing the guy (or at the least erotic asphyxia) shows that his behavior is escalating. If someone does not write this soon he may kill someone himself!

As for the idea not bad at all. Matter of fact I admit to toying with it a bit. My problem was the stages of the seduction. I see it as one actual encounter but a lot of teasing with the night gowns being the build up. That probably would not have satisfied him however and he would have wanted top drown me.
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It's the same guy! Yikes! :eek:

And although I will tackle a mother/son incest story, will not have the mother raping the son <--- would the mother fit the list on Handley's post?, nor will I do snuff stories.

Although I have killed off characters it was done as part of the story, not the story itself.
 
Look on the bright side--Lovecraft's awesome and Zeb's brilliant. A compliment's a compliment, right? :confused:
 
lovecraft68 said:
His now throwing in killing the guy (or at the least erotic asphyxia) shows that his behavior is escalating. If someone does not write this soon he may kill someone himself!
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Actually, it sounds like he wants to be killed not do the killing. I'm guessing that when he masturbates to this fantasy he's playing the role of the boy in the bathtub not mommy-dearest in the nightgown.
 
i get such a kick out of the satin nightdresses.

Satin nightdresses.

SATIN!

SATINNNNN!!!!

Because flannel? Just no.
 
LOVEBOAT YOURE SUCH A SISSY.

What in fuck would you do if you got a phonecall and someone really was fixin to kill somebody. You'd have to change your thong first.
 
Stella_Omega said:
It's the drop down bottom that gets me. :cattail:
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All kidding aside my sister in law actually had a pair of adult sized zip up footed pajamas. I saw her in them once and I have to tell you it was disturbing on several levels. My wife wanted to ask what her husband thoought of them but she was afraid to ask.:eek:
 
lovecraft68 said:
All kidding aside my sister in law actually had a pair of adult sized zip up footed pajamas. I saw her in them once and I have to tell you it was disturbing on several levels. My wife wanted to ask what her husband thoought of them but she was afraid to ask.:eek:
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As long as they zipped up the front, I don't see why he would object. ;)
 
JAMESBJOHNSON said:
LOVEBOAT YOURE SUCH A SISSY.

What in fuck would you do if you got a phonecall and someone really was fixin to kill somebody. You'd have to change your thong first.
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Hmmm let's see what would I do if I really thought someone was coming for me.

I have two hundred plus pound German shepards. My 21 year old daughter is a black belt. My 18 year old takes her black belt test next month. I am a black belt. My wife (slacker) is a purple belt.

My daughters each have a .32 in their bedrooms and know how to fire them. I have a .45 in mine. I think I will take my chances Jimmy boy so make sure you call first before you come a knockin'
 
sr71plt said:
As long as they zipped up the front, I don't see why he would object. ;)
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No I suppose not. Just bizarre to see a woman with a double d rack sporting little kid jammies. Reminds me of something they would write about on that asstr site that guy was talking about in the other thread.
 
lovecraft68 said:
All kidding aside my sister in law actually had a pair of adult sized zip up footed pajamas. I saw her in them once and I have to tell you it was disturbing on several levels. My wife wanted to ask what her husband thoought of them but she was afraid to ask.:eek:
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I used to have a couple pair; I have a low thyroid and I lived where there was real winter.

My only criteria was my own comfort. You think they seem disturbing? Tough noogies, buddy. :D
 
I think they're kind of a kink, actually. We rarely ever get cold enough to warrant buying HM any but they are kinda cute, IMO.
 
Stella_Omega said:
i get such a kick out of the satin nightdresses.

Satin nightdresses.

SATAN!

SATANNNNN!!!!

Because flannel? Just no.
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If he changed that to Satan... it would be more along the lines of a ceremonial robe that shes wearing when the you man gets killed?
I don't know for sure I just thought it could be funny.
 
lovecraft68 said:
All kidding aside my sister in law actually had a pair of adult sized zip up footed pajamas. I saw her in them once and I have to tell you it was disturbing on several levels.
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Hey, I put my heroine into footed pjs into one of my stories--It went over very well with the fans. They found the part where the guy slowly pulled the zipper down to be incredibly erotic :devil:
 
Maybe Nerdlinger would like a fantasy where he's wearing footed jammies and Winnie the Pooh jacks him off and drowns him while wearing a satin nightgown. :D

It could happen.
 
3113 said:
Hey, I put my heroine into footed pjs into one of my stories--It went over very well with the fans. They found the part where the guy slowly pulled the zipper down to be incredibly erotic :devil:
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It depends why they find it erotic. I just can;t get the image of a small child out of my mind.

I wrote a story once. A sort of prototype of the series I have on here. In the original version the sister was a little less than the age requirement here (by a year not really young). Anyway she was hot but her brother always preferred when she looked "cute"

In a sex scene I had her wearing a nightshirt with "care bears" on it. Now I never put this anywhere but let a friend of mine read it. he told me that he let his room mate read it as well. The room mate said he was very turned on because the care bear nighty made him think of her as a 10 year old and he loved it.

I drastically changed what she was wearing after that and never brought my daughters near the guy again.
 
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