Special thanks to Estragon

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[SuperHeroRalph]

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[estragon]

You're Very Welcome

I just wanted to thank Estragon for a really insightful and detailed feedback comment left on my latest story. I didn't post the link in the feedback forum when it first posted, and I probably should have. I did re-edit the work and submitted it, so the corrected version should post in a few days. It's nice to have this kind of support here.

For any who would like to look at the story, it is a home invasion, non-consent with a twist.


http://www.literotica.com/s/the-perils-of-plagiarism-ch-01

So, again, thank you Estragon for a really detailed and thorough analysis. To answer your questions, I take no reprisals on quibblers, and no, it's not Noah. I appreciate the time and effort you took to respond to the story.

Surely, Your story is a very good one, even though non-con/reluc is not my kind of genre. To my mind, it's worth working on good material, trying in good faith to make it read better without in any way intruding on the author's characters, plot or prerogatives.

Of course, once an editor, always a son of a bitch. So you, or any author, are free to accept, reject or ignore anything I or anyone else has to say about your work.

Finally, in tribute to the late great Leslie Graves, I won't stop calling you "Surely". And first, last and always, in tribute to Ms. Lesley Gore, I will always remember that "It's your party and you
can cry if you want to."

Best regards (signed) estragon

 

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[estragon]

Thanks

Blackbird Guy, thanks. Must keep the lines of communication clear.

 

[estragon]

Surely, I had a few quibbles to Ch 2, but you've written a stormer of a story. Ol' Penny is quite a little devil, now that Terry got her going. And, to allude to my favorite South Florida greengrocer, Robert is Here! Now I expect you'll bring in their dear offspring. Full house, as it were! Go for it!