BMF's Urban Hang Suite

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listening to What's Covering Your...

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Honestly...I read it so differently when you sent that to me. Slower...I think.

I wonder if I can read it and record it? Would you mind?

I have to see if my computer has the ability to do that..but.. I would love to "show" you what I mean....

My mic is via my computer if I do cam. So, sometimes there is crazy background noise..

Totally up to you..But still one of my favorites of yours.
 
listening to What's Covering Your...

:)


Honestly...I read it so differently when you sent that to me. Slower...I think.

I wonder if I can read it and record it? Would you mind?

I have to see if my computer has the ability to do that..but.. I would love to "show" you what I mean....

My mic is via my computer if I do cam. So, sometimes there is crazy background noise..

Totally up to you..But still one of my favorites of yours.

Please. I recorded it several different ways. When I performed it, I had only a few minutes on stage for that set. So I became comfy with that meter. Please go ahead..
 
Please. I recorded it several different ways. When I performed it, I had only a few minutes on stage for that set. So I became comfy with that meter. Please go ahead..

I love it.

You know. I tried to record an audio poem for lit. But the format I used was not right.

YOU can do that, you know. You have a great voice. And your poems are truly wonderful...
 
I love it.

You know. I tried to record an audio poem for lit. But the format I used was not right.

YOU can do that, you know. You have a great voice. And your poems are truly wonderful...

You would probably read this infinitely better. I wanna hear you do it. And you're too kind.
 
Hey, if anyone's dropping panties it's going to be....

*looks around the room*


YOU!
 
Lol. Canbe...sup bruh? You're the one withthe panty dropping lyrics. I'm just a simple poet.

lol I was hoping for "melting" but "dropping" is just fine...something to aspire to...

Thanks BB, I appreciate the BMF poet lettin me hang : )
 
Hey, if anyone's dropping panties it's going to be....

*looks around the room*


YOU!

But Honey, that is my fovarite sound in the world, that moment when they hit the floor...oh wait...crumb ...no sound...besides if you are a gentleman you never never let her panties hit the floor...thay are removed with care and placed on the dressor or neatly folded at the end of the bed... : ) lessons learned...
 
But Honey, that is my fovarite sound in the world, that moment when they hit the floor...oh wait...crumb ...no sound...besides if you are a gentleman you never never let her panties hit the floor...thay are removed with care and placed on the dressor or neatly folded at the end of the bed... : ) lessons learned...

fine for the panties.

But my miracle bra...Now that makes a sound when it hits the floor!!! :eek:

so sad. :(
 
I'll present this one to Wifey right before our date. Wish me luck! ;)


The alarm is set, the kids are in bed,
time to lock the bedroom door.
Can I at least turn on the closet light,
so I don’t lip-skid on the floor?

Okay, okay, you got me;
of course I can see the way.
But c’mon Baby, you know me,
I like to look at you when we play.

I’ve made us a pallet on the floor;
got a blindfold in my hand.
Don’t want you to know where I’m going next,
on my way to the promised land.

We laugh together and cuddle;
the foreplay’s always sweet.
My heart leaps up into my throat
every single time our lips meet.

I kiss my way to that shiver spot
right beneath your ear.
Run my hands along that fantastic bod;
you’re all goose-bumpy, Dear.

I kiss my way down to your breasts,
kissing around, but not on your nips.
You’ve taught me how to tease you,
thanks for the helpful tips.

Kiss, nibble, lick down your body,
several stops along the way.
I’m in no hurry to get there,
frankly, I could do this all day.

I’m finally where you want me to be;
I can see you begin to smile.
Gotta tell you I freakin’ love this part,
and I’ll probably be here a while.

Kiss and lick ‘round the darker skin,
that surrounds my happy place.
The side of my tongue on the outside of your lips;
I can’t wait to give you face.

I place myself comfortably on my side,
to avoid a crick in my neck.
And it frees up both of my hands, you see,
I’ll go all out, what the heck!

My lips over yours, my tongue in the middle,
pulling away when I get to your clit.
Don’t get me wrong, I want it too,
but we’ll both have to wait for a bit.

I lick my way up inside your lips,
pulling away at the top, you can bet.
Your hips raise up, and I hear you moan;
uh-uh-uhhh, not yet.

I suck it all into my mouth,
my tongue finally strokes that spot.
But your pleasure lasts only a second;
I’m teasing with all I’ve got.

Okay, okay, I’ll give in,
before our pleasure turns to sorrow.
But try to hold out a little longer this time;
I’d like to finish up sometime tomorrow.
 
I'll present this one to Wifey right before our date. Wish me luck! ;)


The alarm is set, the kids are in bed,
time to lock the bedroom door.
Can I at least turn on the closet light,
so I don’t lip-skid on the floor?

Okay, okay, you got me;
of course I can see the way.
But c’mon Baby, you know me,
I like to look at you when we play.

I’ve made us a pallet on the floor;
got a blindfold in my hand.
Don’t want you to know where I’m going next,
on my way to the promised land.

We laugh together and cuddle;
the foreplay’s always sweet.
My heart leaps up into my throat
every single time our lips meet.

I kiss my way to that shiver spot
right beneath your ear.
Run my hands along that fantastic bod;
you’re all goose-bumpy, Dear.

I kiss my way down to your breasts,
kissing around, but not on your nips.
You’ve taught me how to tease you,
thanks for the helpful tips.

Kiss, nibble, lick down your body,
several stops along the way.
I’m in no hurry to get there,
frankly, I could do this all day.

I’m finally where you want me to be;
I can see you begin to smile.
Gotta tell you I freakin’ love this part,
and I’ll probably be here a while.

Kiss and lick ‘round the darker skin,
that surrounds my happy place.
The side of my tongue on the outside of your lips;
I can’t wait to give you face.

I place myself comfortably on my side,
to avoid a crick in my neck.
And it frees up both of my hands, you see,
I’ll go all out, what the heck!

My lips over yours, my tongue in the middle,
pulling away when I get to your clit.
Don’t get me wrong, I want it too,
but we’ll both have to wait for a bit.

I lick my way up inside your lips,
pulling away at the top, you can bet.
Your hips raise up, and I hear you moan;
uh-uh-uhhh, not yet.

I suck it all into my mouth,
my tongue finally strokes that spot.
But your pleasure lasts only a second;
I’m teasing with all I’ve got.

Okay, okay, I’ll give in,
before our pleasure turns to sorrow.
But try to hold out a little longer this time;
I’d like to finish up sometime tomorrow.

You're gettin laid tonight!!!
 
I'll present this one to Wifey right before our date. Wish me luck! ;)

I’m finally where you want me to be;
I can see you begin to smile.
Gotta tell you I freakin’ love this part,
and I’ll probably be here a while.

^^This^^ so cute..
 
If you can't tell from the pieces I've written, I've never really had the desire or aptitude to write erotic poetry. It's nit really my taste. Bit that piece you out up on YouTube was solid BMF. And it benefitted completely from being spoken, as opposed to read. Good shit. And thanks for sharing.
 
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