BMF's Urban Hang Suite

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Wait for the ladies to come in and read...I personally cannot concentrate on anything tonight.
 
I think I'm crazy.







When I felt your heat, I knew
when I felt your heart beat, I knew
When I felt the pain, I knew.
It was all a dream, a fantasy, a nightmare
I hope you think of me often
knowing you lost me
means I won.
 
I think I'm crazy.







When I felt your heat, I knew
when I felt your heart beat, I knew
When I felt the pain, I knew.
It was all a dream, a fantasy, a nightmare
I hope you think of me often
knowing you lost me
means I won.


LOL!!!!
 
I don't deserve you, I wanna be there for you, Someone you can come to, Swirling shades of blue, Slow dance in your eyes, The sun kisses the earth goodnight, You are a masterpiece so Beautiful, I hear the whispered words, I say them back to you, These simple words there are only three, But they make perfect sense to me, I feel you flowing through my viens, In the Air I am breathing, I am alive, and holding on to what I am feeling,The warmth of your embrace, The light in my life, Take my hand I give it to you forever, A world without you, would be like a world without poetry, So tonight on this falling star, I make wish to Start everyday with your face
 
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Lots of good writing energy here. :)

BMF - I think recording some of your poems is a great idea. Hearing the author's inflection can bring so much to a form that relies on rhythm and image.

Happy Saturday!
 
Lots of good writing energy here. :)

BMF - I think recording some of your poems is a great idea. Hearing the author's inflection can bring so much to a form that relies on rhythm and image.

Happy Saturday!

I'm always happy to see you stop in. I recorded one last night. Happy Saturday to you too, beauty.
 
Why thank you, for both of those compliments.

Are you (did you?) post it on Lit or elsewhere?

I'm mailing it to those who are interested. If the feedback is good, ill use a media share and post it. Interested?
 
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