BMF's Urban Hang Suite

Status
Not open for further replies.
That stuff is genius!! Please tell Nat, from me, that those sonnets are the real deal. I love reading them. I enjoyed those immensely. He can state your corner, but no funny stuff...ok...some, but not all the time. Damn.:D

:) Not all the time, eh? hmmm, ok :D:kiss:
 
Untitled

I see eyes wet, tears free flowing.
You just can't forget
All the hate that life's showing.
Then he came along, fresh smile on his face
Promising to sing a new song.
Wrong.
Now, you find yourself,
Pieces all scattered.
Can't remember when
Being you even mattered.
So tired of actors, pretenders, and fakers.
Hope takers, dream breakers.
You're slowly shutting down.

So, you just can't believe that I'm not like that.
That I'm not that cat
Who's gonna be that foul.
Now,
I won't promise that ill heal your wounds,
But with my love I'll soothe
The pain will leave you soon.
I find your scars to be beautiful,
They tell a life of living, and not afraid of love.
And girl, I'm speaking of
The kind of love that scrubs away
All of your old decay.

I'd like a chance
To put you on display.
To show the world your shine
Not keep you locked away.
I need a moment to relax your mind.
Let's sneak away and find
Who you used to be.
Won't try to change, but rearrange your world
Give you a new reality
Make you my favorite girl.
Complete the renovations
Rebuild your life
Then things will be alright.

This is simply incredible. Thank You... *S*
 
"Untitled"

Hands trembling, voice caught, full of doubt in my mind
Wanting to make this worth it, don't wanna be wasting your time.
Don't wanna disappoint, don't wanna leave this time lacking
Wanting to just makes this special, because you're attracting.
You catch my eyes, smiling softly then approach me slow
It's as if you know,
But how could you know?
Then the music starts slowly, we embrace, quiet still
Huddled closely together, slowly getting a feel
Slowly transitioning that what was fantasy could now be so real.
With my arms around your waist, I notice how well you fit..
I close my eyes and sniff slight, hoping you don't notice it.
Your fragrance feeds my drunken revelry like nothing before
And so I squeeze you more
As we glide while crossing the floor.
Your breath on my neck hypnotizes
The look in your eyes is desirous
Should I make the first move or should I hang back?
Every nerve in my body urges me to attack.
Hands clasped, in unison moving as in a trance
Making our way tentatively through our first dance.
 
Hands trembling, voice caught, full of doubt in my mind
Wanting to make this worth it, don't wanna be wasting your time.
Don't wanna disappoint, don't wanna leave this time lacking
Wanting to just makes this special, because you're attracting.
You catch my eyes, smiling softly then approach me slow
It's as if you know,
But how could you know?
Then the music starts slowly, we embrace, quiet still
Huddled closely together, slowly getting a feel
Slowly transitioning that what was fantasy could now be so real.
With my arms around your waist, I notice how well you fit..
I close my eyes and sniff slight, hoping you don't notice it.
Your fragrance feeds my drunken revelry like nothing before
And so I squeeze you more
As we glide while crossing the floor.
Your breath on my neck hypnotizes
The look in your eyes is desirous
Should I make the first move or should I hang back?
Every nerve in my body urges me to attack.
Hands clasped, in unison moving as in a trance
Making our way tentatively through our first dance.

that's beautiful
 
*carries in my hot rod & Tele, plugs in, taps the mic......*

How 'bout a little muzak....:cool:
 
You could come over in the corner with us if you want...but I don't make any guarantees on what you will or won't see :D

Oh geez....pls tell me you all haven't already started the tomfoolery and pda. Smh.
 
Dim lit corner, you say?!

*makes her way to the table in the back, sneaking shy, curious glances over at Kendra*



I'll have what Kendra's having! ;)

*pours shot of whateverthehell Kendra is drinking* enjoy yourself, sweetheart. Watch out for the man wearing the bikini.
 
fine..ignore me.

:(

*actually out for the night..but that poem really was great.
 
Status
Not open for further replies.
Back
Top