Editor Wanted for Nonhuman (Sasquatch) Story

[Miss_Misaki]

Hiya. Well, it's been a long time since I've authored a story for this place, but I took a little time over my last business trip to write a little piece during the brief snatches of time I had in my hotel room. I was staying in Colorado Springs at the time, and I was inspired by the Rockies and the strange tales of Sasquatch-like creatures that people had reported in the mountains. That being said, here are a few tidbits about my story:

Title:
The Sasquatch and His New Mate

Synopsis:
Inga has always been drawn to places of wild, natural beauty wholly cut off from the rest of civilization. During her college's summer holidays she decides to go on a long hiking/camping trip out in the Rocky Mountains of Colorado and experience the beauty and grandeur therein. What she finds there is a world of pristine beauty, fascinating wildlife, and unpredictable weather - that and one other thing that she didn't exactly plan for, that is. When you're alone in the woods and something sets its sights on you, it might make you rethink your preferences regarding isolation and seclusion.

If you're interested in providing your services, I'd welcome a PM from you stating so. I will warn you that although this story will fall under the category of NonHuman when I submit it to Literotica, it could just as easily fall under the category of Nonconsent. Thank you for reading, and thanks in advance for replying!

 

[Drenkara]

Tense

Just my personal opinion. Not only are stories written in present tense difficult to read, they are difficult to edit as well.

 

[Miss_Misaki]

Just my personal opinion. Not only are stories written in present tense difficult to read, they are difficult to edit as well.

Sorry for giving you the wrong impression. This story is written in past tense; I simply wrote the synopsis in present tense. Here's the first paragraph, if that'll help:

The Sasquatch and His New Mate

Inga drew in a deep breath and then slowly released it again, savoring the fresh, oak- and pine-scented air. This was already proving to be one of the most wonderful forays into the American wilderness that she'd ever had, and she intended to enjoy every subsequent moment of it. She was glad she had chosen the Colorado Rockies as her current plunge into the unpopulated reaches of the country of her mother's birth. So far she had experienced extreme weather, exciting wildlife, and the most beautiful landscapes she'd ever found in the mainland United States. The Rockies were wonderful.

I won't deny that there might be a few past-perfect bits in it too as the characters recollect certain events from their pasts, though. :3

 

[Miss_Misaki]

Thanks for viewing, everyone! I have an editor now, so this request thread is officially closed. Have a lovely day!