Newest chapter of Sweet Maggie has posted -- feedback please

[LaJovena]

Chapter 7 of Sweet Maggie has posted, and, as always, I am looking for constructive criticism! Here is the link:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=375548

If you like it (or if you hate it, I suppose!) please give it a vote. I'm getting a lot of views, and a few good private comments, but only a few votes.

I am trying to move all the chapters from Incest/Taboo to Novels & Novellas. I followed the instructions in the FAQ, but for some reason, Lit didn't move the old chapters over to the new category. I'm still trying....

At any rate, I hope you enjoy!

LaJ

 

[The_Fractal_King]

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=375548
You have to cut and paste from the URL bar at the top of your browser.


Incest doesn't interest me in any special way but the writing is solid and the characters are round. There's a bit of melodrama but nothing too bad.

I'm not sure why you want this moved to Novel/Novellas. You're less likely to pick up new readers or browsers over there. Length isn't really an issue unless you're going for a lot of long chapters.

 

[LaJovena]

Thanks for the correction. I fixed the original message.

 

[LaJovena]

I'm beginning to suspect that you may be right. At any rate, Lit didn't move the previous chapters, so I'm not sure they would move chapter 7 over to Incest. I suppose I'll eventually try it anyway.

Thanks for reading chapter 7, btw.

LaJ

 

[IrezumiKiss]

Chapter 7 of Sweet Maggie has posted, and, as always, I am looking for constructive criticism! Here is the link:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=375548

If you like it (or if you hate it, I suppose!) please give it a vote. I'm getting a lot of views, and a few good private comments, but only a few votes.

I am trying to move all the chapters from Incest/Taboo to Novels & Novellas. I followed the instructions in the FAQ, but for some reason, Lit didn't move the old chapters over to the new category. I'm still trying....

At any rate, I hope you enjoy!

LaJ

I just started your Sweet Maggie series thanks to this thread, and it's very stimulating. I appreciate well-written erotica regardless, but none more than well-written incest erotica because of the stigma and the ease of which it can be written badly, which just contributes to the stigma. You have a good series here, can't wait to continue reading it!