9 Stone Cum Queens Thread

[9StoneCumQueen]

Sorry changed my mind, moderator can delete if necessary.

Forums! there's always someone taking s*** far too seriously.

 

[MarshAlien]

Discuss my stories here if you like.

If I feel I can, I will respond.

Love 9StoneCumQueen

If we like? You mean like a book club? Or more like "talk amongst yourselves; I'll drop in from time to time."

Actually, we here in the SFF like to discuss stories not for our own selfish purposes, but because the author's post suggests that she wants some feedback on the stories, usually in order to improve her writing. I'm not getting that here. But I could be wrong. I've been wrong before.

Discuss my being wrong before amongst yourselves as well.

P.S. Do you know Sarahhh? I'm just asking because of the descriptions of the stories. I'm sure you'll do very well here at Lit!

 

[TDJ69]

first time here

Sorry changed my mind, moderator can delete if necessary.

Forums! there's always someone taking s*** far too seriously.

Hi 9STONE. I LUV YOUR stories

 

[TDJ69]

Hi 9STONE. I LUV YOUR stories

guess you are not here((
your stories remind me(a too conservative married girl) of my fantasies

 

[TDJ69]

guess you are not here((
your stories remind me(a too conservative married girl) of my fantasies

i emailed you earlier - jdtebay@hotmail.com (jo)

 

[manyeyedhydra]

Sorry changed my mind, moderator can delete if necessary.

Forums! there's always someone taking s*** far too seriously.

Shame, thought this might happen when I saw the original post. Coming in like that is always going to raise up the red flag

For what it's worth I like the stories. I think you've got a good, crisp style that contrasts really well with the delectably filthy goings on. The repeated lines between stories work well and I like the variation you used with the doctor paragraph this time.

Keep up at this rate and I'm sure you'll build up a legion of adoring (perhaps too adoring ) fans in no time at all.

 

[bi_janice]

Your writing is far and away the best I've read here in ages (if not ever). The style beautifully matches the content - as does the disdain shown to critics and fans alike. Wish I could treat my men like this!

 

[James_Random_LDN]

Narrative Structure and its affects on Anal Fucking

Just a quick note to say your stories are by far in a way the best encountered by this critic on Literotica. This may be considered damming with faint praise based on the general “and then I done fucked her pussy” efforts but there you have it anyway.

In fact your style reminds me a bit of Kenneth Tynan’s diaries, worth picking up for the emphysema sex if nothing else.

I am especially enjoying the disjointed temporal structure, though I feel this may constrict you in the longer term. However having read them I suspect that the limiting effects of your chosen style/structure are:

A: the point
B: Arbitrary limitations are the fun bit, what is the point of unfocused writing or fucking?

I am finding them extremely funny though; they are supposed to be funny aren’t they? right?

There you are then

J

p.s odd to see someone who also goes to HDIF, I think of you visually as the woman I have printed on my laminated card. Perhaps I will see you shuddering along to Camera Obscura one night.