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[ADirtyPerv]

Thing 1 riding the antler while Sister takes it in the keister.

Yep, that's the one. Now, before I go letting any more horrors out into the world, I'm gonna go shoot this plot bunny in the head.

 

[cw5523729]

Yep, that's the one. Now, before I go letting any more horrors out into the world, I'm gonna go shoot this plot bunny in the head.

Oh great, now we just threw in snuff

 

[ADirtyPerv]

Oh great, now we just threw in snuff

The anthro wolfman Max fucking the corpse of the plot bunny wherein he becomes an anthro wolfman. Very... Chuck Tingle.

 

[Kelliezgirl]

Does non-human Trump IT?
Asking for a friend.

 

[cw5523729]

Does non-human Trump IT?
Asking for a friend.

Are we saying that Trump isn't human? Take it to the politics board! We're busy discussing Dr. Suess porn here.

 

[ADirtyPerv]

Does non-human Trump IT?
Asking for a friend.

Lmao.

I did an Eldritch horror thing, it was very much I/T. At least the way I wrote it. YMMV. I would ask, as the thrusting is happening (assuming a dick is involved and goes in a hole), is it the relationship of the dick to the fucked, or is it the furriness of the dick in the fucked that is the focal point?

 

[Kelliezgirl]

Lmao.

I did an Eldritch horror thing, it was very much I/T. At least the way I wrote it. YMMV. I would ask, as the thrusting is happening (assuming a dick is involved and goes in a hole), is it the relationship of the dick to the fucked, or is it the furriness of the dick in the fucked that is the focal point?

That's one of those "center of the tootsie pop" questions...

 

[ADirtyPerv]

That's one of those "center of the tootsie pop" questions...

Big, hairy, wolfy brother-cocks do it for plenty of people, for sure.

Hello, plot bunny. Le sigh.

 

[dad_icarus]

That's one of those "center of the tootsie pop" questions...

I never made it without biting.

 

[Kelliezgirl]

I never made it without biting.

That's what she said?

 

[TheExperimentalist]

What the fuck happened to my sweet, innocent thread?

 

[dad_icarus]

Lit Happens

 

[TheExperimentalist]

Lit Happens

Is that a reply, or a new writing gem to get the conversation back on track? Cause it could be either.

 

[dad_icarus]

Is that a reply, or a new writing gem to get the conversation back on track? Cause it could be either.

Por que no los dos?

 

[dad_icarus]

Lit Happens

I suddenly feel like this should be stitched on a throw pillow

 

[ADirtyPerv]

I suddenly feel like this should be stitched on a throw pillow

With the iconic Literotica babe in the bottom right corner. And then list that on the Literotica store. Infinite $$ glitch.

 

[dad_icarus]

Just dashing off a wee drabble that popped in my head, T/I is on the menu.
...

I hesitate at her waistband, and suddenly I'm thinking of the piano I was always forbidden to touch, Mother's gracefully curvaceous baby grand. I remember her fingers caressing and pounding the keys, the same fingers now urging my hand to proceed. My erection throbs as I recall her toned legs under the keyboard, nylon-stockinged feet working the pedals, the same lovely legs so invitingly parted for me.

 

[TheExperimentalist]

Just dashing off a wee drabble that popped in my head, T/I is on the menu.
...

I hesitate at her waistband, and suddenly I'm thinking of the piano I was always forbidden to touch, Mother's gracefully curvaceous baby grand. I remember her fingers caressing and pounding the keys, the same fingers now urging my hand to proceed. My erection throbs as I recall her toned legs under the keyboard, nylon-stockinged feet working the pedals, the same lovely legs so invitingly parted for me.

Fuck, I wish I could write that intricately. I feel like I'm kinda shit at similes, analogies, parallels, etc.

I'm still at the point where I just got excited that I figured out to replace "in" with "amidst" in the following sentence, and debated whether it was even "exciting enough" to post here. (Spoiler Alert: It's not, but I'm doing so anyway to highlight how far behind I'm feeling right now):

They descended the stairs amidst a cascade of discarded clothing and footwear, giggling and shedding their remaining garments.

 

[ADirtyPerv]

They descended the stairs amidst a cascade of discarded clothing and footwear, giggling and shedding their remaining garments.

I kinda prefer "in" there. "Amidst" feels like the cascade is coming from somewhere else, raining down on them from on high. I would also go with "as they shed" in place of "and shedding". It links back to the cascade, whereas "and shedding" sounds like they're standing in a cascade of clothing from on high while they undressed.

Edit: in context, the way it was written was perfectly fine.

 

[dad_icarus]

As always, style is an aesthetic choice, but sometimes simple, repetitive phrases are the most effective.

 

[ADirtyPerv]

As always, style is an aesthetic choice, but sometimes simple, repetitive phrases are the most effective.

Right. This. @TheExperimentalist take my post above as just an expression of my preference.

 

[TheExperimentalist]

I kinda prefer "in" there. "Amidst" feels like the cascade is coming from somewhere else, raining down on them from on high. I would also go with "as they shed" in place of "and shedding". It links back to the cascade, whereas "and shedding" sounds like they're standing in a cascade of clothing from on high while they undressed.

So there's some context lacking that I don't know whether it'll affect your opinion or not (totally legit if still not). They began their encounter on the hallway floor at the top of the stairs, and are both already half naked (her top, his pants and shoes, if it matters). My intention is that they've knocked the already discarded clothes down the stairs alongside them as they stood to head down to the couch instead (though that isn't spelled out). So in a sense, 'the cascade' IS coming from somewhere else, and is a completely separate group from 'their remaining garments'.

 

[ADirtyPerv]

So there's some context lacking that I don't know whether it'll affect your opinion or not (totally legit if still not). They began their encounter on the hallway floor at the top of the stairs, and are both already half naked (her top, his pants and shoes, if it matters). My intention is that they've knocked the already discarded clothes down the stairs alongside them as they stood to head down to the couch instead (though that isn't spelled out). So in a sense, 'the cascade' IS coming from somewhere else, and is a completely separate group from 'their remaining garments'.

Got it. That makes sense, it is literally from on high. Amidst works great there, then. Or amid, depending on if you're being purple in your prose.

 

[AG31]

I kinda prefer "in" there. "Amidst" feels like the cascade is coming from somewhere else, raining down on them from on high. I would also go with "as they shed" in place of "and shedding". It links back to the cascade, whereas "and shedding" sounds like they're standing in a cascade of clothing from on high while they undressed.

I like amidst. @TheExperimentalist

 

[TheExperimentalist]

Got it. That makes sense, it is literally from on high. Amidst works great there, then. Or amid, depending on if you're being purple in your prose.

Wait, which one is more purple?