A third tentacle chapter?

[sirhugs]

Here's owe Violet Loves Her Tentacle Monster Ch. 2 (Pammie finds tentacle love too) (not posted yet) ends:

Slowly, Pammie collected herself, twisting her head to give Violet a deep kiss, tongue twisting. Then Pammie came up for air, her head on Violet’s shoulder, her lips to Violet’s ear.

“I love you, and I love your tentacle monster too. I wish I could stay here forever so I can use the shower every day.”

“But you’d still need to fuck Ralph once in a while to get him to give us more ED pills to prime the drain.”

“I can do that. It would be worth it to make love to you and your monster all the time.”

“You, me, and the tentacle monster. Together forever.”
My editor thinks it begs for a chapter 3, but my muse isn't musing (yet).

My editor's suggestions for chapter 3 ideas:

This chapter seems to scream for a Part 3. Unresolved issues being the boyfriend, how to keep up the pill supply, and what kind of relationship the two gals will have going forward.

Maybe the boyfriend needs to meet the TM?

What do you think?

(Ralph, Pammie's bf is on screen in Chapter One, but merely mentioned in Chapter two, where Pammie decides she might rather be a lesbian, and is at least bi- or does she love the TM the most?
If you want to know more, you can read Chapter One here

 

[NuclearFairy]

What you've posted here does seem like it could be a final conclusion to the story, or a hook to another...

If it were me and I really wanted to make a third chapter.... I might have Ralph get suspicious and sneak around spying on the women. Make the beginning at least of the story be a bit of a voyeur story. But he can never get the full picture and the curiosity is driving him nuts, so he sneaks into the bathroom one day and tries these pills.

 

[sirhugs]

What you've posted here does seem like it could be a final conclusion to the story, or a hook to another...

If it were me and I really wanted to make a third chapter.... I might have Ralph get suspicious and sneak around spying on the women. Make the beginning at least of the story be a bit of a voyeur story. But he can never get the full picture and the curiosity is driving him nuts, so he sneaks into the bathroom one day and tries these pills.

But alas, in the first chapter, Ralph has a threesome with Violet and Pammie in the shower as a reward for providing ED pills. He and Pammie leave before the TM is roused and aroused. In chapter 2, Pammie comes to Violet's by herself with more pills. Not specified whether she stole them from Ralph or got them in trade for a bj or such. The story turns on a lesbian scene that morphs into a threesome with the TM.

 

[NuclearFairy]

I need to get around to reading more.

 

[sirhugs]

But alas, in the first chapter, Ralph has a threesome with Violet and Pammie in the shower as a reward for providing ED pills. He and Pammie leave before the TM is roused and aroused. In chapter 2, Pammie comes to Violet's by herself with more pills. Not specified whether she stole them from Ralph or got them in trade for a bj or such. The story turns on a lesbian scene that morphs into a threesome with the TM.

just how much variety can you put into tentacle sex? I've now done four stories with that theme and already feel like I'm repeating myself.

I suppose that I could have Ralph tied up and stuck in the shower to be used by the TM- but would that be rape if he liked it?

Or the TM could capture Ralph in its tentacles and the gals could use Ralph as they wish... ending with a tentacle probing Ralph's prostate, triggering his climax*... the spunk flows down the drain, feeding the monster.

* one of my favourite, overused tropes... see almost any of my stories. Also, back when sex and ejaculation were part of my life, one of my favourite real life ways to come, especially for a second time. TMI?

 

[Carnevil9]

just how much variety can you put into tentacle sex? I've now done four stories with that theme and already feel like I'm repeating myself.

I suppose that I could have Ralph tied up and stuck in the shower to be used by the TM- but would that be rape if he liked it?

Or the TM could capture Ralph in its tentacles and the gals could use Ralph as they wish... ending with a tentacle probing Ralph's prostate, triggering his climax*... the spunk flows down the drain, feeding the monster.

* one of my favourite, overused tropes... see almost any of my stories. Also, back when sex and ejaculation were part of my life, one of my favourite real life ways to come, especially for a second time. TMI?

Having Ralph be anally penetrated (consensually or otherwise) will of course have to be a part of his experience, but by no means all of it. I'll bet those tentacles could give a hell of a "handjob." And the suckers could give a good version of a blowjob. For all we know one of the tentacles could have an organ that makes an excellent facsimile of a pussy. I have a scene in "The Mermaid" where the mermaid's tongue turns into a cluster of tentacles that give the human main character one helluva great orgasm.

 

[sirhugs]

Chapter 2 is now up if you care to take a look and see if it suggests any sequel ideas.

 

[000zing]

Sorry, definitely not going to read any tentacle monster story which hasn't also got at least an Upper and Lower Earth, assorted hobgoblins, broomsticks and Kaptin Krock riding to the rescue on the Star-dinghy Enterprise, blazers fasting.

Now there's a story designed to convince the critical and discriminating Literotica readership...

 

[KimAwakened]

Sorry, definitely not going to read any tentacle monster story which hasn't also got at least an Upper and Lower Earth, assorted hobgoblins, broomsticks and Kaptin Krock riding to the rescue on the Star-dinghy Enterprise, blazers fasting.

Now there's a story designed to convince the critical and discriminating Literotica readership...

Someone here should have been on the stage. PM sent.

 

[000zing]

Someone here should have been on the stage. PM sent.

What a career lost to me... but then they would insist on my bringing my own mop and bucket.