Is there a sequel here?

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I still am in love with Cassie, the entirely fictional MFC in my Not Another Loving Wives Tale! and its sequel Not Another Tentacle Monster Story!, but I just can't figure out where to go with another story starring Cassie.
The obvious choice is to have Cassie hook up with Jim, the guy whose tentacle monster turns her on to nonhuman sex, but in spite of writing that story for LW, I think Cassie fucking the monsters is enough extra-marital sex. Or am I wrong?
Suggestions welcomed, but fair warning, I will only be able to use them if they excite me.

 

[Rob_Royale]

Let me skim over those and I'll let you know. I just got an idea.

 

[Rob_Royale]

Yep, definitely a third part there and it needs one.

The monster at Jims, IS Jim. Or at least part of him. After his wife left, he had a close encounter and as a result is no longer fully human.

With Cassie in his home all he could think about was how he had listened to his best friend and Cassie make love when they had visited, just as Cassie was doing. While he was showering at the same time as Cassie from the other bathroom, his other half made it's way through the plumbing to Cassie and had it's way with her. Jim felt all of it.

Back at home what the tentacle had left in her did gestate in the pipes. After their first encounter in Part 2, it escapes the plumbing and merges with the husband, making him just like Jim.

The baby? It's part of all of them, Cassie, Jim, hubby and the alien. But they won't know that until the boy becomes an adult.

This twist makes the first part belong in LW because she actaully had fucked Jim and Part 2, belong in NonHuman.

 

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Gotta let that simmer for a while before I taste it.

 

[Rob_Royale]

Gotta let that simmer for a while before I taste it.

Thoughts?

 

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Thoughts?

I've been busy with ch 3 of My Father's Secretary & parked an aide memoire about the psychotherapist.

This idea & the "other" tentacle story (Violet Loves Her Tentacle Monster potential ch 3) are still parked. I still have a concern that if I try to many tentacle stories they will become self parodies or self plagiarism. focusing elsewhere for a bit will cleanse my palate, see what is really tasty.

 

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Story 193 is submitted, one more in progress. If I stop at 200 stories, only a few spaces for further ideas.
still in love with Cassie. Not sure why, as she is a totally fictional creation (unlike many of my heroines who have inspiration from RL friends, acquaintances, lovers). but, it is what it is.
I respect Carney's ideas a lot, but the "Jim is really a tentacle monster" angle has not rang my bell yet (who knows, if I have a dull weekend after the world series, and no better idea, I might try it).

Still looking for a fresh idea.

 

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Was thinking about the titles, the "Not Another..."
how about "Not Another Incest Story!" ?
I have written more than my fair share of incest takes (mostly dad/daughterish).
the trouble with that is - who does Cassie have incest with? Sister/sister is something I've done only as past of a family plot. Lesbian scenes always seem a bit forced for me to write. Though I've done it. As recently as including bits in my most recent stories.
Sister/brother is not my thing (I wrote one, don't ask me why- it was a long time ago).
If the setting was to be the shower so that the tentacle monster appears, how would Cassie get her father in the shower with her?

Well, at least the brain is ticking. Like a bomb.

 

[Rob_Royale]

The pregnancy complicates this a bit now. You included it and now you have to go somewhere with it. Unless you can tweak it so that she is not pregnant with a human baby, but rather a 'tentacle thing' and she uses that during incest with a family member. I'm thinking her mom-in-law who has come over to enjoy the news. I don't remember enough from the second part to carve a perfect puzzle piece here.