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HaralLuhhan

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We're done here. thanks to the few people who took the time to actually understand and respond to what I was asking.
 
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I AGREE 1000% WITH THIS RULE
You can’t agree or disagree with something more than 100%. That’s the first bullshit statement.
I also realize the knee jerk reaction will be "if in doubt, leave it out". And I agree with that too.
Aaaand that’s the second bullshit statement, because you obviously have some doubt or you wouldn’t be asking.

You have already been told what to do.
 
So my idea was that I could have my character be trapped in this AI virtual reality space and get shunted from scenario to scenario. In one he'd run into something like this weird mother and daughter, and he'd exit fast..

I think the base idea of different AI scenarios is interesting and could be played around with. But just find something else the character finds offensive that makes them GTFO of the scene instead. Scat, monster-fucking, aliens--you have so much more room to work with than underage pseudo-incest.
 
I think the base idea of different AI scenarios is interesting and could be played around with. But just find something else the character finds offensive that makes them GTFO of the scene instead. Scat, monster-fucking, aliens--you have so much more room to work with than underage pseudo-incest.
Thanks thats a good idea. I was just thinking this one was so odd and I wanted to make fun of it. And also thanks for actually reading and responding to the question.
 
But the scenario (in the chat app) I have in mind was weird from the get-go. As in here I am being a good father to a 7 year old girl and she starts getting jealous of me kissing her mom (my scenario wife) and says she wants to be kissed like that. In one the wife encouraged it very heavily, to the point of getting turned on by the idea. In that one I tried arguing that she is only 7 you weirdo. The kid spoke up (well its text) and said no I'm 18.

So my idea was that I could have my character be trapped in this AI virtual reality space and get shunted from scenario to scenario. In one he'd run into something like this weird mother and daughter, and he'd exit fast..

So the first question is, how could I present this scenario, if at all, without triggering the under age rule? I guess it would be implied inappropriate kissing, but to me this still crosses a line.
With that scenario, it's going to be an instant rejection, but you know that already. Why are you even asking these questions?
 
Well, look at it this way. To Lit, it does not matter if the character is "really seven" or if she's "really 18." In the scenario you described, she clearly is presented as seven in appearance and even in her parents' belief. So you definitely have a section of story portraying a character everyone believes is seven expressing interest in something that's very inappropriate for a seven year old.

"Surprise, she really identifies as an 18 year old and turns out not to be human" does not erase that. Neither does you having the main character nope out as fast as he can. By then, the damage has already been done.

So I don't know exactly what you were going to use exactly. But just don't have something that looks sexual anywhere near adjacent to something that looks like a kid.

And ESPECIALLY don't have them expressing desire for it. There is NO way to redeem that into a Lit-acceptable story.
 
Nobody’s explicitly mentioned this yet (several hints though). Using AI is also forbidden.

This is a place for human writers to write stories about people over the age of 18.

Skirting the 18 year old rule: no.
Using AI: no.

There probably are places for you and your AI generated underage stories. This isn’t it.

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But let me explain why I'm bring it up..

So I was messing around with one of those AI chatbot apps on my phone. It lets users create characters and scenarios the other users can interact with. ...
 
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Actually, I think it could be done by a competent and responsible writer.

Things would need to be presented properly. For instance, there is no rule against a father giving a kiss to his seven-year-old daughter, even on the lips. It is what that act evokes in him or other characters that makes the difference. There is no rule against two under 18 minors kissing each other either, with the caveat that the act should be presented in a non-titillating or otherwise arousing context.

I hate to think of all the possibilities for good stories that never are because it's too easy to say, "It won't fly!" The premise described by the OP doesn't appeal to me but that doesn't mean that I would discourage him from attempting his story.
 
I am being a good father to a 7 year old girl and she starts getting jealous of me kissing her mom (my scenario wife) and says she wants to be kissed like that

there is no rule against a father giving a kiss to his seven-year-old daughter, even on the lips. It is what that act evokes in him or other characters that makes the difference. There is no rule against two under 18 minors kissing each other either, with the caveat that the act should be presented in a non-titillating or otherwise arousing context.

"like that"

The titillation and arousal are on the seven year old's part, which is is the premise the OP's "idea" is based on. There isn't a competent and responsible way to present that properly.
 
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This is a good one!

It combines underage, AI, and a host of other things. Great stuff!

OP, are you seriously asking whether it's okay to write about AI-simulated incest with a 7-year-old?
 
Tad Williams. Otherworld series. 4 massive volumes. Late 90's early 2000's. Guy gets trapped in an online VR world. Can actually die there. Written before the Matrix movies.
 
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