Comments That Make Your Day

[Five_Inch_Heels]

Reconciliation At All Costs.

 

[MillieDynamite]

Ah, loving wives!

Reconciliation At All Costs.

 

[ICantLeafYou]

This isn't new, but I was going through comments on Missed The Bus and saw it. What a feeling reading that.

The pace, the writing, have an urgency and sensuality that fits the subject perfectly.

 

[Actingup]

This made me smile again. This fellow keeps rereading my story, Pretty Please and leaving more critique each time. I really love that the work seems to warrant repeated readings for some people, at least.

by ToughSailor on 02/20/2024
Nice story, however I usually don't do nudism as the lynch pin for any story, but in this case OK...Liked the lack of vulgarity...The Romanian words got to be kind of a speed bump to smooth reading...Thankfully you used the correct word "supine" where appropriate rather than "prone"...Now, with the introduction of Adriana, Trish, Coral and AJ there tended to become too many protagonists in a story with out a DP . . . .

by ToughSailor on 11/14/2024
Second reading.
"A tall, lean, and tanned, older man clad only in a blue Speedo..." - Yech. Only faggots and swim teams wear Speedos - The use of the "Pretty please" requirement seems to be rather puerile whereas a simple yes would suffice - You just about lost me when you devolved into the Dom/Sub scenario as that's not what I look for in this incest category - Previous comments still apply . . . .

by ToughSailor on 4 hours ago
Third reading with an additional thought about a missing opportunity while Kayla was being punished. Since Mark, AJ and Tim were all involved she should have been given a DP as a minimum or ideally been made airtight.

Gay hate, pedantry, and instructions to the author - you can keep this guy!

 

[SimonDoom]

I received two comments a few hours ago, each one to a different mom-son story of mine, and they perfectly illustrate the immense diversity of the incest/taboo readership:

Just incredible. The thought made us hot and both of us love reading it together and my older partner and I enact it too. Waiting for the second part.

Fucking the preacher ruined the story, Mom is just another cheating slut because of it. -3 stars, 2/5

The positive comment, by the way, was from anonymous, while the negative one was not.

 

[MelissaBaby]

Can't do much better than this. On Abby and the Outlaws





The paragraph cited:

Let me start out by sayin' that I did not smother Roy Henderson with a pillow. That was some malarkey his old battle axe of a wife made up because she couldn't stand the notion that her whore mongerin' son of a bitch husband met his maker while some young gal was ridin' his pole. It was just my poor fortune to be the gal ridin' it.

 

[SissyBrandi19]

I was called a "perfect little cum dump"...teared up there, a bit...comments like that are why I wake up in the morning...well, not at HOME, mind you...usually some bed or...floor...I'll know where I am once I get outside - probably...then can Uber it home...but I look so slutty and used, it's funny...either the Uber driver cancels the ride outright OR...I ride free but suck his cock. It's one or the other, I rarely pay!

 

[SmilingLez]

The comments I received for my prose - Femme and the Fist (my ode to Mickey Spillane challenge) - blew my mind.

https://www.literotica.com/p/femme-and-the-fist

Mine was the only prose. This acknowledgement allowed me to step outside of my poetry/prose safe space and write my first story, in my style, which was posted today.

https://www.literotica.com/s/fragments-first-love

 

[MelissaBaby]

I'm always particularly gratified to receive positive comments from fellow authors, so a big thanks to Gamblinluck for his comment on Lake Effect




And to iwatchus for his on The Gold Dollar Girls

 

[iwatchus]

I was talking to my SO at dinner tonight about Gold Dollar Girls. My SO was laughing at me because I had to set the story down numerous times and walk away for a minute because it was upsetting me. Because I was so vested in the characters and the shit that life kept throwing at them. It has sat even better today than I felt about it when I finished. Thank you again for gifting us this one.

 

[MelissaBaby]

I was talking to my SO at dinner tonight about Gold Dollar Girls. My SO was laughing at me because I had to set the story down numerous times and walk away for a minute because it was upsetting me. Because I was so vested in the characters and the shit that life kept throwing at them. It has sat even better today than I felt about it when I finished. Thank you again for gifting us this one.

I really appreciate that. Don't forget, there are three sequels, all of which I would describe as more lighthearted.

 

[iwatchus]

I had not noticed there were sequels. I will add them on to my reading list. Thanks for letting me know.

I recognized the quote with the discussion with the lawyer you had posted in a thread at some point. I really liked it in context.

Right now, I am both trying to read through all the stories self nominated as author's bests. It has been a VERY good list overall. Of course, I did sort the authors I know I like or wanted to read to near the top and I am about to run out of those. But here's to discovering new authors unknown to me.

 

[MelissaBaby]

I had not noticed there were sequels. I will add them on to my reading list. Thanks for letting me know.

I recognized the quote with the discussion with the lawyer you had posted in a thread at some point. I really liked it in context.

Right now, I am both trying to read through all the stories self nominated as author's bests. It has been a VERY good list overall. Of course, I did sort the authors I know I like or wanted to read to near the top and I am about to run out of those. But here's to discovering new authors unknown to me.

The Gold Dollar Girls Return is about the club reopening after Covid.

The Gold Dollar Girls: Lady's Night just what it sounds like, a women-only night at the strip club.

White Castle Christmas, which I am proud to say won the Readers Choice Award for Best Humor and Satire Story of 2021

 

[TheLobster]

Happy for you but please mind where you're aiming.

 

[ICantLeafYou]

What a compliment! I've been writing male [solo and gay] erotica for almost 20 years, it really feels like that experience has paid off when I get comments like this.

 

[AnnieLit]

I checked the profile when it first changed. It appears he/she is doing something fairly common here. Fed up with TROLLS that Lit makes no effort to contain they head to Amazon to take the checks instead of the insults.
I liked the stories too but see the profile has now been deleted.

I may be making assumptions but that was the impression I got from reading the update.

There is a bit more to that. I stopped posting stories here when I found out that ALL my Lit stories are being sold on Amazon by somebody else! Contacted Amazon and they did NOTHING. Had to create an Amazon account under this name and upload the stories there. So now there are at least two copies of exactly the same content with exactly the same titles, but different authors. Oh, well. As far as I know, if one first publishes on Amazon, their work is a bit more protected. Though given that most of if us don't write under our real names we are not going to file law suits to enforce the copyright issues.

 

[dirk2024]

I just received a nice comment on my new Summertime story - The Love Yacht
As my first time posting in the Romance category, his comment gave me something to learn from. I hadn't considered the need to 'lose the girl'.

Good luck in the contest. This story gets a 5 from me. I enjoyed the story but I thought that it all happened too quickly and easily for a romance story. You pretty much told us that Chad was a prick and had something in mind, so any drama in his effort was lessened. Romance has at least one tried and true formula. 'Boy gets girl, boy loses girl, boy gets girl back.'

The romance was fast and the sex was even faster, I am not saying it couldn't or wouldn't happen. I just think a little bump in the road to love would have drawn in the interest of the reader a little more. As I said, I vote 5 stars.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

While looking for something else, I happened to rediscover this gem.


"You killed a beautiful story! I've read hundreds of stories on here and that is the absolute worst ending I've ever read."

 

[Actingup]

I wrote a brother/sister incest story for Summer Lovin', which was well outside my comfort zone. I tried to write it as a semi-realistic romance within the limitations of the category: semi-realistic because although some very sad things happen during the story, I avoided most of the trauma often associated with real-world incest. It felt like it was an tricky path to tread. Anyway... so far the commenters have understood what I was trying to do (samples below), and I really appreciate that - all the feedback has been thoughtful so far, and that's the bit that particularly makes my day. I don't where Angry from Anonymous has gone, but perhaps they took the day off from moderating that queue...

@Grumpy1973
Well crafted, touching, intimate, but sad story. I did enjoy reading it.

@SouthernCrossfire
Well-told tale that did a nice job with explaining the cringier elements and dealing with the aftermath and potential issues. There’s good emotion here despite knowing that there shouldn’t be THAT type.

@oldpantythief
What a nice but sad story. (Spoiler deleted), but this is probably more realistic then the fantasy of them living happily ever after. I did Google the Holden Sandman, not a bad looking truck. Thanks for the story.

@APilgrimSquare
Beautifully written. "Memories" should have given it away, but I didn't expect to feel things!
And now I'm listening to AC/DC...

@Voyeurkenneth
Wow, incredibly emotional story. Sad to think of all the tragedy Sam had to endure... But on the brighter side, good to see that he's lived an otherwise enriching life. I like the reflective tone of the piece; feels like a wistful memoir. It felt odd getting aroused by the bits I found the most erotic, namely the trips abroad and the secret fun before the wedding, considering the mood the rest of the story put me in. But in the end, I like that you kept it all fairly grounded tone-wise. Eyes got watery! Well done, AU

And in Forums:
@lc69hunter
BTW, just read the story you published today. Normally outside my wheelhouse, but the title sucked me in. I considered it a love story. Gave you a 5.

@HannahBaird
It was truly beautiful. I was touched by it in the best way. A stark and moving contrast compared to my own relentlessly grim themes. But seriously, it was one of the few "incest" themed narratives that took itself seriously, and explored discomfort, but also connection in a meaningful way. Also, Australia, which is always an added bonus!

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

So, pretty much every comment as a reason to make a promotion post.

Gotcha.

 

[THBGato]

So, pretty much every comment as a reason to make a promotion post.

Gotcha.

And why not? Nobody else is going to plug your work for you (unless you are Penny Thompson, in which case several of us will. Have you read her latest yet? https://www.literotica.com/s/dandelion-greene-and-the-witch-of-watson-county - it's bloody brilliant. You can feel the heat come of the page, and smell the superstition.)

 

[MelissaBaby]

So, pretty much every comment as a reason to make a promotion post.

Gotcha.

The thread title is not "Best Comments" or "Favorite Comments," it's "Comments That Make Your Day."

Sometimes, just getting a comment makes your day.

 

[Actingup]

And why not? Nobody else is going to plug your work for you (unless you are Penny Thompson, in which case several of us will. Have you read her latest yet? https://www.literotica.com/s/dandelion-greene-and-the-witch-of-watson-county - it's bloody brilliant. You can feel the heat come of the page, and smell the superstition.)

They added an extra vial of pure imagination to the vat when they made Penny.

 

[PennyThompson]

And why not? Nobody else is going to plug your work for you (unless you are Penny Thompson, in which case several of us will. Have you read her latest yet? https://www.literotica.com/s/dandelion-greene-and-the-witch-of-watson-county - it's bloody brilliant. You can feel the heat come of the page, and smell the superstition.)

They added an extra vial of pure imagination to the vat when they made Penny.

STOPP

(You're both terrible, I love you)

 

[PennyThompson]

Some really lovely comments on Dandelion Greene so far, a few that stood out to me and really made my day (well, two days, one yesterday and two this morning)

@Eosphorus made me absolutely glow with this one:

I’m always amazed by your virtuosity. You did everything right: The tone, the voice, the plot, even the name of the narrator. You also succeeded in capturing the essence of the authors you mentioned. Bradbury, in particular.

Your stories are always so smart and I often have to pause to look up things (which is awesome). I had never heard of a Hidebehind or a Buck Moon, for example. And I wound up going down a rabbit hole about Magic Lanterns.

On a side note, your works have pushed me to improve my own writing. Thanks for this masterwork of a story, Penny! It was marvelous.

@PapaRomantic gave me the kind of comment that I think I love the most out of all kinds of feedback, the "It's not my thing, but..."

So let me first admit that your story is not my cup of tea.

That being said...I could not stop reading it. Your command of the language of the time is excellent, and the tale your mind has given is us strangely bizarre and heartwarming all at the same time. In my mind, only the talents of an excellent writer could accomplish what you have done.

Speaking of Harper Lee...as I read, I could not help but think that Dandelion Greene is the mature version of Scout Finch. If that was your intention, than well done! If not, that makes it even more incredible to me!

And @Nightaelf left one that was short but incredibly encouraging of the writing objectives I was trying to accomplish!

What a wonderful and fun story to read. Also quite a bit suspenseful and a little creepy. And honestly, I laughed so hard at that part about the Kellogg’s flyer. Brilliant idea. Truly a great story.