Stepdaughter Fills In

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HUzzah! Write that story!

doing my best. Trying to beat the health challenges

 

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2700+ words, and going...

 

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doing my best. Trying to beat the health challenges

There's a hidden asterisk with my support:

*Take the time you need. Never at the expense of your private life or health.

 

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There's a hidden asterisk with my support:

*Take the time you need. Never at the expense of your private life or health.

working on it

 

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first draft done... not yet sure about the ending... as it sits, just over 3000 words...

 

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Chapter 3 has been submitted- I decided to have the stepdaughter fill in hostessing the poker night.

 

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Chapter 3 has been submitted- I decided to have the stepdaughter fill in hostessing the poker night.

Well done! Hope you liked writing it and the response is positive.

 

[KimAwakened]

If putting a story to bed at a certain point seems natural then that's what you should do rather than draw things out UNnaturally and inflict yawns on your readership.

Maybe it's the short story lover in me which is speaking but I have never seen any mileage in taking things beyond that 'point', no matter how much further potential there might be in characters and situation.

You always have the option to pen a follow up/sequel if you wish to explore whatever you think might be missing.

 

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Chapter 3 (the poker party) is now posted.
Now thinking about ch 4. Thinking stepdaughter brings over a friend, but not sure how that is filling in.
Another possibility is it is Dad that goes on a trip, and stepdaughter has to fill in for him with Mom. But I always find lesbian sex challenging.
Or stepdaughter could bring a bf over for Mom, but how is that "filling in"?